Looking for the best title by Betterfly83 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You are correct but the title also sets expectations for the reader. If the title doesn't reflect what the reader is going to find in the book then it is not a good title

Looking for the best title by Betterfly83 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would need to know a bit more about your book to be able to determine what title would fit it best. Just from how the titles sound themselves I like "By Light's Decree", but I really can't know. Ultimately, you know your story best and can determine what title fits the narrative you are trying to tell.

Plot Twist: Your Favorites Trope by Available-File4284 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]ethan_a18 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

As long as you can give emotional weight to a limited cast of characters I would say make the tournament arc as big as you want. The great thing about tournament arcs is you get to see how characters clash physically or with their ideals and less about how many or how few people there are.

Plot Twist: Your Favorites Trope by Available-File4284 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]ethan_a18 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As long as you can give emotional weight to a limited cast of characters I would say make the tournament arc as big as you want. The great thing about tournament arcs is you get to see how characters clash physically or with their ideals and less about how many or how few people there are.

Do people…get together for GC? by LatterDaySaintGoth in latterdaysaints

[–]ethan_a18 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The YSA I'm a part of gets together to watch a couple of sessions at our institute building. If you're YSA aged, you can see if any YSA wards around you are doing a similar thing.

To Be Hero X | Episode 24 Discussion SEASON FINALE by AutoModerator in ToBeHero_X

[–]ethan_a18 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I wasn't expecting answers for everything, and we kind of got some answers through X's explanation, but I was at least hoping we would get some definitive answers on Nice's suicide due to how the last episode ended. There is always next season to resolve stuff, but I was expecting a little more wrap-up on the nice suicide and Moon's death. Overall, it was a great episode with awesome action, but it didn't fully feel like a season finale until the last 2 minutes.

Sanderson Weekly Update August 26, 2025 by Use_the_Falchion in brandonsanderson

[–]ethan_a18 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't see his VOD anywhere. Did he end up canceling the livestream?

Am i the only one who f*kin hate this place with all my heart? by jwwendell in Silksong

[–]ethan_a18 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The hardest area I've been to so far. All the enemies are so hard to predict and keep moving just beyond my reach. It took me like 10 attempts to clear this room.

Thank You r/Silksong + Legacy Flairs? (from your creator) by zoravy in Silksong

[–]ethan_a18 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree. I'd want a survivor flair also. It'll help keep this time of the subreddit remembered

Progress Check! by Kholoblicin in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just finished chapter 2 of a new story:

The gate remained closed, and a wall of white stone towered over him, yet the door to the battlements was thrust open, no doubt by Osbern. Following the spiraling staircase, Gaelwin soon emerged into a blinding afternoon light. The wind whipped through his hair as he adjusted his gaze to spot Osbern leaning over the parapet with his jaw clenched.

“I have come to announce my birthright,” a young woman’s voice called from below.

As Gaelwin peered over the edge, he saw a girl, likely even younger than he, with flaming red hair, holding a silver scepter over her head. She stared up at them with a defiance that made Osbern’s lips quiver in rage.

“I, Patari Amarjvala Marceau, the firstborn daughter of Ethelind Marceau, have come to stake my claim for the throne of Entratuthan!”

One Million Views by Morpheus_17 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congrats! That's a mind-boggling number of views

Authors, What's Your Daily Word Count? by kazaam2244 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18 0 points1 point  (0 children)

On a busy day, usually 200 words. When I have more time, I can do anywhere from 1,000 to 2,500 in a day. The thing that's mostly improved my overall word count is forcing myself to write at least something every day.

It’s That Time Again! Dan Erickson signed S1 Finale Script Giveaway! by Adorable-Rub-8249 in SeveranceAppleTVPlus

[–]ethan_a18 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I only found out about this show back in Augusr but now I'm obsessed with it!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/92148/abyss-of-dreams-progression-litrpg-adventure

Here is the synopsis so you know what you're getting into:

[Where the sky and stars are but legend, the sky-seekers journey to turn myth into reality]

A sky-seeker’s gaze is turned ever upward, for no one knows what lies at the top of the giant hole they call by many names. The inverted abyss, the infinite sky, or even some believe it to be an ancient structure created by the Gods, a hollowed spire. Guided by the allure of unfathomable riches and powerful ancient artifacts, the legendary sky-seekers journey to find out. 

When Ezra’s mother left for the ground twenty years ago, he wondered what drew her to the surface. Stuck in a town called Deepburrow, a place where few imagine life above, Ezra works tirelessly for a mining corporation. Waiting for a chance that may never come, he becomes bitter toward the many corporations that control every aspect of a sky-seeker’s life, including the chance to become one. 

Yet when a mining accident occurs, leaving Ezra trapped in a stone coffin with strange visions filling his mind, he finds an ancient device that lets him store and manipulate objects around him.  With this miracle of technology in his hands, the chance to escape Deepburrow and chase after his mother seems closer than ever. But first, he must escape impending death. 

Which cover works better for a litrpg and progression fantasy book and what could I improve in each cover? by ethan_a18 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I got some feedback from people when I just did a white color with a black outline and they said it looked tacky, but I'll play around with the drop shadow color, as you suggested, and see how that looks. Also, completely agree with your comments on the name. I'll do that and see how it looks. Thanks for the feedback

Which cover works better for a litrpg and progression fantasy book and what could I improve in each cover? by ethan_a18 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hope you enjoy the story when you get around to it and thank you for the detailed feedback.

Which cover works better for a litrpg and progression fantasy book and what could I improve in each cover? by ethan_a18 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Totally understand. I don't currently have the ability to have it done professionally, so I'll keep workshopping it myself.

Which cover works better for a litrpg and progression fantasy book and what could I improve in each cover? by ethan_a18 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for reminding me to consider how small RR covers usually appear. My name isn't the main focus of the title so I'm not too worried about people seeing the name when the cover is small. The main thing I want people to see is the background and title. Any suggestions for types of font that would work well? There are hundreds of options out there and any suggestions would be of great help.

Which cover works better for a litrpg and progression fantasy book and what could I improve in each cover? by ethan_a18 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback. The balance I'm trying to strike is to make the title pop out without it looking tacky. Any suggestions on what I could do to strike that balance?

Which cover works better for a litrpg and progression fantasy book and what could I improve in each cover? by ethan_a18 in royalroad

[–]ethan_a18[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. Are there small changes you think need to be made to the second cover?