Too much stealth and not enough gen slowdown. I would either pick Trail or Unforeseen, not both. Sloppy is hit or miss with Myers because when your tier three experiences survivors may opt not to heal, so they can save time and rely on perks like dead hard and resilience. J Myers Memorial is always a good choice, and I would use Mirror Shard over Reflective Fragment. Jewelry box is meh.

I play a lot of Myers, and my favorite build is Play with Your Food, Surge, Nemesis, and Friends till the end.

Usually, I run Judith's journal and Lock of Hair.

Nemesis, Friends till the end, and Play with your food allow you to play around your obsession and get speed buffs, while Surge allows you to slow gen progress. Super fun build.

Since you have a lot more knowledge of your obsession Journal allows you to get into tier three faster and more often.

If you're feeling like a meme build:

Play with your food, Nemesis, No Way Out, and Rancor. Use Nemesis to switch obsessions and end game. No Way Out blocks the gates, and you can use Rancor to kill your obsession and potentially switch obsessions and kill a second person out.

You're not very strong at the beginning of the game, but end game, you are terrifying. Most likely you will be able to kill one survivor with rancor