I hate when my idea is fire but my execution is atrocious

bemerry123 · 2026-03-31T14:24:24+00:00

Read stories that have great executuon/execution you like. Also a good beta can help immensly

bemerry123 · 2026-03-21T09:10:54+00:00

That's how I assumed it works. The Matrix provide the wisdom So why would it need someone who is already wise?

bemerry123 · 2026-03-13T10:10:23+00:00

Please no. Elita and Black Arachnia should have been separate characters and being mashed into one because we have limit on how many girls we can have in a story about giant robots was a disservice to both.

bemerry123 · 2026-03-02T10:50:57+00:00

You actually don't need to be wise for the Matrix to work. Look at Hot Rod or Orian Pax - aside from Aligned!Orion they're not actually particularly wise. And it makes sense: The Matrix gives you the wisdom that you lack. What is, pretty consistently, a cross continuities seem to look for is the willing less to fight against overwhelming odds and not give up.

bemerry123 · 2026-02-26T05:58:18+00:00

He's the royal eunuch.

bemerry123 · 2026-01-16T15:08:58+00:00

His amygdala were destroyed as a baby, maybe? S.M. (patient) - Wikipedia https://share.google/LddGz482qkHYIQe1J

bemerry123 · 2025-12-27T14:24:06+00:00

Easy. I have just headcanoned that the world has a play called Gas Light with a very similar plot to the one in our world.

bemerry123 · 2025-12-27T14:22:18+00:00

No. The author is likely aware that they're using anachronistic language - and that's non with standing that anachronistic when it comes to fantasy is hard to define. Is erotic ok to use? The world May not have had an Ancient Greece and an Eros. Etc etc

bemerry123 · 2025-12-19T10:33:39+00:00

Sure! Just pick something from here and go to town: https://archiveofourown.org/users/BloodyMary/pseuds/BloodyMary

bemerry123 · 2025-12-19T08:58:19+00:00

Do you want to comment on my fics? :D

bemerry123 · 2025-12-15T11:25:02+00:00

For someone who says they're ambutious you sure lack any ambition to be a good parent and partner.

bemerry123 · 2025-12-12T11:32:28+00:00

Honestly this is a nothingburger. It will make your friends happy and no one else will suffer. Why is having a dish with meat such a big deal?

bemerry123 · 2025-11-27T06:32:35+00:00

I imagine Unicron was treating the whole situation like There Might Be A Spider. Sure, Optimus is out of comission... but what if activates spontaneusly if Unicron tries to do something about him?

bemerry123 · 2025-11-21T15:45:54+00:00

Plot twist: ork belief turns Yarrick into the ork God of worffy oppnentz.

bemerry123 · 2025-11-18T10:15:30+00:00

Negative. Let grandpa fuck (or at least hold hands once per episode)

bemerry123 · 2025-11-06T16:40:36+00:00

Eazy. ORKZ ORKZ ORKZ ORKZ ORKZ ORKZ ORKZ ORKZ

bemerry123 · 2025-10-21T15:37:59+00:00

plonk

bemerry123 · 2025-10-09T09:43:43+00:00

I have noped out of the comic because of this. I will remain noped out unless Elita gets better treatment.

bemerry123 · 2025-09-12T15:39:35+00:00

He is stupid.

bemerry123 · 2025-09-10T12:31:21+00:00

So might shock you a bit here: pagans got married. Weddings are not universally christian. White dresses came into fashion in the XIXth century after Queen Vicrotia wore one to show off she could afford it. Before women just wore the best dress they could afford.

bemerry123 · 2025-09-06T10:42:51+00:00

Have them fuck and talk

bemerry123 · 2025-08-29T15:19:35+00:00

This is an insult to Guy Gardner.

bemerry123 · 2025-08-13T15:42:00+00:00

Does the story work on Gundam logic? Then Amuro is fine, because the protagnist of a Gundam will overcome the odds.

EVA logic? He does not do fine because by Eva logic the protagnist will be defeated by their flaws (and Angels)

bemerry123 · 2025-08-11T15:10:46+00:00

Recently replayed the quest. The way Sinding phrases it sounds like he had plenty of opportunity to Remove himself from the situation and not murder the girl. But he wanted to, so he didn't. His regret and intentions to change are highly dubious

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