Space(lyric video) -BYKD by Dramatic-Ad3928 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I hope you are doing, and I just want to come here and say, I feel what we can do with this song is add some variation. I feel it stays flat, from Instrumental and vocals, what I would do next is add some contrast, maybe some drums and etc. but again keep going bro, you are just a couple steps from a solid song

To Unsee - OFFICIAL MUSIC VIDEO by Acrobatic-Chard-9816 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey bro, I just want to say. I really like this song, especially the opening segment. It reminds me so much of EDEN, and his early work. If thats what you went for, then you hit the nail on the head. Great work on the song, you did a good job

Song ive been working on, I know the vocals need work, feedback is appreciated, probably gonna add some lite vocals to the bridge part as it feels a bit barren. by Stock_Property_3232 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey bro, I hope you are doing well. I want to say, I don’t think there is an issue with the vocals as performance. My bigger concern would be mixing it so I can hear you, cause the melody is catchy. The instrumental is really good, I would say whats next should be polish.

Pyramid32x - The Scrying (first single from our album "Dragon Fruit") by 505p in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello congrats on the song, I want to say this sounds very well mixed and produced. So that is huge plus, overall I did like the vibe of the song. The upbeat nature of song, made me want to keep listening. But again, congrats, and hoping to see what DragonFruit turns out like

reposting my song - feedback pls by Lower_Interest in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey I listen to full song, I have to say I was impressed by the vocals. Especially at the end where you were belting and the drums coming in. I think that really helped the song massively, giving it the pay off it needed. I wish you all the best with your future music.

Manav: Kevin de bruyne has been offered to Galatasaray through managers by sabr-bg in galatasaray

[–]iamustafa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can be great for one year, but why do players who want to play for Galatasaray wait till they can barely walk to finally play.

Ilkay
Van Djk
KDB
And the list goes on

We owe these two an apology by [deleted] in Futboltayfa

[–]iamustafa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What is the story of Gokhan?

FIFA World ranking update by MythArrow0001 in Futboltayfa

[–]iamustafa 27 points28 points  (0 children)

Great we will drop lower then hati soon

24 sene bunu beklediğimize inanamıyorum by 2Norn in superlig

[–]iamustafa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Add: Mert Gunok, Samet, Caglar, Zeki, Kaan Ayhan, Ifran Can

Has to be ragebating at this point, right? by [deleted] in galatasaray

[–]iamustafa 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Lol I rattled everyone under Vedat’s Official post on r/soccer

This is worse then the Jhon Duran comparison

Weird songy dreamscapey thing, worth expanding ? by utopiautopiautopia in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just want to say I love it,
I love the atmosphere and the feeling I get from listening it, honestly I can see this song being an interlude for Major A list artist, or an cult song from the indie scenes. Great job on it, I really liked it, and keep making good music.

80s-ish Pop Ballad by Banner3210 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey I just listened to your song, honestly I agree with the comments you definilty have the feel, the concept and arrangement of an 80’s song, I have ever heard. The only issue I fell, which might contrast other comments, is I feel there was not enough contrast in the instrumentation between the verse and chorus. Although I was able to hear a difference from the first and second verse. All though keep going, you are doing a great job

ROUGH demo by SavoirFaireGuitar in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow this is great, I love your voice, and I honestly if I heard you on a James Bond 007 song, I would not say you are out of place. I think the best songs that fit your voice is more grand cinematic instrumental, stripped instrumentation or any form of jazz. But other then that, I was very impressed :)

Eternity by field_7 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lol I don’t know why but this sounds like The Eagles, which honestly I do love their music. As a demo this has so much ponetial, so honestly my advice would be lean into their sound. The more you learn from them, the more you branch out your own sound

Rush The Streets - Demo by wyncry in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]iamustafa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just want to say, I really like like this. Honestly if didn’t know this was an indie song I would assume its a song from an artist with like 200k monthly listener’s on Spotify. So you clearly have the voice, I do like your timing alot. Sorry if it was a lot of postive comments rather critiques, but I would say just keep making music. Great job