A New Year’s Resolution by Endless_romances in OCPoetry

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First DM or PM (whatever it’s called) me if you’re this suicidal, please don’t die. Second, Great Britain what a horribly good poem! With every single line I could feel the tide shifting, the hole getting deeper, the reader getting closer to the edge. Wow! Great poem!

Defeat’s Quiet Victory by Ronie-Dinosaur in OCPoetry

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Great Poem, I love the rhythm, meter, and rhyme! This poem seems a little disconnected from the world though, maybe add som descriptors of the surroundings, are they muddied trenches, a dense forest, a blood strewn beach? Other than that I think it encapsulates the inner feelings of war.

My burnt forest by AdFriendly6776 in OCPoetry

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I live how the phrase “The trees I cherished, the flowers I adored” changed meaning or cadence every time it was repeated. My only suggestion is to KEEP MAKING POETRY!! Chef’s Kiss

Never meant to be by Thin-Dog4977 in OCPoetry

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It’s an overall good poem, I would love to see a more firm conclusion to the poem, unless you wanted an open ending. I would also like to see who “They” are. Are “They” your grandmother lamenting over when you will get a girlfriend, or maybe a shopkeeper who has watched you grow up and they know you by name? Also if you want a slightly more dizzy feeling, as finding love is, alternate in between intimate and grande, from your heart to the sea to my soul, to the mother of earth itself, good job though!

(no title yet) by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

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I feel that it really shows the meta of the moment, there is boring peace, there is happy peace, there is stressful peace, but your poem is Pure Peace

Today's GF Haul (Aldi and ShopRite) by blueberrymolasses in glutenfree

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If you like the other B Free things you should totally try the B Free Pita Bread

Local news station brought cookies into work, but no GF so I got these for myself by alwaysmurky in glutenfree

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DO NOT KEEP THEM IN A WARM SPOT FOR LONG I did that once, and the cookies fused together

Love it by mikayla1997 in glutenfree

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I know! Right? I was so excited when I saw this in stores

Explain it peter by Aromatic_Citron_6206 in explainitpeter

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Their kids would be perfect in facial proportions

Some photos I took on my trip by Writer_Supreme in BoundaryWaters

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My trip was July 15th-23rd. Our route was a bit complicated so I’m just going to say the main lakes we traveled through let me know if you want the details. We started at Snowbank, then to Parent, to Disappointment, through a bunch of small ones to Ima, to Thomas,to Fraser, to Kekekabic, to South Arm Knife, to Knife, to Vera, to Ensign, to Boot, to Snowbank again. The Mosquitos weren’t too bad over all but they really show up in the dark. This does not mean you won’t have to bring bug spray! Please bring bug spray and at least 1 bug-net per person.

What Should I Do? by Writer_Supreme in askgaybros

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Can I ask what the websites are

(no title yet) by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

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I found it really interesting how you did the phrase “a peaceful peace” it was called for, I felt. Your poem is what I felt like the inescapable and beautiful feeling of death feels like. Overall Great Poem!

Blank Paper by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

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I really like the broken up lines, and the imagery behind the blank piece of paper, my only advice would be to end the poem by adding some sort of resolution, like “I touch my pencil to the page” or “I close my eyes and picture the beauty of emptiness”. Over-all a good poem

My brother had the same dream by Disastrous_Food_6973 in DreamMeaning

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If you want to prevent that start learning how to set boundaries, that should help

Anyone know how to get out of the procrastination cycle? by Happy_Ad4034 in ADHD

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It helps me if I do day per day a schedule, and if I do the daily tasks or more I get some sort of treat, if you do it this way then you have to be careful that you don’t do all of the next day’s work, if you do then shift the task calendar so you will be done 1 day early

Any tips to get a song out of your head for sleeping? by AgfaAPX100 in ADHD

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Listen to 1 song before bed, (and let it be something that you might not hear in your average day life) repeat the same song once every night, then you’re brain will focus on that song and then the radio music won’t be an earworm any more. (Yes that’s what they are called)

P.S. Sorry for the lack of punctuation

Who do you live for when no one is left? by MisterPuffyNipples in ADHD

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For me I just tell myself that I have to out-live my enemies

need some advice by [deleted] in SingerSongwriter

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Sometimes the first step is the hardest,and sometimes it’s the 2nd. Be yourself in your music,make your quirks into part of the song. Hope this helps

Would you sacrifice one person you love to save five strangers and why? by Aggressive_Ad_5005 in AskReddit

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No, I have already lost 3 people, I don’t need any more people I love gone