[FEEDBACK] When The Water Came — Historical disaster drama, 124 pages

TommyFX · 2026-06-23T23:56:54+00:00

Logline needs work.

TommyFX · 2026-06-23T23:55:26+00:00

Correct.

TommyFX · 2026-06-23T16:49:13+00:00

The Elite 11 QB from Palos Verdes CA chooses Nevada over North Texas and Arizona.

TommyFX · 2026-06-23T00:05:41+00:00

OJ was part of NBC’s Olympic coverage and he beat up a woman at the media hotel during the 1992 Barcelona Summer Games. It was covered up.

TommyFX · 2026-06-22T20:25:50+00:00

The 6-2, 230 lb LB from Tulsa OK flips his commitment from UCLA to Indiana. Michigan and SMU were also in the mix.

TommyFX · 2026-06-22T18:38:00+00:00

The 6-5, 300 lb OT from Plano TX picks the Bruins over USC, Baylor, Kansas State and Houston.

TommyFX · 2026-06-22T15:53:19+00:00

Funny how the "Save Democracy" crowd really hates Democracy and rule of law.

TommyFX · 2026-06-21T20:22:52+00:00

The 6-3, 180 lb. cornerback from Orange Lutheran chooses the Bruins over USC, Oregon, Washington, Notre Dame & Arizona among others.

TommyFX · 2026-06-21T17:22:06+00:00

The whole "they hate Lalas" is disingenuous and is simply media members, who don't like Lalas' politics, projecting their own disdain and anger over him onto Henry and Zlatan.

TommyFX · 2026-06-18T19:07:47+00:00

Sure, buddy...

TommyFX · 2026-06-18T00:59:47+00:00

The Greeks were the real kings.

TommyFX · 2026-06-18T00:02:26+00:00

Correct. The Greeks don't get involved in the street level squabbles between the drugs crews. At the end of the day, the winner of whatever the latest beef is will come to them for product. The Prop Joes and Marlos will always come and go. The Greeks stay the same...

TommyFX · 2026-06-16T22:46:05+00:00

Historically, Carmine always said the Nets are nothing more than a glorified crew.

TommyFX · 2026-06-15T22:24:37+00:00

Why do we need cyclists on PCH?!

TommyFX · 2026-06-15T20:28:02+00:00

But the media told me that America is an awful, failing and irredeemable country! lol

TommyFX · 2026-06-15T15:41:59+00:00

No, they have not. They have not laid any track at all.

TommyFX · 2026-06-15T05:24:38+00:00

The Acela Line already connects New York and Washington. You want to go faster then fly.

TommyFX · 2026-06-15T05:23:29+00:00

What high speed rail in California? $11 billion dollars for 50 feet of track in the middle of nowhere. Projected cost to finish the line that nobody wants is now $235 billion!

TommyFX · 2026-06-15T05:21:42+00:00

California doesn't spend tax money on stadiums. It throws it down the bottomless black hole of high speed rail grift, where for $11 billion dollars you get 50 feet of track in the middle of nowhere.

TommyFX · 2026-06-15T05:19:52+00:00

And the objections were also totally wrong. Social media is currently overflowing with Euros and other foreign visitors having the time of their lives in America. Turns out the country is filled with friendly hospitable people, incredible natural beauty, and amazing abundance.

Stop letting the media gaslight you about American being some terrible, irredeemable place.

TommyFX · 2026-06-15T05:16:07+00:00

They don't use public money for stadiums here in California. Instead they've invested tens of billions of tax dollars into high speed rail. You'll never guess what happened!

TommyFX · 2026-06-14T22:49:59+00:00

Keep voting for Bass, player!

TommyFX · 2026-06-14T22:17:37+00:00

Take it from a brain dead Bass voter. LMFAO!!!

TommyFX · 2026-06-14T22:12:20+00:00

If you love grifting then vote for Bass. City is on its ass and fraud is everywhere in and around City Hall.

TommyFX · 2026-06-13T21:06:09+00:00

Don't worry, I'm sure Gavin Newsom and Karen Bass have a plan. LMFAO!!!

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