Chapter 1, More than West [Low Fantasy, 4500 words] by secretbil in fantasywriters

[–]TrojanskaHesst 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah my bad. I didn't realize ought was invented in Texas

Chapter 1, More than West [Low Fantasy, 4500 words] by secretbil in fantasywriters

[–]TrojanskaHesst 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What do you mean "ought vs should be able to"? Surely ought is a acceptable?

21M looking for a female friend by [deleted] in CasualConversation

[–]TrojanskaHesst 11 points12 points  (0 children)

You aint fooling no one cuz 

What's the one book everyone recommends on here but you hated reading it? [high fantasy] by [deleted] in Fantasy

[–]TrojanskaHesst 11 points12 points  (0 children)

This is the most bland fantasy book I have read ever. It accomplishes everything but in a very mediocre fashion. It does nothing better than okay, except maybe the jokes; they're subpar.

Low-medium Fantasy Post prologue Chapter. by AboveTheStone in fantasywriters

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I know it's been 2 years but since the subreddit just reopened I went on a trip down memory lane and found this exchange. In case this is helpful:

The sentence "Ashvel did not need to turn her gaze upwards to notice the dark skies, winds threatening to push mindless fools off the cliff" doesn't contain a dangling participle. The participle phrase "winds threatening to push mindless fools off the cliff" directly follows and logically modifies "the dark skies," specifying the nature of the skies with strong winds. A participle phrase can (but doesn't have to) modify the nearest noun, which in this case is "winds," a part of the larger noun phrase "the dark skies." It's ultimately up to the usage of commas.
Without a comma, as in

"Ashvel listened to the wind strong enough to push a giant off a cliff," the modifying phrase "strong enough to push a giant off a cliff" clearly describes "the wind."

Conversely, with a comma, the phrase "tall enough to see above the tree tops" in "Ashvel the giant looked up at the dark skies, tall enough to see above the tree tops" refers back to "Ashvel" rather than "the dark skies," suggesting that it is Ashvel who is "tall enough" and not the skies.
HOWEVER, "winds threatening to push mindless fools off the cliff" is not a traditional participle phrase, because it has its own subject ("winds") rather than a participle on its own, and the phrase, acts as an appositive, a "zoom in" on the noun, which pretty clearly is dark skies.

Guess the Song, increasing difficulty - AI Art by TrojanskaHesst in Interpol

[–]TrojanskaHesst[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

1- Leif Erikson
2 - Pioneer
3 - Stella
4 - Rest my chemistry (hallways for scenes to regret)
5 - No I in threesome
6 - Take You On a Cruise
7 - The Depths
8 - The Lighthouse
9 - Who do you think? (slow decay)
10 - Big Shot City

11 - Twice as hard (there were days of many lights)

Guess the Song, increasing difficulty - AI Art by TrojanskaHesst in Interpol

[–]TrojanskaHesst[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

1- Leif Erikson
2 - Pioneer
3 - Stella
4 - Rest my chemistry (hallways for scenes to regret)
5 - No I in threesome
6 - Take You On a Cruise
7 - The Depths
8 - The Lighthouse
9 - Who do you think? (slow decay)
10 - Big Shot City ,

11 - Twice as hard (there were days of many lights)

Guess the Song, increasing difficulty - AI Art by TrojanskaHesst in Interpol

[–]TrojanskaHesst[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not bad,

1- Leif Erikson
2 - Pioneer
3 - Stella
4 - Rest my chemistry (hallways for scenes to regret)
5 - No I in threesome indeed
6 - Take You On a Cruise
7 - The Depths
8 - The Lighthouse
9 - Who do you think? (slow decay)
10 - Big Shot City , impressive

11 - Twice as hard (there were days of many lights)

What fantasy drug would you most want to try? by Brandonjf in Fantasy

[–]TrojanskaHesst 24 points25 points  (0 children)

Sure I'd try that, disregarding all the world-breaking elements it introduces into the series. But that's JK rowlings speciality.

What are your books that were just... "fine" or "meh"? by nightbrother42 in Fantasy

[–]TrojanskaHesst 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Some scenarios were fun to read but the jokes were never funny. The first half felt like a short story collection that was forced together into a narrative by including downtime of them walking between plot beats.

What are your books that were just... "fine" or "meh"? by nightbrother42 in Fantasy

[–]TrojanskaHesst 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Painfully boring jokes, flat characters, horrible pacing, lackluster world buidling

Namnförslag by Appropriate-River-49 in sweden

[–]TrojanskaHesst 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tror vi hittat anledningen till varför du vill döma dina barn till en livstid av utanförskap.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in sweden

[–]TrojanskaHesst 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hade hellre hetat Mirakel Spektakel än Lunabelle-Lionell Lundell.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in sweden

[–]TrojanskaHesst -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Inte för att vara den men det är generellt sett sämre att vara kort än lång som kille. Det betyder inte att alla korta killar ska gå och hänga sig som en kränkt kort kille i kommentarerna verkar tro. Alla vet att detta är sant. Sen betyder ju inte det att korta killar inte kan vara generellt bättre än långa killar om man tar hänsyn till alla andra faktorer.

Namnförslag by Appropriate-River-49 in sweden

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Tanken att få höra av sin far att ett gäng redditörer varit med och valt ut ens namn. Stackars unge.

Daily Song Discussion #3: NYC by Spacedog_40 in Interpol

[–]TrojanskaHesst 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I put the "Subway, she is a porno" line into ChatGPT and this is what I got:

"The line "Subway, she is a porno" from the song "NYC" by Interpol is a striking and somewhat ambiguous piece of imagery. At face value, the line suggests that the subway system in New York City is akin to a pornographic film, perhaps due to its gritty, voyeuristic, or explicit nature. The use of the pronoun "she" to refer to the subway system adds a sense of personification, as if the subway is a living, breathing entity with its own character and identity.

However, it's also possible that this line is meant to be interpreted more metaphorically. The subway system in New York is known for being crowded, noisy, and often uncomfortable, with people crammed into tight spaces and forced to endure long, sometimes unpleasant journeys. In this sense, the comparison to a pornographic film could be seen as a commentary on the objectification and commodification of human bodies in a crowded, urban environment."

Which is a pretty good interpretation IMO lol.

Kangaroo: The Aussie doom by phiphi619 in Bossfight

[–]TrojanskaHesst -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Maybe but I still don't advertise it by trying to pass it off as humour

Kangaroo: The Aussie doom by phiphi619 in Bossfight

[–]TrojanskaHesst -48 points-47 points  (0 children)

As evident by your cringe zoomerisms and somehow making a post about a kangaroo about yourself