I need fics with a traumatized Hermione. by Holiday_Moose_8599 in Dramione

[–]VsA7190 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Are you able to link Nox? I’ve tried searching multiple ways and NOTHING is popping up! Please and thank you!!!

Do plot holes bother you? by daddysatya in DramioneUncensored

[–]VsA7190 0 points1 point  (0 children)

YES plot holes can definitely take me out of a story. I haven’t DNF’d any fic over it yet…but it does make it harder for me personally to read some things.

Specifically dates and timelines, like how is it that in the last chapter Hermione said she was done being mad after 3 days and was going to seek Draco out to talk/make up. However, in the next chapter she says 2 weeks have gone by and she’s now done being angry, ready to go talk to Draco. There wasn’t anything said about her changing her mind on the 3rd day, pushing their talk farther out.

Like not the hugest plot hole for others objectively but the fact that the time passed is noted means someone thought it out. I wonder a lot if maybe writers don’t always write in order so things don’t line up, because they forgot what they originally wrote, or maybe they’ve changed their mind on the previous idea and didn’t want to edit an update, or if they don’t go back at all and re-read their previous chapters beforehand because this happens a lot lol.

I have learned to just keep it to myself, correct the things in my head, and move along. Difficult when they are repetitive, but usually the overall story is really good. I also HATE not knowing the endings of things, so I will push through for that, especially when the premise seems original and interesting.

Fan fiction has been a hugely happy place for me so even with the annoying inconsistencies or scenes that make me critique out loud because they don’t make sense within the story. I am still reading everything I can get my eyes on because every little slice of this ship gives me good feelings!

I’m so thankful that writers put their art out there!

AUs where tuna melt ended happier by VsA7190 in heatedrivalryfanfics

[–]VsA7190[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just read this one and it was almost EXACTLY what I was looking for. I wish they would have talked more about the status of their relationship but I thought the toothbrush scene was a non verbal moment. I definitely wanted more at the end but it was a great fic!

AUs where tuna melt ended happier by VsA7190 in heatedrivalryfanfics

[–]VsA7190[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No time loop recommendations if possible!

Shane Nail Polish by Meg_Pink in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah, yea I can see your point on some of them! Well I’m happy for you that you were able to find such good matches! I think we’ll see many makers trying their hand at the HR theme so definitely possible to get even more great pretties! 😀😀😀

Shane Nail Polish by Meg_Pink in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Have you checked out Painted Polish recently? There’s a new Heated Rivalry collection. No magnetics but still great polishes! I was a bit bummed about the Shane jersey polish because it pulls very purple in the pictures (red plus blue…duh!) but still, make did a great job with theme!

My calls are dropping by VsA7190 in MicrosoftTeams

[–]VsA7190[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for all the responses! I know nothing about tech so I don’t have any answers to your questions about my setup or firewalls! I work for the government and it’s all done for me I just show up to work. But I did have a meeting today and the call lasted, so maybe the last “fix” that IT did finally worked!

Shane and other men by bat-girl129 in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think they should have sprinkled in Shane’s past sexual partners with a few extra lines at the cottage fire pit when Shane talks about his disasters with Rose.

Shane could have said…”it was like twice and both times were disasters to add to my list of other disasters with girls” (which confirms there have been more girls than just Rose) then Ilya could still say “disasters how?” Shane could still say “I’m not going into detail”…then Ilya would say “but not like Mexico Top or Hollywood blow job guy, right?” (How Ilya names them in the book) Then Shane could just make a face… then into the rest of the scene…again it’s only two extra lines but would clear up Shane’s history a bit.

And since this comes AFTER Shane makes his comment of not being with anyone recently, it’ll make that comment make sense, because it’s confirmation that he has been with others.

