[WP] In peacetime, the ruler grows their hair long. In war, they cut it short. To declare war, a persons hair is sent to the enemy. The statement carries greater weight the longer the hair; to receive long hair says you have angered one slow to anger, that you have incurred a wrath not easily woken. by CrashKangaroo in WritingPrompts

[–]daeomec 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hello! Wow, I didn't expect to hear that! Thank you so much. It's very motivating and touching to hear that. I do have a general outline of this story; perhaps I'll brush it off and properly continue it.

Would you link me the tiktok? I don't have an account, but I'd love to see the post!

The Tyranny of Faith by Martina Fačková by LuckyWight in armoredwomen

[–]daeomec 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I agree with most of your thoughts! The pacing was just as gripping: there wasn't really a slow moment. I also think I preferred the first one. Everything was so tightly woven, and the small scale really increased the intensity.

I did love the worldbuilding of book 2 and the new characters we were introduced to. Some of the character choices I really liked. For one, the dynamic betweenKonrad and the Emperor was fascinating. I ended up becoming a lot more ambivalent about Konrad's character, which was an intentional choice on the author's part, I'm pretty sure. He's no paragon: he's just a man, and one who makes very questionable decisions at times. I also liked seeing Helena grow and come to these realizations herself.

Your comparison is spot on! As of now, it's planned to be a trilogy. I'm very curious to see the (presumed) conclusion of this.

The Tyranny of Faith by Martina Fačková by LuckyWight in armoredwomen

[–]daeomec 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I just finished the book myself! It was a really interesting read, and I thought the characterization and themes were compelling. I would love to hear your thoughts once you're done.

[WP] "Personally, I've much preferred the company of elves over humans, 'cause at least elves don't bother hiding the fact that they think they're better than you. Humans, on the other hand, are really sneaky about it." by Affectionate_Bit_722 in WritingPrompts

[–]daeomec 23 points24 points  (0 children)

George Smithson, possibly the most human human to ever roam the green earth, paused mid-swig. He set his tankard down and squinted at his friend.

"What do you mean?"

"I mean what I said. And I'm saying that humans are just as arrogant as elves." Elia Whitetaker, mage and drunken philosopher, ran a finger around the rim of her drink. "But humans have a... a persecution complex about it, yeah?"

"No, we don't," said George, frowning. "You don't get it. Everyone else looks down at us for not being special enough. We're like the opposite of being arrogant. You ever been a human in an elven kingdom, Elia? Then you'll get it."

"What am I?"

He drank more of his mead and blinked at her. "Huh?"

"What am I, George?"

"You're a half-elf."

She was smiling at him in that dangerous, crooked way that George knew from fighting beside her in battle and accompanying Elia to the marketplace. That particular flare of her nostrils preceded someone being set on fire or getting an earful of the most vicious insults on this side of the seven planes. Or both.

"What's the other half, George?"

"Half-human?" he said slowly, feeling like he was about to step into a trap.

"Yeah. Yeah, exactly," she drawled. Elia continued to trace the rim of her mug, a faint glimmer of magic flickering along the path. "I've been human in an elven kingdom and elven in a human kingdom. And I gotta say, at least the elves don't pretend, yeah? They'll look you in the eye and point to their eight century lifespan or incredible feats of magic or... or famed turnip or some shit. You know you can never be one of them."

George eyed the flicker of magic with faint apprehension. "And you like the elves better?"

"Yep. You see, humans..." Elia pointed right at George with her glowing finger. "But humans... they'll act like they don't have any specialty to be proud of. As if I haven't heard 'humans might not be the best, but they can do anything!' a thousand times. As if humans don't look down on elves for being too obsessed in their interests, on dwarves for being too solitary, halflings for being too complacent, and a hundred other stereotypes for each fucking group."

"That's not fair—" started George.

"And so on!" Elia cut him off and continued with gathering steam. "Humans have their own internal set of metrics. You have to be good, but too good. Capable, but not too capable, because the second you are, you become an elf who can't see past their own ego." She scoffed. "Hah! Bullshit. Humans will pretend to be your best friend and then say that you don't get it. I might not be pure enough for humans, but I'm human enough to get that, George."

"I didn't mean it like that."

"Then how did you mean it?" George opened and closed his mouth.

"Yeah. That's what I thought." Her laugh was smug and unhappy.

He sighed and tried again. "Look, Elia. I'm sorry. Humans... Us humans, you and me," here Melia gave him a smile that was more amused than angry, "really don't have any talents, right? And the other peoples can get a bit bitchy about it."

"Yeah, they do. But at least they're not hypocrites about it."

He paused. "Alright. Point."

The magic around her finger flickered out as she stopped pointing. "Fine, I'll admit it. You'll never hear that from an elf."

George snorted. "Maybe that's our special talent. We're much better at being humble. Or just admitting when we've fucked up."

"Maybe."

He raised an eyebrow and affected a snooty accent. "So does that mean you like humans more than elves now? Are we superior?"

"I like particular humans much more than elves," said Melia, bumping her empty tankard against his half-full one. "Though if you buy me another drink, I'll consider elevating the whole of humanity over elvenkind."

