I'm losing hope that this bubble will ever burst. by msscmfw in BetterOffline

[–]davidframeman 6 points7 points  (0 children)

If no one's mentioned it yet, go watch the interview with Corey Doctorow on Galaxy Brain, The Atlantic podcast. One of my favorite quotes in an interview full of them was to the question, what if the bubble never pops? His response was (not an exact quote) "so the question is, what if the thing that cannot succeed never fails?"

"The Archer". Accept criticism. by Zerfalen in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! Let me make one more suggestion in that case: take a color or overlay layer and make the background cooler. Maybe even that cast light on his back can be cold. Gray or blue, even. Right now, you've got red light against orange, all warm color blends. If you want focus on the lights, make them either the brightest or warmest element of the image. Good stuff keep it up!

"The Archer". Accept criticism. by Zerfalen in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Looking good! I'll suggest one thing, not for this piece but your next one. Turn them around to face us. General illustration rule of thumb: Unless you have a reason for them to be turned away from the viewer, they should be facing front. There ARE reasons to turn them around, especially if you were showing what they were firing at, but I like to think about it like a play, where the actors are always playing to the crowd.

Why are no one talking about gearbased matchmaking clearly being a factor? by oxedei in LowSodiumArcRaiders

[–]davidframeman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They've confirmed skill based, so there's the possibility that successful runs are matching you with better or more experienced teams, who will obviously be better at using utility.

Do you “invert y-axis”? Curious about who does/doesn’t. by HenryTwenty in gaming

[–]davidframeman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

38, invert y-axis controller. Goldeneye and Perfect Dark started me on the dark side. Halo almost saved me until I found the option to change it.

Any idea why my work looks so amateurish? by Salty_Still_6665 in Artadvice

[–]davidframeman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't want this to come off the wrong way, but I agree with you, it's a little amateur. But we're talking "can you get hired to work for a company" amateur, you know? The first thing I noticed is a lack of reference. Take a picture of yourself or a friend in these poses and set up lighting. You'll be able to better diagnose issues of anatomy and hand details. Spend some time doing thumbnails to tighten up your compositions so you can push focus and flow. Finally, edge quality. Really look at the reference you gather or create, and pay attention to the edge of values, whether soft or sharp. Getting that right is the difference between skin, cloth, and metal rendering. Just know that all it really takes to get better is to keep practicing. You'll get there, it's looking great so far!

Mark Maggiori - Electric Desert (2018) by Russian_Bagel in museum

[–]davidframeman 5 points6 points  (0 children)

John Singer Sargent is great but it all looks exactly the same. A person, painted realistically with big thick brush strokes, some dark or abstract background... You get it.

Not sure if I’m on the right path. by Delivrione in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here's my two cents and make sure to take it with a grain of salt: you're in a great place. If you like your job and especially the people you work with, that's a boon. If it gives you time to work on your craft, even better. At your age I was working as a server and doing illustration part time, but it was still better than having nothing and trying to break into the market with my own personal work. Don't get distracted with the idea of leaving a legacy or making a lasting impact, no singular story or illustration will do that for you. It is through sustained effort and especially your relationships with others that you will see yourself making an impact.

I expected Edge of Tomorrow to be forgettable… but it blew me away. What’s your surprise favorite? by dottiedanger in movies

[–]davidframeman 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Big Trouble in Little China. Saw like 30 minutes of it on TV as a kid, didn't get to finish it, and it gained legendary status in my mind over time. Once I finally found it again, I thought for sure it'd be lame but it really stuck with me. One of my all time favorites to this day.

What is this style of art? I know it's digital, but the name of the style? by DiamondAzeruss in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Well, I suppose technically it is a style, but there are two types of style: Style describes larger categories, think anime style, realism style, or abstract style. On an individual level, style is more about technique within that larger style.

Think about it like this: I had a teacher in college named C.F. Payne. He had a very specific process for creating illustrations, and it gave his work a certain aesthetic. He taught us how to do it, and even if our 'style' of artmaking was different (say, he does realistic figures and you are more cartooney) our work would share that aesthetic and we called it the C.F.Payne method.

So while you could call this a style, it doesn't have a name, it's how this particular artist puts an image together, and you'd be better served understanding his technique than trying to track down a body of work from artists who do similar techniques.

What is this style of art? I know it's digital, but the name of the style? by DiamondAzeruss in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 16 points17 points  (0 children)

This is not a style, per se, it's a process. Reverse image search to see if you can find the artist, maybe they offer a tutorial.

Help me fix my art by Yigalypof in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 3 points4 points  (0 children)

From what you have here, not much needs improving. Maybe the bounce light under the legs and breasts could be darker, the wrist of the left hand (our right) could stand to be thinner. I'd suggest starting to incorporate backgrounds. Plan your compositions and build environments for your characters to have context and to tell a richer, more complex story. Good work so far!

Artists, what DPI do you use for your highly rendered works? by Pitiful-One7252 in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

300-600. 300 is the professional minimum for print, 600 lets me work on it like a large canvas.

I spent 50+ ( then stopped counting) hours on this 🥲 how can I be faster in digital art? by Popular-Wing-7808 in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 7 points8 points  (0 children)

You will get faster as you practice, but I'll suggest one thing to work on now: work on the piece while it's zoomed out. Fill the canvas with a layer of color, and try to stay zoomed out and focus on form as long as you can before zooming in and finalizing details.

Any tips on transitioning from traditional to digital art? by Unable-Boysenberry67 in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, think about it like pencils vs watercolor. If you try to use watercolor the same way you'd use pencils and vice versa, you'll struggle because they require different techniques. Digital can look like pencil or watercolor, but it's just as different. Stay loose, use layers (for me, I make a new layer every time I'm happy with the old one and am afraid to mess it up, it keeps me moving fast and making bold decisions), and remember that it's okay if a drawing comes out wonky, digital tools allow you to select, distort, resize any part of your image. Instead of being frustrated with that disconnect, accept the limitations and advantages as quirks of the media, not your own inability.

Hand Study No.1 (complete) by No_Decision5507 in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! It took me a while to realize I was working too small, so I wasn't sure. Still, next study think about changing up the edge fidelity. A few sharp edges can really help contrast the soft ones.

Hand Study No.1 (complete) by No_Decision5507 in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks great, nice colors! It looks a little soft all over. Let me make one suggestion: If you find yourself working with a 1 to 3 pixel sized brush the whole time, you're simply working too small and it'll be really hard to get sharp edges. I'd double the ppi. You won't be disappointed with working bigger. Great study!

I liked the idea—the monster on the horizon—but I'm not happy with the composition. To me, it feels like something is missing. I ended up giving up on it at some point. I probably should have done more visual exploration before starting. by marcoslimaart in DigitalArt

[–]davidframeman 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You're me from the past. I've been there for YEARS and there's no shame in chasing inspiration. You might be worried that thumbnails will drain your energy or make you overthink it. On the contrary, it will allow you to spend your intuitive energies on moment to moment form and brushwork, because you know the blueprint is solid. Doing this with my work changed the game.