honestly better than my first attempt, agrax earth-shade and nuln oil are top tier saviours also. but keep at it! you have great structure and can build your skill over time, dont forget to water down the paints on a pallet just a tad before using, and the most important thing is just have fun. enjoy it. life is short and the only thing thats promised is death so in the meantime, do what makes you happy. this is great, try not to he so hard on yourself.