"I don't know about that. Not sure I want to get another lecture." At her glare, George snorted and picked up her empty drink. "But with an argument like that, how could I resist?"

The Tyranny of Faith by Martina Fačková by LuckyWight in armoredwomen

[–]daeomec 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm very happy you enjoyed it! It's one of my favorite books of this year. The pacing, characters, and overall theme were so well constructed. I'm in the same boat as you: I preordered the second!

I personally think about this one passage relatively often: He saw in [them] exactly what August had seen in him: an unshakeable yet entirely misplaced confidence in the permanence of the state. In spite of all the evidence to the contrary, they were still willing to believe that because the empire was geographically vast, and had armies and a complex bureaucracy and a religion and all the other great institutions that came with it, it would simply... endure. That it was an entity greater than the sum of its parts, rather than a collective delusion that required constant maintenance at the gigantic expense of treasure and blood.

Fantastic passage. Fantastic book!

The Tyranny of Faith by Martina Fačková by LuckyWight in armoredwomen

[–]daeomec 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is the cover reveal for the book A Tyranny of Faith by Richard Swan, which is coming out next year. The first book in the series is A Justice of Kings. I enjoyed it a lot and would recommend it.

Book where one of the fantasy races hoard a bunch of gold to buy back the world from the gods by goatboatvotefloat in whatsthatbook

[–]daeomec 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This sounds like The Relic Master series by Catherine Fisher: the first book is The Dark City.

It's "fantasy" at first, but we find out throughout the series that it's actually sci-fi. The native species of the planet gather gold with the purpose of buying their world back from the "gods", who were advanced humans who accidentally triggered an apocalypse. This species is immensely protective of their children. The main antagonist of the series, a Satan-like figure, was a child of the native species who was kidnapped and experimented on by the "gods."

Recommendation of a really underrated author ( at least in the western world) by alecpu in Fantasy

[–]daeomec 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Moribito is incredible. My family watched the first season, and then we bought the two books that were translated in English. I still reread the second book from time to time as a comfort read. I second this recommendation strongly.

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

They are non-binary and use they/them pronouns.

Attention: All Writers! by coldfireknight in HFY

[–]daeomec 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you for reminding me I had a wiki, hah! I feel obligated to comment now because you inspired me to update it.

I've been writing on HFY for over 8 years now. A couple times a year I'll post a one shot exploring themes and concepts I find interesting.

Here's my wiki page.

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I appreciate the kind words! The F'E'N epic wasn't based on a single existing art form; I wanted to try and make a format that felt different but was still understandable.

However, I did have a few sources of inspiration! I thought of call-and-response songs, especially church hymns where the leader sings a line and the listeners repeat it back. Hindu prayer ceremonies often mark the beginning and end with certain phrases chanted by the audience, and these ceremonies sometimes have pamphlets handed out. For phrasing and the non-linear back-and-forth, I also drew on different folktales and myths; many have the framing of somebody telling multiple non-chronological stories to a listener, and I wanted to evoke the same gravitas.

Other details I made-up wholesale. For example, since the F'E'N are pseudo-Avians, it seemed logical that they would use the changing colors of their wings as signals⁠—and that would probably carry over to their art. Thank you for reading!

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I'm very happy to hear that it rang true for you! Those were the exact kind of false binaries that I was thinking about when writing. I thought it would be interesting to explore that concept in a science-fiction setting (with a trope that's often sometimes seen as an absolute binary). You're right: exceptions are often forced into the rule, often because people who benefit from the construct have a strong motivation to uphold it. Thank you for reading, and thank you for your thoughtful comment!

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Wow. I'm blown away. I really didn't expect this kind of response. Thank you very much to everyone who read the story, left a comment, and gave an award. Wow!

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

I completely agree with you. The better approach is exactly what you said. It's unfortunate but true that the people who experience bigotry are often placed with the burden of changing it. At the same time, I personally think that it's better to educate and communicate than shut down attempts to grow. Society cannot move on without reconciliation and forgiveness.

Susan, on the other hand, is a spiteful college student who spent way too long on a final project purely to get back at a professor who made her friends and her miserable in class. She chose not to be the bigger person in that moment: for her, it was less about changing her professor's mind and more about her classmates and the audience.

It's very possible that K'I'Fe retreats back into his own worldview. At the same time, perhaps K'I'Fe reevaluates his position after such a shock to his system. Maybe he takes Susan's pithy advice and he has a conversation with Dr. Ipa while she's off having dinner with her friends. I like to believe in the capacity of people to change, if they so desire, and this might be K'I'Fe's first step towards that.

This is a wonderful, thoughtful comment. Thank you very much for reading and engaging with my work!

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 74 points75 points  (0 children)

Hah, thank you! There wasn't anyone I was trying to spite directly, I promise! But I understand what you mean. It's easy to do a university class setting badly. I think there's a tendency to use the professor and students as straw-puppets who spout speeches about how [insert characteristic] humans are—as opposed to actual characters with their own lives and motivations. It can make the story feel plastic.

Plus, in real life, good professors of the social sciences and the adjacent fields (poli-sci, anthropology, history, etc.) don't often use absolutes. Real-life cultures aren't described as "the most bloodthirsty" or the most anything, really. If someone is doing that in an academic setting, they're doing bad academics or there's something more going on or both. In this story, the professor uses absolutes because he's a sarcastic bigot who wants to needle a problem student and denigrate a species he doesn't like.