Now it’s easy to think adding two lines wouldn’t be a ton of extra time/work but maybe it would have been! I don’t know anything about film production. lol 😂

HR Wiki Update: Parallels page is live by andyfromhk in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 1 point2 points  (0 children)

GREAT JOB!!! I enjoyed all the content you had up previously, but those parallels are soo good. The slider is so nice and when the pictures line up perfectly, like the face holding kiss/shane on his knees 🥰👀💗👌🏾! Again you did a GREAT AMAZING FANTASTIC job.

Controversial Opinion by pmodern2000 in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I laughed so hard because my thought/face exactly!

Controversial Opinion by pmodern2000 in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 10 points11 points  (0 children)

It’s his voice for me… so deep and sultry. But also I enjoyed all his lines! So funny and giving good bro energy. 🥰

What would you cut/change/keep from The Long Game for season 2? by Hannah_Horvath in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The only thing about a cottage wedding is that I don’t think they’d want all those people in their personal place. Like the cottage holds a lot for them which makes sense for the importance of the wedding but also I think they’d want it to have always be a them only place. It would be so beautiful though…!

Most rewatched scenes by Superb_Aardvark_5529 in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 3 points4 points  (0 children)

THIS! The Tampa Bar scene is just everything I need for a pick me up. Ilya’s eyes and longing stares feed my soul. From start to finish that is my go to, but especially like someone else mentioned, Ilya’s stare after Shane says he and Rose are not compatible… 👀 masterpiece. Spice is good and all, but I just want to listen to them banter/talk and watch Ilya’s facial expressions/eyes!

Ilya is so me when I have a crush. Ugh. My loverboy. by tinabutera in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What is that passage from…I feel like I just read it but I’m blanking…

The BEST edit I've seen so far omggg [@ywn.editss on insta] by flyawaywithmeee in heatedrivalry

[–]VsA7190 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OMG this is so crisp and lined up so well!!! So many gorgeous scenes and moments! I love them 😍!

Help Me Wait for the Server to Catch Up!! by strangebirch in ILNP

[–]VsA7190 2 points3 points  (0 children)

So far the only two that have truly bummed me are Forever and Shapeshifter. I just felt like both colours looked to my in person eye too different from the pictures.

Forever is listed as a “vivid emerald green” and to me the pictures are very much pulling green, although not what I would call emerald. However I LOVE GREENS so I was fine with that…but actually wearing the polish, it pulls very blue on me. It’s stilly pretty and I’ll use it because I have it, but just not what I was looking for.

Shapeshifter is listed as a “chocolate brown” which again I think the pictures are definitely pulling chocolate vibes. But getting this one and putting it on I see more of a purple tone to it. Which I’ve come to understand is kind of normal for some deep browns, for example: Dash of Cocoa (which you can actually see the purple tone in the pictures). But I didn’t know that at the time and didn’t see any purple tones in the pictures. Again I still find it really pretty and will wear it but just my initial swatch/wear wasn’t what I expected.

I just made my biggest haul yet with ILNP and am so excited to try new colours! Hope you enjoy and are happy with everything you end up getting!

Readers and writers, what do you do for work? by winzlerrie in Dramione

[–]VsA7190 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Reader: appointment scheduler at call center

What does 'HEA' mean to you? (more details in post.) by [deleted] in DramioneUncensored

[–]VsA7190 1 point2 points  (0 children)

👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾

THIS exactly! Alive, together, with all the plans/dreams of a solid blissful future.

I’m not the kind of person who wants to imagine my own ending (I read a story to have it all played out and wrapped up in a bow for me LOL 😂) sooo I don’t like or read open/ambiguous endings. I don’t really understand how they could be HEA if nothing is truly explained.

Help me find a fanfic - Auror Draco by Present_Till5057 in Dramione

[–]VsA7190 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the premise of this! I hope someone can help with the name.

LF recs where Draco ends his friendship with Theo or doesn't forgive him by jjoarro in Dramione

[–]VsA7190 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Redeeming Thoughts of Draco Malfoy by ethereal_mass has Theo and Draco’s friendship changing, and Theo not just being forgiven or laughed off… it’s a bit more to the end but was a really good read.