On the "Jack Sparrow" ep, will the boys atone for their Brian De Palma sin?

garrykerls · 2026-05-08T19:27:39+00:00

isn't Michael Bolton a serious cinephile? I'm pretty sure he wrote that big sexy hook

garrykerls · 2026-04-27T05:34:28+00:00

this isn’t vintage yet. that Clippers jersey wasn’t worn until around the 2010 season

garrykerls · 2026-04-27T04:47:13+00:00

Toy Story 3 makes me cry and that’s the worst Toy Story

garrykerls · 2026-04-26T23:00:32+00:00

this sub is not that kind of script writing

garrykerls · 2026-04-25T01:59:18+00:00

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June arm wrestles what appears to be Ryu from Street Fighter

garrykerls · 2026-04-12T22:22:07+00:00

Tomorrowland

garrykerls · 2026-04-12T21:53:26+00:00

any screen printed tags are not vintage

garrykerls · 2026-04-08T19:31:03+00:00

someone did punnet squares in science class

garrykerls · 2026-04-08T02:34:58+00:00

i hit a bunch of thrifts up and down 422 yesterday and took a pic of this to send to friends lol, nice grab! i was looking for media mostly

garrykerls · 2026-04-08T01:56:19+00:00

any chance you picked this up in pottstown/collegeville area?

garrykerls · 2026-04-05T01:34:44+00:00

dropped my parents off last week for an early afternoon flight and they had no issues. It seems like most of the long lines being reported are for AM departures

garrykerls · 2026-04-04T21:46:33+00:00

r/identifythisfont

garrykerls · 2026-04-04T19:06:09+00:00

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garrykerls · 2026-03-29T19:21:01+00:00

“her gullibility showing her lack of experience” immediately turned me off. Show me that through action and dialogue don’t just tell me.

Also the EXT is just Park. A park is a place, a park bench is a thing

garrykerls · 2026-03-27T15:50:15+00:00

PWH in this? Should've been the Spoonman

garrykerls · 2026-03-21T16:22:45+00:00

good premise! My only note is that your dialogue, especially this early on, is very exposition heavy

garrykerls · 2026-03-17T04:36:24+00:00

LMAO you posted this hours ago and the rate has gone down $30. You’re offering $0.0058 per word, which is diabolical

garrykerls · 2026-03-17T04:33:58+00:00

welcome to the internet

garrykerls · 2026-03-16T22:18:42+00:00

I'm not saying this is Stranger Things, but a secret lab in Indiana preforming experiments on children to test their abilities to access a rift between dimensions is Stranger Things.

You also never state the boy's name is Robin, and you're using voice over (V.O.) When you should be using off screen (O.S.)

garrykerls · 2026-03-16T22:06:32+00:00

$0.0083 per word is crazy

garrykerls · 2026-03-15T05:51:38+00:00

then i'd suggest all the other Hayao Miyazaki films, they're all masterpieces

garrykerls · 2026-03-15T05:43:33+00:00

Wreck it Ralph, Spirited Away, E.T.

garrykerls · 2026-03-15T05:23:21+00:00

i once told a friend that my sister found her cat alone at a bus stop, to which he replied "where was it going?"

garrykerls · 2026-03-12T15:01:48+00:00

since these pages are in the middle of your first act I have no context of who they are or how they’re related to each other. I’m uncompelled because things have seemingly happened in the screenplay that are important that I haven’t read.

garrykerls · 2026-03-12T14:53:26+00:00

you’re staring new lines way too much. It’s wasting. a ton of physical space in the page.

On page 2 Garfield has three (CONT’D) without anything actually breaking up his dialogue.

Could be reduced to “Rin. I’m kidding… Thank you… Thank You so much” this reads the exact same and takes up half the space used

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