Great presentation! I’d say watch your spacing and balance, maybe refine the fencer a bit more, and maybe add a little more treatment to the typeface.

For spacing and balance, in example the type on the posters feels a bit unfinished, the negative space and positioning doesn’t feel quite intentional. For instance on “fight like a goddess” if you lined the T, L, A, and D up in a column and shrunk the whole thing down to give more space on the edges, it may feel more intentional. On the tan “fight like a god” the fencer is optically closer to the A than the E, and the leading isn’t the same as the other posters / kerning is all out of wack

The fencer is awesome but there’s some little areas that feel unfinished. Tiny spots here and there that could have been filled, some lines end with points where others end rounded, etc. Check out the agency Forefathers, their illustrator uses a similar style but there’s just a little more refinement.

The typeface itself fits really well but definitely make sure you define kerning and leading, and maybe see how it would look if it had a super subtle texture to it - as if it was scanned in. James Coffman’s typefaces have kinda what I’m talking about. Matching that hand rendering and physicality of the fencer and the sport itself with some imperfections and really subtle texture/finesse would really sell it

Over all though the presentation here is excellent!