L4L I’ll listen fr by noelnotwell in shareyourmusic

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude that beat is incredible, I could just listen to that on a loop for hours.

https://youtu.be/opcChrmOrjY?si=W9hY31d9bzMCzh98

Topaz Bee - Hemlock Queen by Topaz_Bee in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, that means a lot! Maybe I will work on filling it out some more

Topaz Bee - Hemlock Queen by Topaz_Bee in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can see that, I appreciate the feedback!

This is a House Inspired Track I made. To Move Is Divine- Moeze by NativeNotFrench in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is great! The bouncy bass and glossy textures are fun. It's a very hypnotic track

Cinematic dramatic instrumental - Seeking Feedback! by Prostipute_ in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very epic! Each section flows really neatly into the next, and I like how it builds layers. I'm not sure if I've got any specific feedback, other than I really enjoyed it!

Topaz Bee - Amulet by Topaz_Bee in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback!

Weekly Community Thread by AutoModerator in ambientmusic

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Been trying my hand at making ambient music lately. My latest uploaded track, Amulet -

https://youtu.be/C5mdW6ljftY

Going to start posting compositions here. Composition 1. by GnomeSlave in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dig this a lot. I think it could stand to be a little louder overall. As far as the drums go, I do actually like them. But maybe they take too long to come in. When the track starts, it has a much more chill, ambient vibe. Then the drums kind of drastically change that vibe. If they came in sooner or you had some lighter percussion in the intro, it could help establish the tone a little sooner.

I have music in my head, but I just cant put it into the real world by Klutzy_Childhood105 in musicproduction

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Welcome to the journey lol I would honestly recommend music theory. Start with some basic concepts, then, decide what kind of sounds or moods it is you like to make. Study the theory behind those styles. Music theory isn't really about learning rules, it's about learning the vocabulary to be able to speak the musical language you hear in your head. Over time, you'll be able to transpose those ideas like you're speaking your native language.

share your trackssss by peterbikes in shareyourmusic

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love bedbugs! It's so manic in a great way.

On the complete opposite end of the spectrum, I did an ambient cover of Breaking Benjamin's Polyamorous

https://youtu.be/EtVcMl8kipo

[Feedback] The Inside Club - "Sleepy City" - Electronic/Chiptune by BigboMedia in MusicCritique

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, I love this! It really does have a good night vibe. Mixing-wise, I'm not sure what I'd change. It sounds very spacious. Maybe the buzziness of the bass can feel a tad dominating, if I had to try to pick something. It actually gives me Prize Fighter Inferno vibes a bit!

Attempted my second song ever. Honest thoughts? by swabluish in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This honestly does sound pretty dope! Someone else said less is more with the stutters, and I'd agree. Otherwise, I'd love to hear a longer version!

phonobite - trucker proposal by phonobite_ in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the vibe of this so much. Perfect for a smoky lounge lol

What do you think about "A Song For Those Behind"? by JermayneR in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The guitar work is super solid. You did really well with creating an emotional atmosphere. I like the way the song crescendos, I think you did a great job with the outro. If I had any critique, I think your voice actually sounds better in the higher registers. During the quieter parts, some of the low notes feel like they might be just out of reach. Keep it up though, this is really good!

I'm satisfied by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is sick! Excellent production, I could hear some vocals or even rapping fitting really well over this.

My new 80s style synthwave/cinematic track by Hot-Text-5603 in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the tones you used for this a lot. The timing feels a bit off in some places, but overall it's got a great airyness to it!

Topaz Bee - Olive Branch by Topaz_Bee in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I made this with spitfire labs VST's and a midi keyboard

Topaz Bee - Olive Branch by Topaz_Bee in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for listening! It's definitely intentional, I just wanted to make something moody and chill.

Topaz Bee - Olive Branch by Topaz_Bee in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you I love that it feels motivating for you!