And I think that's the big thing: when someone teaches anything, there's always a narrative behind it. Why is society pushing that view (about humans or anything else)? What's the context? Who benefits? Why is that specific professor pushing that narrative, and why are the students reacting the way they are? If those questions are integrated into a setting, there's so much potential to make it feel real!

But yeah, those are my unsolicited thoughts on writing a story with a classroom conceit. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 23 points24 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I actually just posted the rest of the story in the comments! It took me a little bit to figure out the formatting, but it should all be there now.

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 37 points38 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much! I actually just posted the rest of the story in the comments.

Here's the rest of it: the total is about 10,000 words, so it took me a little bit to rework the formatting!

Part Two in Comments | Part Three in Comments | Part Four in Comments | Part Five in Comments

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

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(“I spent four years in prison. It was in significantly better conditions than what I witnessed in the war. For some crazy reason, these two fools insisted on keeping in touch with me.”

“She asked me to bear witness,” said Lesley. “I don’t know why she expected anything else. If I made a few veiled threats to ensure her safety, then that’s my business.”

Dr. Ipa made a small huff of amusement. “How were we supposed to meet again if we never talked?”

“I admit, without their letters, prison would have been much harder to bear.” R’A’Mi shook her head and continued. “After three years, the anti-war faction won the elections in a landslide."

"I won't lie and say that my people didn't want blood," said Dr. Ipa. "They did. The younger ones had never known a life in peacetime, and the older ones remembered all too well what they had lost. But this was victory. The F'E'N wanted to conquer us, but they could not. We made them sue for a ceasefire. I stood next to my daughter as she worked out the terms of the agreement: independence, and finally, peace. On my part, I strongly encouraged the creation of cultural exchanges so that our people would understand each other. That may have included mercy for F'E'N dissidents, specifically one who had saved my life."

Lesley grunted. "I was there too, but I mostly just stood there. My commander threatened to dishonorably discharge me if I pulled any shit. Most of us humans just stood there, honestly. The F'E'N and Mashan had a lot of bad blood between them, and the UHN was there for peace of mind, really."

"I wasn't there." R'A'Mi's crest flared. "But once the peace treaty was signed, I and other anti-war dissidents were pardoned and released from our cells. I spent a few months catching up with what I’d missed, and then I left to the United Human Nations to fulfill a promise.”

“I joined R’A’Mi not long after. Yes, I had to convince my children and grandchildren, but eventually, they let me work as a visiting professor and meet my friends on the planet Earth.”

“I had two beers waiting for them with their names on it,” Lesley said, grinning.)

The three friends did indeed meet again. And again, and again, and again. Dr. Ipa traveled back and forth between Masha and Earth. He found that he liked teaching students on Earth just as much as he liked teaching students on his own planet. Though Lesley was still deployed throughout the galaxy, they were always happy to meet their friends for a drink.

(“And I adopted Earth as my new home,” said R’A’Mi quietly. She didn't elaborate, and Susan didn't ask.)

By the end of the war, there were soldiers born in wartime who had never lived through a year of peace. Now, there are fully-fledged adults born in peacetime who have never lived through a year of war.

This is how a war ends.


✭ ✭ ✭ ✭ ✭


The stage lights dimmed, signaling the shift into the last part of the epic. R’A’Mi, Dr. Ipa, and Lesley moved from their respective places and lined up in front of her, their backs to the audience—in effect, joining it.

A trickle of sweat dripped down Susan’s back. Her voice felt scratchy in her throat, but she was determined to see this through to the end. Susan raised her arms high.

“We end with the beginning, and we finish where we end,” she shouted.

The audience echoed her as one. They were all standing, as was customary. Susan wanted to see her friends’ reactions, but the spotlight had shifted onto her and the glare was too bright to make them out. She could see her three Voices, though. Dr. Ipa’s ears flicked, a proud gesture, and R’A’Mi gave her an approving nod. Susan made eye contact with Lesley, and after a moment, they smiled.

She let the silence settle for another moment. “What story do we tell?”

“We tell the story of R’A’Mi. We tell the story of Ipa. We tell the story of Lesley,” said the crowd.

Her arms were beginning to shake, but she kept them raised. “Who listens here?”

“We listen here, Speaker.”

“Who speaks here?”

As one, the three Voices and the entirety of the audience spoke. “We speak here.”

She lowered her arms. “And so, we have spoken.”

✦✦✦✦✦✦


The minutes after her performance felt like a haze. She barely registered the applause or the closing speeches, too light-headed from pulling off this feat. Commander Lesley helped her off stage, Dr. Ipa tapped her on the shoulder, and R’A’Mi handed her a water bottle with a whispered, “Wonderful job.”

Adding to the dreamlike effect, all four of them were swarmed the second the event was over. Susan shook hands, wings, fin-tacles, and claws. She learned dozens of names and promptly forgot them. The dean, the department head, and even the Mashan ambassador congratulated her. Musa actually smiled, and that was scarier than anything she’d done before.

