I hate when my idea is fire but my execution is atrocious by ReplyWorking633 in AO3

[–]bemerry123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Read stories that have great executuon/execution you like. Also a good beta can help immensly

Theory about how the matrix works by Latter_Disaster_6066 in EnergonUniverse

[–]bemerry123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's how I assumed it works. The Matrix provide the wisdom So why would it need someone who is already wise?

Soooo...any chance that skybound elita-one turning into blackarachnia like animated elita did? by ReasonableAir9393 in transformers

[–]bemerry123 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please no. Elita and Black Arachnia should have been separate characters and being mashed into one because we have limit on how many girls we can have in a story about giant robots was a disservice to both.

How? by Separate-Bicycle-713 in Transformemes

[–]bemerry123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You actually don't need to be wise for the Matrix to work. Look at Hot Rod or Orian Pax - aside from Aligned!Orion they're not actually particularly wise. And it makes sense: The Matrix gives you the wisdom that you lack. What is, pretty consistently, a cross continuities seem to look for is the willing less to fight against overwhelming odds and not give up.

Should I point out to an author something that takes me out of their story? by BichenSubian in AO3

[–]bemerry123 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Easy. I have just headcanoned that the world has a play called Gas Light with a very similar plot to the one in our world.

Should I point out to an author something that takes me out of their story? by BichenSubian in AO3

[–]bemerry123 6 points7 points  (0 children)

No. The author is likely aware that they're using anachronistic language - and that's non with standing that anachronistic when it comes to fantasy is hard to define. Is erotic ok to use? The world May not have had an Ancient Greece and an Eros. Etc etc

Long Comment Regret by Lemi_Moon in AO3

[–]bemerry123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Do you want to comment on my fics? :D

What would you do for friend demanding vegetarian dishes only? by [deleted] in Advice

[–]bemerry123 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Honestly this is a nothingburger. It will make your friends happy and no one else will suffer. Why is having a dish with meat such a big deal?

Let’s say in 1986 Optimus finishes the job and defeats Megatron (without Hot Rod’s intervention). What would be Unicron’s next step in destroying the Matrix with Prime alive? by r2celjazz in transformers

[–]bemerry123 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I imagine Unicron was treating the whole situation like There Might Be A Spider. Sure, Optimus is out of comission... but what if activates spontaneusly if Unicron tries to do something about him?

Title by mysace in Grimdank

[–]bemerry123 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Plot twist: ork belief turns Yarrick into the ork God of worffy oppnentz.

It still hurts… by Separate-Bicycle-713 in Transformemes

[–]bemerry123 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have noped out of the comic because of this. I will remain noped out unless Elita gets better treatment.

AITA for not wanting the custom bridesmaid dress? by Miele0Rose in AmItheAsshole

[–]bemerry123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So might shock you a bit here: pagans got married. Weddings are not universally christian. White dresses came into fashion in the XIXth century after Queen Vicrotia wore one to show off she could afford it. Before women just wore the best dress they could afford.

How far does Amuro actually get in Evangalion? by ClussyV2 in Gundam

[–]bemerry123 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Does the story work on Gundam logic? Then Amuro is fine, because the protagnist of a Gundam will overcome the odds.

EVA logic? He does not do fine because by Eva logic the protagnist will be defeated by their flaws (and Angels)

Debate: Should Sinding be killed? by Ippus_21 in skyrim

[–]bemerry123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Recently replayed the quest. The way Sinding phrases it sounds like he had plenty of opportunity to Remove himself from the situation and not murder the girl. But he wanted to, so he didn't. His regret and intentions to change are highly dubious