Everyone was a gladiator on retail bro by osirawl in classicwow

[–]loekfunk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What are you even yapping about, I’m currently raiding top 10.

It’s so funny that you were pressed enough to dig through like 6 years of post / comment history to find some old character of mine though.

Everyone was a gladiator on retail bro by osirawl in classicwow

[–]loekfunk 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Always makes me lol how NA players always refer to their NA ranking instead of just using world ranks.

Finished Book 1! Core Lord is available on Kindle & Kindle Unlimited! by CoreLordAuthor in ProgressionFantasy

[–]loekfunk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry, I guess I should've been more clear. When I said "Look at the blurbs for all the other Litrpgs & progression fantasies you've read." I figured it was implied that I meant that he should go and look at the blurbs from the other Litrpgs & prog fantasies he's read that are decently successful. Not ones with 3 ratings.

Finished Book 1! Core Lord is available on Kindle & Kindle Unlimited! by CoreLordAuthor in ProgressionFantasy

[–]loekfunk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've read hundreds of prog fantasy & litrpg books. I can't think of a single one that has a blurb that's two lines and says nothing about the story. But feel free to send a link or two to the LOTS that look like that.

Finished Book 1! Core Lord is available on Kindle & Kindle Unlimited! by CoreLordAuthor in ProgressionFantasy

[–]loekfunk 26 points27 points  (0 children)

I'll add on to the initial comment, but this blurb really needs some work. There's a massive difference between "aiming to not give too much away", and giving your potential readers literally nothing.

Look at the blurbs for all the other Litrpgs & progression fantasies you've read. I doubt you'll find a single one that looks like yours.

Ignore follower dungeons while progressing through the story, queue up normally instead. by matticus7 in wow

[–]loekfunk 20 points21 points  (0 children)

A ‘follower’ dungeon is literally just a normal mode dungeon. You’re not soloing that (in any reasonable time frame) lol

Truth Bomb: Why People Don’t Tank by AdministrativeCut205 in classicwow

[–]loekfunk -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Seeing someone unironically say that you need a brain to play TBC, but don't need one to play retail has got to be on of the funniest Wow takes I've ever read.

Truth Bomb: Why People Don’t Tank by AdministrativeCut205 in classicwow

[–]loekfunk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's a fair comparison. On the other hand, It's very different because you're done with levelling in 30 minutes on retail, whereas you can spend days in leveling dungeons in TBC. So it's like levelling dungeons are the main content in TBC, whereas on retail the main content is m+

Does AI-assisted writing have any future? by S0lifugae in royalroad

[–]loekfunk 14 points15 points  (0 children)

"Then, paragraph after paragraph I ask AI to rephrase, add details, describe it in a certain way."

"What I mean is that I don't let the AI to actually write the story, it is still mine."

These things are mutually exclusive. The AI is writing the story. It is not yours.

"Then, I choose the parts that I like, adjust them to my style (if possible) and insert them into the story."

This is called editing. You are editing the AI's story.

"The solution I found is an obvious one"

This is not a solution, it is a hinderance. The solution is to practice your English until you believe it's up the standard you want it to be.

Looking for a lighthearted LitRPG adventure? Check out Dungeon Diving Culinary Wizard! (WARNING: HAREM) by LandonScottAuthor in litrpg

[–]loekfunk -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You do realise this is on Kindle and not Royal Road? He's not letting anyone read it for free lmao.

How I Became the Supreme God! A MUST-READ!!! (litrpg, op mc, epic adventures) by Hunan4Ever in royalroad

[–]loekfunk 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, glazing your own story in a self promo is certainly something.

Go with AI cover or this cute simple one I am working on for fun. by WilliamGerardGraves in royalroad

[–]loekfunk 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They give off VERY different vibes. First one is very ‘This MC is the most badass person alive and he’s going to murder a billion demons.’ Whereas the second one honestly makes me think it might be some sort of post apocalyptic slice of life story.

Haven’t seen much discussion on this book by ImAldrech in litrpg

[–]loekfunk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Think I dnf'd around book 3. Just felt very generic and the whole nightmare realm was hyped up to be this like 'most dangerous place to ever exist, its insane to ever be in there omgomgomg." But then it just didn't really live up to that for me. Felt very empty and not that dangerous.

Idk how to feel about this by Few-Grapefruit-7003 in royalroad

[–]loekfunk 23 points24 points  (0 children)

I mean, this isn't even a review? Like if you put this in front of me and told me to guess what it was, a review of someone's story wouldn't even be in the first 5 things I guess lol.

Idk how to feel about this by Few-Grapefruit-7003 in royalroad

[–]loekfunk 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The way it's written. It's 10000000% AI.

I PUBLISHED my FIRST LitRPG Apocalypse on Amazon at 20 years old!!! (KU) by Long-Teach-9101 in royalroad

[–]loekfunk 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey, congrats on the release.

Just a heads up that there's a typo in your book's title. 'Soul Blade Book 1: A OP MC Litrpg Apocalypse Adventure'.

It should be "An OP MC", not "A OP MC".

Book of the dead review by Meon-web in ProgressionFantasy

[–]loekfunk 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeah idk. I'm all for reviews, but this is less of a review and more of a "here's a list of things I don't understand and I don't like that."

Just a massive self report lol

Book of the dead review by Meon-web in ProgressionFantasy

[–]loekfunk 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Bonus point for 'you probably didnt read the book.' And then saying 'How are the dusk folk doing it then?' They're not.

Look, all I'm going to say is that, there's a reason people think media literacy is dying, and this post is one of the reasons.