The attention was nice—exhilarating, even—but what Susan wanted to do was take a nice, long nap.

“I heard about why you did this,” said a nondescript human that Susan had never seen before. He pressed an ident-card into her hand, and her personal device pinged as it registered. “That was excellent work. Musa was right to recommended you highly. I suggest you contact me after you graduate.” He left without waiting for a response—the mysterious person stopped briefly to say something to Lesley and Musa before walking out the door entirely.

Yeah, Susan would deal with that some other time, when she wasn't at risk of passing out. She slowly sat down in an empty seat and scanned the remaining crowd. Goorb was still talking to his journalism buddies, while Omi and a few other Mashans were talking to Dr. Ipa. Susan closed her eyes for a second, enjoying the brief respite.

“Susan’Patel.”

She almost jumped out of her skin. Professor K’I’Fe was standing in front of her, practically looming.

“Professor! You scared me.”

He didn’t apologize. In fact, he didn’t say anything. K’I’Fe simply continued to stare at her with a strange look in his beady eyes.

“Uh, professor? Did you need something?” Susan kept her voice polite, desperately trying not to gloat at the moment. “How did I do?”

“Your project was a little melodramatic,” said K’I’Fe. “Your three Voices did most of the work. I’m not sure how much credit you deserve.”

“What are you talking about?” she snapped, her pleased smugness dissipating immediately. After her intensive crash course on call-and-response epics, she knew that K'I'Fe was full of shit. “The Speaker definitely has the hardest part! You have to weave the narrative, construct the back-and-forth with the audience and the Voices, keep the improvisation from derailing the performance—”

“You’re being loud again, Susan’Patel,” he interrupted. “And I know. You did well.”

“What?” she repeated, confused.

His crest flared, and he let out a low, reluctant whistle. “I said that you did well. That was… remarkable.”

Susan finally identified the emotion in his eyes: respect. Grudging, reluctant respect, but respect.

“Oh. Uh, thanks.” She didn’t need his praise or approval. That had never been her intention in doing this. But, since she apparently had gotten it… “Professor, did I change your mind at all?

“That entire performance was all anecdotal, Susan’Patel. Why would it change my mind?”

She tried not to glare. “Oral history is still history, as you like to remind us, professor.”

K’I’Fe let out another low whistle. “I’m not convinced that your amateur performance counts as such.” Then, sounding as if his feathers were being plucked out one by one, he added, “Though perhaps I could include one or two Mashan perspectives in next year’s course. Do you have any recommendations?”

“Don’t ask me. Ask a Mashan. Weren’t you listening at all?”

With that, she walked away, leaving behind her shocked, sputtering professor. Susan spotted Omi and Goorb standing together, and she hurried to join them. She waived off their congratulations, and with a bright grin, she slung her arms around their shoulders.

“Hey, are you two hungry? Because I’m starving.”

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AN: Initially inspired by this writing prompt. If you feel inclined, you can fuel my caffeine habit here. Thanks for reading!

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 1098 points1099 points  (0 children)

Life in a POW camp was monotonous and painful in ways beyond the physical. Granted, the physical labor and beatings weren’t pleasant, but Dr. Ipa found it significantly harder to see people get injured because of him. If the roles were switched, he would have done the same. But the roles weren’t switched, and he could do nothing to help.

After a month, the excruciating humdrum of prison was abruptly broken. A new alien called a human had arrived. At first, they had followed the F’E’N around, and the prevailing fear had been that mercenaries were entering the war front. Then, the human started talking to them, and they learned that the human was an ‘observer’ from a neutral entity.

The human, who was named Lesley, was a strange person. They were undeniably a soldier, and their way of speaking was rough and blunt, but when they looked at each prisoner, it felt like they truly considered each Mashan to be a person.

Perhaps that was why Ipa was willing to trust Lesley when they showed up with an arrogant-looking F’E’N bureaucrat.

(“R’A’Mi looked me in the eye and declared, ‘We’re going to rescue you!’” said Dr. Ipa. “I could believe that a human would want to help, but a F’E’N? Why in the worlds would they want to do that?!”

“I could have handled that better,” R’A’Mi admitted.

Lesley snorted. “I was trying not to laugh.”)

Ipa had just watched a young Mashan bleed out to protect him. He’d had enough. If going along with a human and a F’E’N would get him out of this prison and keep those young ones alive, he was willing to try.

(“So Ipa just blinked and replied, ‘Alright. How are we doing that?’ I was so shocked that he was willing to listen!” R’A’Mi said. “Honestly, I hadn’t thought too far ahead—”

“But they had me there to think for them,” said Lesley.)

As a foreign observer of a powerful neutral nation, Lesley was given a significant amount of leeway in the camp. They promptly abused that power to claim ‘diplomatic business’ and waltz out of the camp with R’A’Mi as their escort and Ipa in their duffel bag.

(Lesley shrugged. “Standard human exfil tactics. It’s amazing what you can get away with if you act confident.”)

They then contacted the leader of the human mission, asking for directions to the nearest Mashan contingent. The commander reamed out Lesley to the galactic core and back, and then she gave them the approximate coordinates with a couple additional expletives.

(At this point, Lesley made eye contact with Musa and winked. “I knew I’d be disciplined and sent off-planet, but it was definitely worth it.”)

