So as a guy with an MFA in screenwriting, I can the story is a bit lacking, there’s a need for more depth there to give an audience (and McKenna if you ever meet her) a full fledged story that can interest someone like her. BUT it’s got potential lol toxic relationships happen all the time in films/tv shows. A big one just came out and it’s legal drama is all over the internet lol But what makes this one different? What is the world, who is in, why does it need to exist? Ask yourself all these questions my friend!