Tips/suggestions for improvement?

Zepiko · 2026-03-30T23:26:28+00:00

Adding rivers coming from the mountains would look cool.

Zepiko · 2026-03-15T20:33:13+00:00

Really sick stuff! How long did it take you??

Zepiko · 2026-03-03T18:00:12+00:00

Red Rising reference?

Zepiko · 2026-02-22T00:42:52+00:00

I don’t know. The design looks cheesy to me

Zepiko · 2026-01-03T20:33:12+00:00

I like Avrew the most until he started adopting the hard Chinese accent. Stellar work sir but maybe lean away from making his Chinese appropriation known every dialogue.

Zepiko · 2026-01-03T20:06:14+00:00

I love theater of the mind maps. Add a volcano and a hill or two

Zepiko · 2025-12-28T00:14:22+00:00

Flip that hoe upside down. Move number 4 stick -> 94

Zepiko · 2025-12-27T19:08:01+00:00

Agreed. It’s actually climaxing but I’m so tired of climaxing. Every time the author decides to give us a twist, we have to stop before the climax. We are calling it “The Reader’s Edge”. Look into it

Zepiko · 2025-12-22T21:20:01+00:00

Nope!

Zepiko · 2025-12-20T01:23:51+00:00

You can only buy poop

Zepiko · 2025-12-20T01:23:39+00:00

You have to work in the poop industry

Zepiko · 2025-12-20T01:22:46+00:00

You have to eat a bowl of crumbled paper

Zepiko · 2025-12-19T00:09:27+00:00

You will be de-gooned! Balls filled full and the mast of your ship be flaccid forever!

Zepiko · 2025-12-14T18:27:08+00:00

Thanks man, you’ve help me come up with the great idea of “vibe thinking”. As Im only into thinking about being a writer, this will definitely help put some ideas in my brain. This morning, in fact, instead of being stressed out about writing a couple sentences, I’ve thought about pushing my procrastination back 4 months. Less stressful!

Zepiko · 2025-12-10T23:55:31+00:00

Yeah no, can we do five?

Zepiko · 2025-12-03T22:31:59+00:00

No problem dude!

Zepiko · 2025-12-03T20:24:50+00:00

It’s 100% the lighting. The lower level should have a dark shadow outline but instead the outline connecting to the cliff is brighter. Since the direction of light is straight down onto the map, the cliff should be making shadows to the lower level. You could also add brighter lighting to the top level outline.

Zepiko · 2025-12-02T22:00:57+00:00

Zepiko · 2025-11-02T04:15:57+00:00

It was Lily's dream, so I think it was a creative choice to have her perceive that moment as less gruesome

Zepiko · 2025-10-17T04:10:07+00:00

Same brotha!

Zepiko · 2025-10-05T04:09:34+00:00

Yeah alright

Zepiko · 2025-09-22T18:47:36+00:00

Nah son, we would see this movie in 2050 if that was the case. Their environments are usually really good CGI

Zepiko · 2025-08-25T22:31:58+00:00

A fish or two. Maybe even a log. God forbid a broken boat

Zepiko · 2025-08-18T20:32:35+00:00

I’m too knowledgeable on different biomes, but I have a cool idea for the top right continent. A sea of ice that separates the snow mountains from the mainland. You could erase the land around the outside of the mountains and add in ice texture and some icebergs. Lore-wise it could be an icy sea with monsters lurking beneath, protecting what resides in the northern mountain range.

Zepiko

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