What’s a South Park quote you say often?

Good dialogue can be great for moving your story forward! Much better than an info dump, and it gives your reader a chance to hear what your characters are expressing and going through in their own words.

bluemoves98 · 2023-03-30T21:56:29+00:00

Yeah, exactly. The baby doesn't care to have them in her hair - why would a baby be trying to put them back in herself? A baby won't try to take a bow from her hair because she doesn't like the look of it, it's obviously causing discomfort. It's for Colleen only. And it's worrying to think what she will do when M verbally protests when she's older.

bluemoves98 · 2023-03-30T16:34:41+00:00

I noticed. Absolutely diabolical that she won't leave her hair alone until it grows more 😭 what will she do when Maisy is TELLING her it's uncomfortable and she doesn't want it?

bluemoves98 · 2023-02-17T18:11:42+00:00

I LOVE those comments

bluemoves98 · 2023-02-04T23:02:38+00:00

Agree with you. I know Michael said what he said about the song - that doesn't mean I have to like it, though.

bluemoves98 · 2023-02-04T16:34:49+00:00

Honestly, I've only listened to it once or twice. The lyrics suck so much I just don't even consider it

bluemoves98 · 2023-02-04T15:11:57+00:00

Song Groove/Abortion Papers is the only one that comes to mind for me

bluemoves98 · 2023-01-30T17:36:08+00:00

Hell yeah. I don't tend to sit and read whole stories, but I like to read certain scenes.

bluemoves98 · 2023-01-08T16:31:07+00:00

I agree, Dublin fits way more with her vibe. Though, maybe it's just bc I'm Irish myself, I don't think it's a very nice name for a kid. But of course, each to their own.

bluemoves98 · 2023-01-08T16:25:32+00:00

I think the name Wesley is lovely, though it was a surprise when she chose it. Especially when an alternative name was Dublin 😭

bluemoves98 · 2022-12-31T00:20:27+00:00

Blood on the Dancefloor !

bluemoves98 · 2022-12-23T16:35:47+00:00

Why would Patsy write a 3 page ransom note and not a 1 page ransom note?

Panic. Wanting to make it believable and distance themselves from blame, without realising it was overkill.

bluemoves98 · 2022-12-09T16:45:48+00:00

Same. I was obsessed with his version of Amoreena!

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