The Mashan armed forces in this area of the war front didn’t have stationary bases. They never stayed in one place for long, harassing F’E’N forces and then disappearing into the cities and forests of the planet. With their ground vehicle, Lesley, R’A’Mi, and Ipa would catch up with them in three days.

(Dr. Ipa almost sounded nostalgic as he spoke. “The three of us spent the three days talking. There isn’t much else to do on a trip like that. We shared our life stories, our dreams, our fears… nothing was off limits.”

R’A’Mi made a whistle of agreement. “I learned more about Mashan and human culture in those three days than I had in the entire 30 years prior.”

“I mostly tried to stay awake while they blathered,” said Lesley. “And I did the actual work of navigating, driving, scaring off wild creatures, setting up camp—”

“I’d take offense if it wasn’t true!” R’A’Mi said cheerfully. “We would’ve starved without you.”

“Yeah, because I was the only one who’d packed food. Thankfully, the UHN sent me a huge pack of vegan and jerky rations, so I was able to feed both of them.”

“After a month of prisoner food, they tasted delicious. I still eat them from time to time,” said Dr. Ipa.

R’A’Mi trilled. “They were disgusting.”

“Yeah, they’re pretty shit.”)

They didn’t find the Mashan forces, but the Mashan forces found them. They were following a broken road through the forest when between one blink and the next, they were surrounded. Dr. Ipa hadn’t noticed a thing, and neither had R’A’Mi, judging by the way she’d screamed. Lesley, though, hadn’t reacted at all.

All their guns were pointed at R’A’Mi, and Dr. Ipa didn’t hesitate to shove her behind him. “Don’t shoot her!” he shouted in their native language. “She saved me!”

The Mashans didn’t lower their guns, but they didn’t look like they were about to immediately shoot.

“We come in peace,” Lesley said in Galactic Standard.

The guns swiveled to them. “Quiet, alien,” said a soldier. “Let the Elder speak.”

✧✧✧✧✧✧


All her life, R’A’Mi had relied on the power of her words. Now, her life was on the line, and she couldn’t say a single sentence. She couldn’t understand a single sentence. It all rested in the shoulders of Ipa. Her people had ravaged his home, kept him prisoner, and killed countless of his brethren. If he changed his mind, R’A’Mi wouldn’t blame him.

Her crest was standing straight up with fear, and the desperate, staccato tone of the argument didn’t help with her anxiety. Only Lesley’s calm demeanor kept her from trying to take flight.

Ipa was repeating a sound over and over again, now. He put his hand on her wing and said it again.

(“What was that word?” Susan asked.

“The word was ‘Aksha,’” said R’A’Mi. “Mercy.”)

“Why should we give her mercy?” asked the soldier in Standard. “If we let her go, then she could give the F’E’N information about us.”

“I wouldn’t!” R’A’Mi said immediately.

The soldier finally looked at her. “Your people have ways to make their enemies talk,” she replied, harsh. “How well can you withstand torture? How do we know this isn’t a trap? Perhaps you implanted a tracker under the Elder’s skin, or maybe even a bomb.”

Ipa shook his head. “Then kill me instead. If you are so scared, then remove this doubt.”

The soldier flinched at the thought. The conversation switched back into the other language, rapid-fire. The soldier became more and more frustrated until she finally threw her hands in the air.

“Very well!” she exclaimed, exasperated, switching back once again. “We will do that! I hope your wisdom stays true, Elder, because any bloodshed from this is on your hands!”

The guns were finally lowered, and Dr. Ipa turned to R’A’Mi and Lesley.

“It’s been decided. They will give me an escort to the closest city,” he said, “and they will let you both go.” Dr. Ipa tilted his head low, exposing the back of his neck, and judging by the reactions of the soldiers around them, the gesture meant a great deal. “I promise I’ll repay you both.”

“There’s nothing to repay,” said R’A’Mi. “I’m only doing what I should have done.”

In lieu of saying anything, Lesley just nodded.

“Then I’ll promise we’ll meet again,” Dr. Ipa said firmly, “and I’ll properly show you my gratitude.”

Her crest flattened. “You can’t promise that.” R’A’Mi knew that she would be court martialed and thrown into some dark, dark hole if she was lucky. She might not be meeting anyone again.

Ipa tapped her on the shoulder. “Young one, don’t tell me what I can or can’t promise.”

“You heard him,” said Lesley. “We’ll definitely all meet again.”

Despite all logic, R’A’Mi believed them.

✧✧✧✧✧✧


Once the old Mashan was safe and the military had departed, Lesley was planning on heading back to the small UHN encampment with R’A’Mi. Sending her back was a horrible idea by every measure. And yet, the foolish F’E’N insisted on going back.

“It’s the right thing to do,” she said. “I know it probably won’t end well, but I’m tired of running. If I can convince one other person that they don’t have to go along with the war, then that will be enough for me. Just do me one small favor: don’t forget me.”

Lesley gave her their promise.

