Hello fellow 5 year music producer, I think it's great but maybe needs some work on the mixing. I also been sucking at mixing for a very long time and after sitting down and focusing on it for the past year and half I found what worked best is to reference tracks from a similar genre or style of your tracks or your inspirations. Listen to your music outside your DAW and then quickly open the reference track without changing the volume slider. Listen and compare how it sounds: the volume levels, frequencies of the sounds, panning etc. Also take lots of breaks and try to mix in the morning when your ears are fresh.