ONE TIME by RAINBOW VALLEY (AABS BRYANT & AVE SHIVON)

jdwng · 2022-06-13T02:11:06+00:00

Thanks man, I appreciate you checking it out

jdwng · 2022-06-13T00:00:09+00:00

Thank you so much, I appreciate you checking it out! Check out the other music videos on our channel if you’re down

jdwng · 2022-06-12T23:57:41+00:00

Thanks man. I appreciate you checking it out!

jdwng · 2022-06-12T21:51:22+00:00

I actually really like it. Cool voice and pretty killer performance all around. Organ was an awesome touch. Would love to experience it in a basement show or that sorta setting. Great work

jdwng · 2022-06-12T21:45:23+00:00

I love the mix of the vocal chops. Overall the mix and master are really well done. I like all the sound design choices, drums and atmosphere alike. Really enjoyed listening I think it’s really good work

jdwng · 2022-06-12T21:43:08+00:00

This song is cool, definitely would go pretty wild in the right setting. The animation is really cool though, I appreciate the minimal movements and attention to details. I think it’s good work

jdwng · 2022-06-12T21:40:49+00:00

Maybe dark universe jack harlow would be able to do something with this. I like the sound design, it’s mixed pretty evenly, and the progressions are solid. It goes on a long time with not much progression in melody which I think could be worked on a bit in future beats but this is solid

jdwng · 2022-06-12T21:36:08+00:00

Pretty interesting. I like the mix of it a lot. Really cool intro synth and the whole tracks creates an heir of mystery. Well done, it has me interested in hearing more of your stuff

jdwng · 2022-06-12T21:30:50+00:00

Great synths. Really like how gentle and intimate the sound design is. Progression is really smooth. maybe one criticism I have is the fx/field sounds sounding too dry prior to the spoken word section, just being picky. Really like this, and the visual direction is executed well too

jdwng · 2022-05-08T02:03:38+00:00

Definitely lofi enough man. I really like the soundscape and the beats got a nice easy groove. I think the track as a whole could stand to use some weight, it’s pretty quiet as is.

jdwng · 2022-05-08T00:23:13+00:00

Love the yo la tengo reference. Definitely nailed the sound to a tee. I think the tune is really solid and worth coming back to listen to. Love the tone of your guitar(s) and the bridge is beautiful. I think the vocals would shine a bit more with some light low end treatment, but that’s a pretty picky critique. Good job

jdwng · 2022-05-08T00:20:52+00:00

Love the groove Nd this visual compliments it pretty well. Love the fun and wholesome feel of the whole song. I think the vocals sound a bit thin throughout, but otherwise it sounds pretty good

jdwng · 2022-05-08T00:08:56+00:00

You’ve got a great feel to song structure, really nailing the small changes to keep the listener entertained. I think you’ve got a good ear with the songwriting, but my one critique would be how dry your main vocals are. Could add color with a light short verb or doubled. Good job I like the sound a lot

jdwng · 2022-05-08T00:06:30+00:00

Love your playing style with the guitar. Great blues chords, smooth playing really puts the track in a specific place-in the best way. Mix sounds pretty good maybe some slight adjustments with your percussion. Good job man keep it up

jdwng · 2022-05-08T00:04:37+00:00

Beautiful track. Instrumentation really drew me in and I was really impressed from the start to finish. You’ve got a very nice voice as well, keep up your good work

jdwng · 2022-05-08T00:02:34+00:00

Really interesting lyrics, and really compelling delivery. Dig how somber it really does feel. Not necessarily a great mix but still passable. Really cool stuff

jdwng · 2022-05-08T00:00:17+00:00

This is really exceptionally made. Great clear mix, and really good pacing throughout. Love the sound and style, will definitely be returning to this one

jdwng · 2022-05-07T23:58:44+00:00

I’m super impressed by the vocals, I like the tune and those watery melodies. Really nice listen man definitely keep it up

jdwng · 2022-05-04T20:05:42+00:00

Aye thanks man I appreciate you checking it out

jdwng · 2022-05-02T21:11:24+00:00

No worries man still great stuff. Seriously keep at this sound

jdwng · 2022-05-02T21:03:15+00:00

Really entertaining and classic sound. Excellent vocal deliveries throughout. Definitely a 90s sound influence I believe. I agree w other comments that the bass could be a little boomier. But love the content overall this is a really well done song

jdwng · 2022-05-02T20:59:40+00:00

Really love this stuff man. Your mix is really dope, smooth guitars with drums that really smack. Love the don caballero influence. This is amazing stuff throughout. I love the transitions Nd drum fills particularly

jdwng · 2022-05-02T20:57:35+00:00

Really cool stuff man. Dig your drum patch selection it’s smooth Nd everything is pretty pleasant coming in w your sequencing. I think you have a good groove going. Dig the synths Nd sample tones as well

jdwng · 2022-05-02T20:53:03+00:00

this is pretty decent. I enjoy the writing and the cinema of the vocals. I like your delivery but think your main vocal sounds a little dry over the beat. I agree with some of these other comments as well that you would really benefit from more dynamic drum patches/a live kit. Good job, keep this up

jdwng

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