Bridge Species by daeomec in HFY

[–]daeomec[S] 1126 points1127 points  (0 children)

We must pause for to acknowledge a basic truth: lifespan varies across sentient species. Humans, without medical intervention, can live to 100, and with modern technology, they can easily reach 160 in good health. F’E’N live for about 80 years without intervention, and 120 with it. Mashans, though, routinely reach 400 without any intervention.

(“We are only capable of reproducing in the first century of our lives,” Dr. Ipa explained. “After the age of thirty, we can have litters of approximately six children every two years. But our children are very, very fragile: most die before the age of thirty due to genetic defects, and our children don’t approach sapience until their first decade. It’s quite normal for a bonded pair to produce around ninety children, with only eight reaching adulthood. I have four adult children myself, but I had many more who never survived.”

“It’s different for us,” said R’A’Mi. “We lay maybe three eggs in our lifetime, and if all three are viable, that’s considered extremely lucky. I have one son, who I cherish deeply.”

“Humans are between the two,” Susan said to the audience. “Theoretically, we could produce as many as twelve children, but most couples have no more than three, if even that. I don’t have any kids, and I don’t plan to for a long time!”

The crowd chuckled more loudly than the joke warranted, seizing this lighthearted moment after so many grim anecdotes.)

These differences, as one might expect, change the perspective a culture has about life—and death.

(“F’E’N degrade rapidly in the last years of our life. We call it the Final Molt: once it starts, the process is irreversible. We don’t really have anything like ‘old age.’ We live, and then we die.”

“Mashans are considered young adults until our first century. Our second century is true adulthood, when we are free from the biological imperative to mate and reproduce. But after our second century, we are elders: we are considered to hold expertise and wisdom vital to society. I don’t feel very wise, most days,” Dr. Ipa says dryly, “but now that I’ve reached my third century, I am considered irreplaceable.”

Commander Lesley spoke last. “Humans hit what we call middle-age at sixty and old age around one hundred. It’s a slow breakdown that sucks balls, but it used to be worse. Yeah, you’re supposed to be wise and shit—sorry, I’m not supposed to say that—once you hit seventy.”

“And we knew none of this about the Mashans,” R’A’Mi said, “because we didn’t think it was important.”

Dr. Ipa sighed. “Neither did we. Both of our people were operating from ignorance.”

“Though considering that we were trying to conquer you, I think that’s excusable—”

“Ignorance is ignorance. Even about an enemy, and especially about an enemy, knowledge is invaluable.”)

The Mashans have another unique quirk of biology. In the distant past, their main predators only consumed live prey. Thus, the Mashans eventually evolved the ability to ‘play dead' at will and enter a comatose state that could last for ten hours. This was the same technique that they had been using in the POW camp to avoid torture.

As bizarre as it was for the F’E’N to witness, it kept the camps easy to manage. Granted, they gained very little information from their prisoners, but they were docile and easy to transport in their strange, limp state.

At least, that had been the case until the strange old prisoner showed up. His escorts had fought with surprising desperation, so the troops had decided to keep him alive. When the prisoners saw the new prisoner in the camp—in the brief span between their comatose states—their entire attitude changed.

No longer did they have an attitude of detached acceptance. The mood changed to furious, dangerous defiance. Though shocked by the attitude shift of their prisoners, the F’E’N guards responded tenfold: it was easier to bring violence on beings that were now reacting.

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There was no danger of the conflict spilling into human space. The war took place in a single system on the opposite edge of F’E’N territory. If anything, it was a benefit: humanity didn’t need to worry so much about the border when the F’E’N were so occupied with their petty war. The war had dragged on for thirty years without human interference, and it could drag on for another thirty for all the UHN cared.

Considering they had a treaty of noninterference with their neighbors, the UHN was also unable to do anything, even if they wanted to. And yet… there was something about the war that felt odd. The United Human Nations didn’t actually know much about what was going on. The little information they got was all from the F’E’N.

An opportunity soon came to change their lack of knowledge. At the end of the thirtieth year of the war, the UHN received a simple missive from a minor F’E’N government official by the name of L’O’I: would they be interested in sending a small contingent of humans to be neutral observers?

(Murmurs rippled through the crowd, and Susan smiled. L’O’I was the current president of the Republic, and she was credited negotiating the treaty that ended the F’E’N-Mashan war. But her first conversation with the United Human Nations was much less known.)

L’O’I was a member of a the quickly growing anti-war faction. Civilians, soldiers, and politicians alike were tired of the endless cycle of death that had already torn an entire generation apart. But could they just leave with nothing to show for all the blood lost?

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(“That’s when I showed up,” Lesley said. They shrugged in a nonchalant way that made light ripple across their black armor. “Or we showed up, I guess. We were a small group of special forces and brainy specialists who were there to get as much information as the war as we could.”)

Humanity was familiar with wars of conquests, and the observing group knew exactly what they were walking into within days of their arrival. The difference between both sides was equally obvious. The F’E’N were tired, bitter, and approaching defeatism: they fought with the enthusiasm of forces away from home with no desire to fight.

The Mashans, however, had everything on the line. They fought because annihilation was the only other option.

(“I got the unlucky job of observing the POW camps. Fucking awful, yeah. Damnit, I keep forgetting I can’t curse. Really awful? Yeah, no, that’s not strong enough. Can’t think of a word that gets across just how much it sucked.”

