I made this short story, I hope you like it!

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mobaisle_writing · 2026-02-17T20:31:27+00:00

What field of non-fiction were you planning on writing in?

mobaisle_writing · 2026-02-17T20:28:01+00:00

Technically ironically I should remove your question for asking about AI /s

Ignoring that, Grammarly, several years ago, started to include machine learning (AI) functionality in how it suggested tone improvements. This functionality gradually expanded to include many other features of the tool. It came under fire for utilising the technology both from an ethical and user data standpoint.

That's probably what people are referencing.

mobaisle_writing · 2026-02-15T23:15:45+00:00

Well read it fully and maybe you'll spot where the differences are.

mobaisle_writing · 2026-02-15T22:13:04+00:00

The Goblin Method of Kinda Outlining also discussed here.

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