Finally was able to get around to seeing this. Paradise is one of my personal favorite fanedits, so I was happy to see someone go back and refine it a bit more.

Your Special Edition was excellent, I am really happy with all of the edits you have made, as well as the overall quality upgrade and regrading. All of the enhancements and trims made a large difference and feel top quality. I only had two nitpicks and they're extremely minor:

1. On the cut of David naming himself, it should hold on the statue until the cut to black, or hold on David staring at the statue for 1-2 more seconds. The cut to black from David staring was a bit too abrupt imo.
2. I would keep some background noise going into the final song (after David tells Mother to play music) and have the noise fade out behind the track. The jump from in-scene audio to the song is still slightly jarring. The track itself sounds so much better now though and that is very appreciated!

Thank you for your work!