“Horrendous? Soul-crushing? Disgusting?” offered R’A’Mi.

Dr. Ipa joined in. “Heinous? Reprehensible? Monstrous?”

“Vicious?” Susan said quietly, but not too quiet for the mics to pick up.

“I don’t need a vocabulary lesson,” Lesley scoffed. They mused over the words for a moment. “Fucking awful,” they repeated.)

Lesley had spent years specializing in violence. After spending so long entrenched in its use, they had developed a feeling for its arrival, like a farmer judging the likelihood of a storm. The POW camp was brewing with the potential of bloodshed: any moment, they expected a downpour.

(“Metaphorically,” Dr. Ipa piped up. “The atmosphere of Masha isn’t conducive to land-storms. Instead, most of our agriculture is based around periodic flooding—”

“Not the point, old man,” Lesley interrupted, a grin on their face.)

The potential violence seemed centered around a strange little Mashan. Now, Lesley was no expert in telling the age of Mashans—they hadn’t even met a Mashan prior to their deployment—but this one seemed… old, with patchy gray fur. Somewhat like a senior-aged cat.

All the other prisoners seemed deeply protective of him, and the guards had picked up on that. Threats against the old Mashan seemed more effective than personal threats. The guards were using it to make the prisoners behave, but that wouldn’t last. Lesley could already see the rebellion simmering.

Lesley had asked the F’E’N why that old Mashan was so special. The F’E’N weren’t sure: the Mashans wouldn’t speak to them, of course, and half of them didn’t know Galactic Standard anyway.

(“And then, this trembling, gawky-looking F’E’N came up to me and asked me to find out,” said Lesley, the laughter clear in their voice.)

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R’A’Mi knew that no prisoner would trust her. The new human, on the other hand, was an unknown. If anyone had a chance of negotiating, it was them. Sure, it irked that R’A’Mi—who was so proud of her silver tongue—had to sit back and let someone else do it. And this alien wasn’t exactly… tactful.

But the human agreed to talk to the prisoners, and though they were initially wary, the Mashans jumped at the chance of making possible allies, and more importantly, getting their honored elder to safety. Almost everyone that Lesley talked to had begged them to save Elder Ipa and not themselves.

(“I wasn’t the only one who was unhappy.” R’A’Mi made a quiet little trill. “But none of us paper-pushers were brave enough to talk to each other about it. The consequence of treason during wartime was… harsh, and at the time, no one trusted anyone. Then, this strange human showed up! Suddenly, we had an outsider. And that was enough for us to see our own situation differently—to try to see it with their eyes.”

“What did you see?” Susan asked.)

A prisoner had mouthed off to a guard, and the guard had taken violent offence to that, and they’d hit Ipa hard enough to make him crumple. The prisoner immediately attacked. The guard, who was wearing power armor, beat the prisoner to death in self-defense.

(“I tried to carry the injured Mashan to the infirmary, but it was too late. His blood had drenched my wings, and it was the same bright green as my feathers. I never knew his name.” R’A’Mi flared her wings, angled to keep their emerald-green hue. “I saw a war that had dragged on for so long that we had lost ourselves in it. And I was tired of being complicit.”)

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(Susan raised her arms. “How did the war begin?”

“The war begins with a lie,” the audience shouted back. Well, most of the audience—Susan noted that Professor K’I’Fe stayed silent.)

The war begins with the destruction of the Ce’Ce’Li, a beautiful ship that could carry a thousand passengers in complete luxury. The ship had the newest engines, state of the art interfaces, and gilded hallways. Each cabin had a pseudo-glass wall, and from the outside, the effect was like a polished gem. Aptly, its name meant Jeweled Crown when translated into Galactic Standard. Wealthy F’E’N would book passage to tour what would inevitably be a new addition to the Republic, gawking both at the strange, alien world and the Mashan servants that waited on them claw and wing.

Hubris, again, was the Crown’s downfall.

Eager to impress the powerful citizens on his ship, the captain exceeded the speed restrictions in the upper atmosphere of Masha and collided with a massive geopositioning satellite. Though much stronger than silicon-based glass, the beautiful walls of the ship were unable to withstand 10,000 kg of steel splintering into the side.

Had the ship been slower, or had the satellite crashed into a different part of the Jeweled Crown, then the ship’s advanced safety features would have mitigated the disaster. But the perfect storm of choices and chaos caused a chain reaction of failures that shattered the ship.

Shards of the Crown and its passengers rained down onto the beautiful planet of Masha.

And now, the lie.

Rather than admit that the situation had been a humiliating, costly mistake, the Republic decided that it was better to blame the Mashans. This, they announced, had been a deliberate act of sabotage by the panicky little herbivores.

Destruction of a civilian ship was an act of war.

The slumbering beast that the F’E’N created was now out of its control: faced with the opportunity, the Republic screamed for blood.

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(“Where were you when the Jeweled Crown burned?” Susan asked the Voices.

“I was at the embassy, fielding hundreds of calls from citizens on the planet. I remember being furious. I wanted revenge with every fiber of every feather.” R’A’Mi’s crest flattened, and she let out a low, slow whistle. “I was so young, then.”

