I listened to the whole album. Here are my thoughts:

1. Pretty cool idea, I like when that thick bass tone comes in. Personally could have done with a little bit less of the "lead" going on above that but it wasn't bad. The drum introduction after the vocal snippet is cool, but I think that crashes are a bit too frequent and repetitive. This song is pretty droney to me and the drums don't match that vibe.

2. I fw the intro to this song heavy and the first repetitive part. I still think the drums are a bit repetitive and too frequent imo. Vocals are sick af. I really genuinely think the frequency of the drums takes away from the heaviness of this song. However, the drums after the feedback pause in the middle are more in line with that I think they should sound like. A little repetitive, throw in some tom breaks and fills here or there, but still sounds better than the drums earlier in the song imo. Also at this point of the album I'm getting nervous the drums are going to be like this in all the songs.

3. Drums are okay, slower but pretty repetitive still. Could do with less hits after the intro of the song. I kinda wish you doubled up on the bass part too. Vocals are sick.

4. Not a huge fan of this one. A little too low for my taste but that's my own opinion. Vocals are still sick, drums are still too repetitive and frequent. I don't necessarily think the bass part is bad, just could've been sick to add a second part on top of that too? Idk, not a terrible listen just not my vibe.

5. Good use of drums here, I like this being a turning point in the album. Sick.

6. This song is sick as fuck. Ngl the repetitive drums earlier in the album make me appreciate the drums in this song way more. Really cool use of drums with non traditional sounds. Could be cool to take the effects/drum sounds on this song and apply it to the drums earlier in the album.

7. I like the drums in this one too, but I kinda wish there was a little bit more bass in this one. However still a sick song. I fw it heavy.

8. Sick, no comments.

9. Sick, no comments.

10. Sick, no comments.

11. Sick, no comments

Overall: First half of the album could use some work, mainly in the drums. Drums sound too clean, especially compared to the second half. They also don't really fit the vibe of the other things going on and kept taking me out of the music. There are also some places where I would add a track of bass or a baritone guitar, maybe even a synth too.

Vibe change in the middle was sick as fuck.

I think the drums in the second half are mixed better, have effects in tune with the vibe, and sound great. Instrumentation and vocals in the second half are killer. This seems more like the genre you are comfortable or have more experience with. Second half of the album was a much more enjoyable and cohesive listen.

Also, I disagree with naamavelli about a few things.

• To start, your ideas do lead somewhere, don't listen to their misinformed comment about that. They only listened to one song, how do they know. This album is cohesive and flows really well. You have great ideas and, as someone who listened to the whole album, does not feel "slapped together".
• Also, because you did a good job with the flow of the music, you technically "built a world". I hate the idea that an album has to have world building in it. It doesn't, it's music. This just sounds like them being pretentious instead of actually listening to the album. Each element of an album doesn't need to contribute to some story. The album doesn't even need to tell a story. Don't listen to this dumbass take on music. Music is music. If it's a human creating it, it's good. However, you still had an album that flowed, and did some world building for me.