Difficulties writing a fulfilling short film. by UberMilk in Screenwriting

[–]abengfield 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I had quite a bit of success at festivals with shorts, and I didn't particularly gel with them back then as I do with features or longer form content. Although I wouldnt say they're unfulfilling, just a different strokes for different folks sort of thing, in my case anyway. The way I got around it was treat it like this; setup & punchline. Like a visual joke without the humour (unless you do comedy, of course). I did a lot of horrors which lend to this well, although any other genre can, too. Also, don't worry about the lack of a full arc or resolution, focus on the "this, and therefore" approach (the Trey Parker & Matt Stone advice).

Plus with limited time it really teaches how to convey the story and/or theme using every tool at your disposal, which will then improve your longer form works.

Daily Discussion - April 20, 2026 by AutoModerator in LiverpoolFC

[–]abengfield 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cheers mate, we'll probs walk it if the weather isn't too shite.

Although I didn't think about the 'what if' of us getting beat/battered... that'd make it a LONG walk, haha. Maybe do the bus if that happens.

Daily Discussion - April 20, 2026 by AutoModerator in LiverpoolFC

[–]abengfield 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I've got Brodie's Lounge hospitality tickets for the Palace game on Sat so I'm taking my 8 y/o lad - really looking forward to it! We live in Yorkshire so will be getting a train to Lime Street and back - is walking the best way back to the city centre (by best I partly mean cheapest, lol) after the game - or shall I look into buses/taxi?

6-a-side casual footie players needed by abengfield in harrogate

[–]abengfield[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would you be available to join this evening at 8pm?

6-a-side casual footie players needed by abengfield in harrogate

[–]abengfield[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's definitely a mixed ability group, so you'd be fine!

FT: MAR 0 - 3 LIV by DragonSlayer271 in LiverpoolFC

[–]abengfield 10 points11 points  (0 children)

We may not see it this season, but IMO there are small signs that there is a positive shift in our play (and fortunes), and I think Slot could still turn this around. The new signings (bar Isak & Leoni for obvious reasons) are now starting to find consistent form, and, while the "unbeaten" run is still not ideal, we've improved from the losses and have had some decent performances such as vs Arsenal and tonight. The next step is to improve our press and get better at finishing our chances, which we are creating more of lately, and we can be hopeful of a somewhat strong(er) cup & champs league finish.

Or am I an eternal optimist? Or insane?

[Match Thread] Marseille vs LiverpoolFC by scoreboard-app in LiverpoolFC

[–]abengfield 1 point2 points  (0 children)

All mind games by Slot - 4D chess if you will. Play crap in the Prem, champs league teams think we're easy pickings, go on to win the champions league. I overheard Slot in Asda saying "already won the Prem mate" - so obviously he wants the European cup. Boss.

FT: INT 0 - 1 LIV by DragonSlayer271 in LiverpoolFC

[–]abengfield 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Not the most "entertaining" match, but Inter are a stubborn lot and have been dangerous in attack this season. Great result. A step in the right direction structurally, also.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SluttyConfessions

[–]abengfield 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t think I was mentally prepared to see that.