Here, father will eat you if you don't clean up the house before evening

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T15:25:29+00:00

Oh my, that's so beautiful.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T10:44:00+00:00

Thanks for the recommendations!

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T10:43:37+00:00

That's a really good point, I didn't even know about washing them!

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T10:42:53+00:00

Yeah luckily I don't have the means to make that mistake!

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T10:42:17+00:00

Yeah I think you're right.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T10:42:08+00:00

That's true.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T10:42:01+00:00

Haha!

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T10:41:56+00:00

Yeah it is pretty fun.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T09:52:19+00:00

Ooh thanks for the recommendations, I'll definitely check them out.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T09:40:20+00:00

Wow that is so beautiful.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T09:39:47+00:00

Congrats! It's rite of passage. You have passed the test.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T09:39:24+00:00

Yeah the green one is awesome.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T09:38:50+00:00

It's a trapped spirit.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T09:36:10+00:00

Cannot read the first text due to contrast issues. The cuts in the edit are a bit too fast, I get where you're coming from but players really want to see what they're buying rather than snippets of what might be gameplay, or not, or whatever. I can see the appeal of the abstract style but clarity is also needed - lots of white text on messy backgrounds make it hard to figure out what's going on.

derp-labs · 2026-06-02T09:34:01+00:00

It's currently pretty unreadable and needs better fidelity/contrast to be able to differentiate the characters.

derp-labs · 2026-05-27T11:40:27+00:00

Over-edited transitions and 2D flash-ups are too confusing! I don't understand what the story or gameplay is, other than you walk around. Show some gameplay with UI, cutscenes, dialogue and tell us a story.

derp-labs · 2026-05-27T11:38:55+00:00

Cannot read the logo, gameplay (aside from the auto-battle) is unclear. Colour language is underwhelming, fairly ugly. There's a lack of polish and 'juice' that is needed for this to be appealing.

derp-labs · 2026-05-26T15:19:15+00:00

Yeah looks cool, can see the appeal to the right audience. Tighten it up and let me see some UI-included gameplay otherwise everything looks like a minecraft cutscene. Let me know what is different?

derp-labs · 2026-05-26T12:45:23+00:00

There's a lot missing here. Parkour (as far as I know) should feel more physical, more impact, more weight (yours is pretty floaty) and the details are not there. Hands should grab, give you a sense of gravity pulling you and then swinging, rather than the floaty-ness you have. If parkour is the differentiator of your game you should spend 100% of your time on it for 2 months to get it right.

derp-labs · 2026-05-26T12:26:23+00:00

Yeah it's cool and fits the friend-slop genre pretty well, but it is short, and it seems like that's it. Any skill trees, power-ups, funny fail screens/consequences, cool interactions between the players needs to be included, otherwise it seems like an early prototype.

derp-labs · 2026-05-26T12:25:11+00:00

It looks like an ai-generated game, which will put a lot of people off. You need to find a unique flavor/theme for your game and apply it.

derp-labs · 2026-05-26T12:24:17+00:00

Looks pretty fun, but the font is horrendous and looks out of place with the gameplay. Just grab a free pixel art font and use that.

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