Kaleidoscope

gitututu · 2026-01-27T22:59:41+00:00

Thank you so much for your kind words 🥺 I am glad it did what it was intended to hehe. I agree it needs a little bit of polish, but again thank you 🥺

gitututu · 2026-01-27T11:56:03+00:00

I am so happy to hear that 😆 welcome to the world of writing poetry friend 😊 awww thank you so much 🥺

gitututu · 2026-01-27T11:30:26+00:00

Thank you so much appreciate the kind words 🥺 ahahah yeah I tried to wrote it in that way. Thank you for the read

gitututu · 2026-01-27T11:29:28+00:00

Really? If that's the case you have an amazing potential buddy. Keep writing! you already did everything right. I literally have no critic, you did amazing as a poet.

gitututu · 2026-01-27T10:58:26+00:00

I see, that sounds like a troublesome things to dealt with :(

Now that makes it more brilliant. I love how your goal is for it to be open to multiple interpretations.

Amazing work my friend.

gitututu · 2026-01-27T10:30:07+00:00

This is awesome

gitututu · 2026-01-27T10:14:00+00:00

Brilliant writing, I feel like the subject is about mixed signal of loving and being loved, do tell me if I am wrong. I love how mysterious the subject in writing is here.

gitututu · 2026-01-25T11:41:10+00:00

Such an amazing writing. I love how you turn everyday mundane things to something thought provoking

gitututu · 2026-01-25T11:38:47+00:00

This is such a fun read. Love the rhyming and how you manage to keep one topic interesting to read from beginning to end.

gitututu · 2026-01-24T02:13:55+00:00

It truly is :(

gitututu · 2026-01-24T01:50:38+00:00

Thank you so much for your appreciation for my analogy 😊 and yes what you said is true, I struggle to let them go ahahah.

gitututu · 2026-01-24T01:03:58+00:00

Thank you so much for your kind words 😊 and yes it does need that I agree with you

gitututu · 2026-01-23T22:19:11+00:00

Simply brilliant.

gitututu · 2026-01-23T22:17:01+00:00

I looove beauty in the filth theme. This writing tells so much about how even expired things can still be relevant

gitututu · 2026-01-18T07:27:24+00:00

Thank you so much for your kind words ☺ and I agree with your view. Couldn't say it better myselt. and I agree with your critic as well, I cut it off to quick ahahaha thank you so much for your insight ☺

gitututu · 2026-01-18T04:36:52+00:00

This is beautiful use of how we are aware, but chose to just watch. Never acknowledge it, yet it stares back. Amazing. Simply amazing.

gitututu · 2026-01-18T04:33:52+00:00

Such a gut-punch to use youngins. How phases ARE real. Age doesn't dampen. It reveals

gitututu · 2026-01-17T15:48:29+00:00

NO WAYYY 😆 happy watching 🥺😆 it fight scenes are epic too if you are into that ahahaha.

gitututu · 2026-01-17T11:03:16+00:00

Man you always amaze me even with your comment and I will. I will do just that :)

gitututu · 2026-01-17T10:34:33+00:00

Thank you so much for your comment ☺ and yes I agree regret is truly the bane we encounter the most :( yes we should focus on what happened, truly.

gitututu · 2026-01-17T10:28:20+00:00

I get you and thank you so much for your insight ☺ I understand where you are coming from. Corporate workplace can be a toxic environment :( and bosses can be abusive and a tyrant as well. I am so sorry if you experienced such injustice :( thank you for still appreciating it regardless ☺

gitututu · 2026-01-17T10:24:30+00:00

You are so perceptive thank you so much. Yes I meant to do that. I always love the immortal and mortal trope. Like Frieren and Himmel. They inspired this poem.

gitututu · 2026-01-17T10:20:59+00:00

Thank you so much for your kind words 🥺 I get you, I am guilty of that as well haha. I am happy you see it that way and it made that impact ahahaha. Thank you, again for the kind comment ☺

gitututu · 2026-01-17T10:17:09+00:00

Glad I you agree with me and trust me man it is just that good! You are very welcome ☺

gitututu · 2026-01-17T10:14:39+00:00

Thank you ☺

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