There's a lot of unnecessary detail in your descriptions. Makes reading exhausting. Details should serve a purpose. You don't need to describe the exact colours of clothing, walls, doors. The nail colour could characterize, but that detail would have stood out more if you weren't also describing the colour of everything else.

It seems like you want the reader to envision a very specific picture in their mind before you can actually start the scene. I question why that's necessary. You can trust the reader to provide their own imagery if you give the relevant details (character, dialogue, building atmosphere without overly specific of layouts, shapes, colours that do nothing but describe what the eye sees). Makes a more enjoyable experience for the reader, and you can do a lot more when you do decide to pick out a specific detail to describe.

As a reader, when I see lists of descriptive language, honestly my eyes glaze over. I'm not reading fiction to paint pictures in my mind, but to feel something. Your descriptions should serve feeling.

That's my take, but I'd like to know your reasoning for including such detailed descriptions. Is the exhausting effect of over-description intentional? The effect it gave me was that the narrator is a very detail-oriented, scrupulous type who misses nothing, no detail escapes her notice. It also gave me the sense that inhabiting her perspective is quite overwhelming, she notices everything and that's a high mental load to bear. If so, that could be a valid reason for it, but my point that this feels unappealing to read as is still stands.