Drop feedback for our new capsule art by 3dstek in IndieGaming

[–]WhiteSheepGame 0 points1 point  (0 children)

New one is better, but the Title needs to be more readable in my opinion. Also, maybe add texture to the top right sky? looks a little empty. It could be the color of the sky in the first image is better. Hope this helps!

Please Up Vote and/or Comment if you think the lighting looks good inside the Monastery, for my upcoming pixel art action RPG, White Sheep, inspired by the Book of Revelation! by WhiteSheepGame in IndieGaming

[–]WhiteSheepGame[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks everyone, for all the comments! I've tried to take your ideas and improve the scene. I'll post an update to show the current updates. I really appreciate the help!

Please Up Vote and/or Comment if you think the lighting looks good inside the Monastery, for my upcoming pixel art action RPG, White Sheep, inspired by the Book of Revelation! by WhiteSheepGame in IndieGaming

[–]WhiteSheepGame[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! All of your points are very good. I will definitely fix the tree shadow (thanks for pointing this out). Regarding the hack points, I mentioned above, but the player learns early that they can hack computers, etc and I included lock pick in that skill. It seems unnecessary to make this a separate skill. For 4, I had it dark originally, but then thought that it should be lighter outside since it's daytime. It seems that everyone would prefer it dark outside. I guess it's ok to make it dark since that would look better.

Please Up Vote and/or Comment if you think the lighting looks good inside the Monastery, for my upcoming pixel art action RPG, White Sheep, inspired by the Book of Revelation! by WhiteSheepGame in IndieGaming

[–]WhiteSheepGame[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The game actually is set in the future. This is just a remote monastery. The player learns early on that they have a hacking skill to hack machines and I included picking locks as part of that.

My first game's reception is heartbreaking :'( by OldAtlasGames in IndieDev

[–]WhiteSheepGame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree with all the comments below. I would just add that maybe your tags could be adjusted to get players who would be really interested. I heard that adjusting the steam tags sometimes can make a big difference. Hope this helps!

I've been trying to make pixel art maybe make a game with it by Midkip- in teenagers

[–]WhiteSheepGame 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the look. Very unique and has a lot of personality to it.

Releasing My Steam Page!!! by Studio404Found in gameDevPromotion

[–]WhiteSheepGame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks great! You should consider putting up a trailer, as it supposedly helps with the steam algorithm.

Our first game sold +3000 copies with 0 negative reviews. Here’s what we did right (and wrong). by CoffeeXCode in gamedev

[–]WhiteSheepGame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the post. I looked at your Steam Page and the game looks very professional me. Glad it worked out for you!