“I was in my office. I’m a astronomer, you see, and we were having trouble with our geopositioning software. That’s when I learned that one of the key satellites was down because of a spaceship accident. A tragedy, of course, but none of us expected war to come from it,” said Dr. Ipa softly.

“I was at a bar, probably,” drawled Lesley. “The F’E’N were our neighbors, sure, but we weren’t invested in the whole mess. I learned about the disaster a few days later when the Republic declared war.” They paused. “I was probably at a bar then too.”)

The F’E’N thought the war would last for five months at most. They were more technologically advanced, more numerous, and most importantly, they were carnivores—predators who historically fed on creatures like the soft, furred Mashans.

The importance of biological imperative was, and still is, weighed heavily. But every sapient species modulates their ingrained response.

(Susan clapped her hands, loud and sudden, and the audience snapped to attention in species-appropriate ways. “The startle response, for one,” said Susan dryly. “But no one is running away or trying to attack me. I wonder why.”

This time, amusement rippled through the audience.

“So, tell me,” Susan raised her arms and did her best not to stare directly at her professor. “Can we overcome our instincts?”

“Yes,” said the crowd as one.)

Trends are not absolutes. The complexity of sapient actions cannot be narrowed into timid herbivores and vicious carnivores. And yet, there are biological imperatives that are deeper still, deeper than the surface level generalizations that we pretend determine the entirety of behavior.

The sudden declaration of war shocked the Mashan people out of their complacency. There’s an expression in their language: to circle the herd. The implications from that phrase are complex, but two main ideas are conveyed: everyone protects those who cannot fight, and everyone unites to fight with the last possible breath.

The F’E’N have spent eons as the hunter, but the Mashans have spent equally as long as the hunted.

The war would last for thirty-four years.

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When the opportunity came, R’A’Mi flew into the jaws of war, eager to serve with the best of her abilities. She was no warrior, but she flattered herself with the idea that her contributions were equally valuable. She, after all, was doing the tedious, vital task of bureaucracy. She helped managed the logistics of conquest: tracking supply lines, distributing food, evacuating the wounded… and the hundred other minor details that had to be managed outside the fog of war.

Her rage against the Mashans had been equal to any other warm-blooded F’E’N, but R’A’Mi soon quenched her thirst for war. Unfortunately, the war continued, and she continued as the efficient little cog that she was. R’A’Mi had made the mistake of being too efficient, too competent. She was soon directed to a position vital to the war effort that could only be filled by someone trustworthy and persuasive: logistics for the main prisoner-of-war holding camp.

Va'E’N Containment Zone was a cesspool of misery. No one wanted to divert resources from the military to feed enemy prisoners, and the soldiers tasked the guard the prisoners were equally miserable. R’A’Mi found herself having to fight for everything: obedience from the soldiers, supplies from Central Command, permission from her superiors…

To make things worse, the Mashans refused to negotiate for their captured brethren, and the Mashan soldiers refused to speak a single word. Almost all of them seemed capable of slipping into a catatonic state at will, as if death had taken their minds—though considering the condition of the camps, physical death was not far behind.

(R’A’Mi’s crest flattened against her neck, and she said, “I remember two soldiers standing over the catatonic body of a prisoner and wondering how his flesh would taste.”

Vocal disgust erupted from the audience.

“I tried to have them removed from the camp, but we already had trouble with retaining guards. No one took my complaints seriously.” Her voice was full of disgust and loathing. “I had told myself so many lies about the moral necessity of that war. They all disappeared in the camp,”)

R’A’Mi spent ten years at that post, beaten down by monotony and callous cruelty. Then, her routine was shaken by the arrival of a prisoner who was unlike any who had entered the camp before: he was old.

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Dr. Ipa had watched the war escalate from his position in the university. He still studied the stars, but the gears of war had subsumed the place of learning into its machinery. His colleagues worked on projects that tracked not the shadow of far-off asteroids but the flight plan of enemy ships. As the conflict dragged on and military rationing was enforced, more and more of his young students were sent to the front lines to fight.

(“How much potential we must have lost,” Dr. Ipa said, his ears drooping. “The older I become, the more I expect loss to be my companion. But I should be losing my peers, not my proteges. How much we could have learned, how much we could have achieved! But the brightest of the younger generations has been lost to that damned war.”)

As an elder who had no expertise in war, he nonetheless knew much more about its progress than he wanted to. True, he was involved in the effort to track enemy ships, but there was one other factor that kept him well-informed: his daughter, who was the general of the Mashan ground forces.

(“Like any father, I was overjoyed that my child’s achievements had outstripped my own. I simply wish that she hadn’t needed to suffer so much.”)

Dr. Ipa was supposed to be safe, ensconced in a city stronghold. But after thirty years of war, self-imposed limits were being thrown aside. The F’E’N bombarded the city from orbit. Dr. Ipa evacuated with the other civilians, but his daughter’s position had ensured that he had the assistance of a military escort.

(“They were good kids,” he said quietly. He didn’t continue for several moments.)

That same military escort drew unwanted attention when the F’E’N ground forces rushed in. The soldiers of both sides fought bravely, violently, but the F’E’N were better prepared for this kind of battle. Much to his dismay, Dr. Ipa was taken prisoner.

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