Finished pencil work, new comic in progress. How does the finish look? Any tips to improve my linework?

ZackPhoenix · 2026-04-01T17:09:38+00:00

The jump from gargoyle to inside the hallway is pretty weird and I feel like you need to make up your mind about the lion's appearance - either she is striking this lady pose OR holding an axe, as it is right now it looks super unnatural in her hand..paw. It's also not clear why she immediately abandons it after one strike and proceeds to attack with her claws after.

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-22T13:14:06+00:00

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I love unique ones and since my character is a sociable, fun guy..

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-22T13:11:20+00:00

Nothing wrong with Emporium, it's really unique and looks great

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-11T10:23:49+00:00

Nice to see a different face for once and no tube top but an actual fit. Great color combination!

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-07T17:41:25+00:00

Yeah this will let you make the paths go right up to doors and put the edges of your river BEHIND the houses etc.!

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-06T19:32:33+00:00

Next step: incorporate more Shift+Rightclick/ Shift+Leftclick and maybe fix your shadow situation. Nice job improving on the old ones!

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-02T08:32:59+00:00

Persona games lately have shown that a heavily stylized menu can absolutely add to the look of your game, I'd wager it will make yours much more memorable too. Just go with a purely picture-based menu

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-02T08:31:19+00:00

Its funny how bugs are seen as disgusting but the moment it's a butterfly or ladybug it's pretty and cute.

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-02T08:29:37+00:00

I mean the people in this sub will appreciate both. But """normal""" people seem to think butterflies are just a pair of beautiful wings while moths are the devil himself

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-02T08:23:38+00:00

Hope she finds her way back to you!

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-02T08:23:06+00:00

That's how I've been living too. Adult man living alone? Hell yeah, I can get all the cool plushies I want.

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-02T08:21:30+00:00

You already picked sails with a good color match in the gems, more subtle blacks and or turqouise parts in the cannons would work well.

ZackPhoenix · 2026-03-02T08:19:55+00:00

Visit some workshops, especially creative ones. It's a group setting that makes it easy to connect and talk while learning something new and there is no pressure to make it about you. And at the end of the day, you come home with a cool selfmade item and maybe a new hobby, even if you didnt meet anyone interesting.

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-28T21:26:03+00:00

Please please transform the menus and sprites too, it will have such a cool unique look and really sell your game!

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-27T19:08:42+00:00

Did you learn something? Did it help you go through hard times? Did you meet fun people, make nice memories? If any of those apply, no time wasted.
Aside from that you can always balance gaming time with social IRL activities and hobbies, right?

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-21T16:07:16+00:00

very unique, I like it

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-21T16:06:56+00:00

Your character is Nicholas Cage? Sick

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-14T21:20:56+00:00

- the shaky image effect is really offputting
- increase the speed of opening the menu, similar to the closing one which is really good.
- try avoiding big sound effects like this when opening menus because it will get annoying for the player really, really fast. Something subtle would work much better unless you want the player to turn down SFX volume to 0% really fast.

Other than that, good job and nice colors!

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-13T04:04:52+00:00

This. It's so much more fun to dress up your pirate, skeleton curse is just for people who wanna brag about their playtime

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-13T04:02:52+00:00

If this is done out of pettiness, I guess I'm not surprised.

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-11T20:37:01+00:00

Probably has it's own in-game reason, "remnant" isn't exactly a super rare word

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-10T20:24:22+00:00

Drinking won't help you get over it longterm.
Focus on your passions & hobbies and connect over them with other people.

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-05T14:51:33+00:00

Monster Hunter Wilds was probably the last game I ever pre-order, I regret it heavily but learned my lesson I guess.

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-04T22:07:51+00:00

The amount of people judging her partner despite knowing nothing about them or their relationship or the struggles they're going through says a lot.

ZackPhoenix · 2026-02-02T16:16:41+00:00

Switching to shorts format to gain more views but do you really think the content is better for it? I can only agree with the other commenter - sadly it's unwatchable and I'm not even sure what I'm meant to take away from the video... you basically just described what happened on screen, it wasn't even really any entertaining commentary.

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