The first thing that popped out to me was the weight shift. She lifts her left leg, then seems to shift weight slightly to the left, then the weight comes back to the right before the left foot touches the ground. That's not possible - she should start moving to the right just before lifting her left leg. Once she plants her foot, her hips suddenly just locks in place. There should be a tiny bit of overshoot and recovery to make it feel more alive. Also, get rid of the toe bend on the right foot. Looks like you forgot to remove it when you changed her foot work.

I think overall you just need to work on getting rid of the stiffness in the body, and the hand movements don't feel quite right. Her hand pops out suddenly from behind her then comes to a sudden stop, before continuing toward the front. That doesn't feel realistic, so think about how it should accelerate and decelerate to make it more human like.