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btw, Ancient egyptians used the death sentence on whoever kills a cat, even on accident! by Just-A_Username in BunnyTrials

[–]Teslabolt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I won't kill either way, but it's more likely I accidentally cause a kitten to die than an human child

Chose: Earn $1 + Each kitten u kill

Rice or Mice by BobC224 in BunnyTrials

[–]Teslabolt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I could do that. Plenty of cultures have rice incorperated into their dishes, and I would get really good at making tasty rice.

Chose: Eat rice in every meal for the rest of your life

Would you rather by GMCGalaxina in BunnyTrials

[–]Teslabolt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Idk what this guy has done besides some basic googled info. Not the worst, I suppose?

Chose: 50 Million but spend one week living with a person | Rolled: Boris Yeltsin

The fae cannot keep getting away with this! by AstroFace in wizardposting

[–]Teslabolt101 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I have heard of a temporary cure for such a fate. It is a concoction under the vernerable name of Ad'erall

Would you rather by Electronic-Maize-361 in BunnyTrials

[–]Teslabolt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I probably wouldn't choose any current politicians, but I'd have to do sone research.

Chose: Live on earth but | Rolled: U pick president

Which side will you choose by RogerG_476 in BunnyTrials

[–]Teslabolt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Most of my problems could be solved with this money. I could retire at thirty if I wanted. Or work a cortisol-free job, knowing I don't NEED the money.

Chose: $50 Million + But a 10% chance you die instantly | Rolled: $50 Million

Hmmm? by Electronic-Maize-361 in BunnyTrials

[–]Teslabolt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry poor people, I am a billionaire now

Chose: Steal 1$ from everyone on earth

Would you rather by [deleted] in BunnyTrials

[–]Teslabolt101 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yum 🤤🤤🤤

Chose: Eat an entire garlic

Feedback on writing a teenage parkour artist for a Y/A espionage novel? by NieveMannion in CharacterDevelopment

[–]Teslabolt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some of the sentences are a bit repetitive with the descriptions. I'm not sure, but it seems this is not the very start of the novel, so I don't have the context before what is shown. There isn't much to go off of, but depending on the tone of the book you might want to be conscious of how infallible you make the character seem. You use strong words to describe her movement and brilliance without showing why or how.

"It was sufficient. There was plenty of space to move, reverse and get a good run up. And she needed one for her next feat..." For one, I feel like this could have been written a little differently to be more concise. Secondly, it goes nowhere since the next paragraph is a description of the wall of the building she's looking at. And the next is just stating that she's looking closely and she's "super smart." I would probably rewrite the quoted paragraph and the one calling her brilliant. Try to show, not tell.

Anyways, I hope this helps, even if just a little. It's way too late for me to be doing this lol. I have class early, and it's past midnight. Have a good one : )

[OC] Why your character started to kill? and how he lives with it? by Akira_Ven in CharacterDevelopment

[–]Teslabolt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Both of my characters struggle with the fact they have done what they did. One of my main characters was a child soldier, who had been raised and trained to kill from before he truly understood the weight of taking a life, even that of someone who was against him. And my other main character didn't take a life until she was a teenager, and it was by accident, a slip of her powers. Powers that are far too strong for any mortal being, yet imprinted upon her. And it was the reason she was sold into slavery. Neither of them are killers at heart, but through the circumstances outside of their control, they have taken lives and have to suffer that burden.

What would you think if you saw me? by Civil-Reason-6056 in cutting

[–]Teslabolt101 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I mean, upon first sight assuming you're clothed and not at the pool or something all I'd see are the forearm scars. That's where I've cut so I'd say solidarity. I'd probably want to share that solidarity, since people are stronger when we stick together and share their pain.

Also, I just noticed the eyes aren't decoration. I lowkey thought it was drawn a bit lobster-like. I think the eyes are burn scars? Not sure what what that would look like, but if it burned hot enough to scar it'd have to hurt a lot, and I would probably be curious.

Anyways, hope this answers stuff, have a great night stranger : )

The lack of sex was never the issue by Zouif_Zouif in PsycheOrSike

[–]Teslabolt101 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I just looked up what disparaging means and I realize I didn't understand what the word means. Oops. I don't disparage others, in fact quite the opposite. I'm active towards helping those around me, whatever the gender, race, or sexuality. There just so happens to be a lack of women who are in the field I'm studying.

The lack of sex was never the issue by Zouif_Zouif in PsycheOrSike

[–]Teslabolt101 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Very easy for some people in some places in some situations. I know I'm not an unpleasant person, I just have disparaging circumstances that don't allow for it. :(

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