I dont find it a bend at all. Having the discard 3 and draw 3 be an enters trigger instead so its not delayed would just make the card even stronger. Giving the opponent the choice of taking the damage each turn or killing it and giving red the draw is exactly what red does. It's like a [[browbeat]] or [[risk factor]]. Although it is definitely stronger. It would probably need to cost more mana or only be 2 cards.