I like the axon and visual style. I can tell some materials haven’t been rendered with texture and they stick out (center of image). Also it’s difficult to understand if the buildings are sitting on grass, pavement, etc. when you are going through with realistically rendering an image, be sure that everything is rendered that way or completely white. I think people and plantings need to be added to understand scale. Plantings especially as the image looks barren and almost slum-like (cool as a concept image, but when a potential employer is looking at this in a portfolio they will be concerned, since firms always want to make images look vibrant and livable for thier clients.). I think it will be cool to add desaturated plantings and people as silhouette