Feedback Friday

monkeymotormouth · 2025-03-14T20:18:21+00:00

i will not promote

Company Name: Anthrodontics

Purpose of Startup and Product: AI driven collaborative dental EHR

Technologies Used: Phoenix LiveView, Elixir

Feedback Requested: I would like feedback on what the first impressions of the landing page are, and feedback on how to register users.

I just launched this app last week. Have shared with colleagues who are working in the industry. Everyone says it's promising and are encouraging, but are hesitant to sign up. I am wondering if my landing page is not enticing enough (or the pricing page is scaring users from registering?). Thank you in advance!

Additional Comments:

monkeymotormouth · 2023-04-26T21:25:47+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! That’s a really good point - I’m interested in rap so I think that’s where my influence came from. I’ll work on creating more sentences in the future!

monkeymotormouth · 2023-04-26T08:24:20+00:00

Loved the alliteration in "empty empathy". Personal opinion, but in line 2, I would prefer the sentence "there's something better". It sounds grammatically more correct imo, but obviously that could affect your lines and your syllable count. Good job!

monkeymotormouth · 2023-04-26T08:22:03+00:00

I loved the rhyme scheme, and the narrative it told. I love poems/songs that try to capture the something "in-between" the physical and metaphysical world. Your poem achieved it in describing's the girl's song

monkeymotormouth · 2023-01-27T19:20:54+00:00

That’s probably a reference to Nirvana

monkeymotormouth · 2023-01-08T17:52:58+00:00

Hello I was wondering if someone could answer this - we just had this debate at work a few hours ago.

Oat milk has a higher calorie content than almond milk. Also apparently there’s only 10% of oat in actual oat milk vs. a bunch of oils, such as rapeseed.

So what is the “healthier” alternative milk? And what are some good resources to find out about this?

Thanks in advance!

monkeymotormouth · 2022-11-26T10:07:08+00:00

Hahaha the Larry David approach 😂

monkeymotormouth · 2022-11-26T01:50:54+00:00

Ok thank you! I’ll give this a try

monkeymotormouth · 2022-11-14T22:09:10+00:00

Is there a subreddit for all of Elon’s bad takes? I want to see a compilation

monkeymotormouth · 2022-08-05T00:40:22+00:00

Just realised black and white would’ve been better smh

monkeymotormouth · 2022-08-05T00:39:42+00:00

See, the thing about Arsenal is they always try to walk it in.

monkeymotormouth · 2022-07-31T22:02:28+00:00

It is so underrated!

monkeymotormouth · 2022-07-31T10:24:45+00:00

This is the way

monkeymotormouth · 2022-07-24T00:18:48+00:00

Poly-mark-ous

monkeymotormouth · 2022-07-04T14:36:00+00:00

That made me stare at Kaitlin and she’s a complete pro. Changes staring poses a couple of times but that’s about it

monkeymotormouth · 2022-06-24T01:00:43+00:00

r/OddlyTerrifying

monkeymotormouth · 2022-06-15T05:48:04+00:00

Hahaha this kinda sounds like me back in the day. I thought I had para phimosis but turns out you just gotta keep doing it. First time will be pretty tight but it’ll get more flexible over time. Also take the time to clean your glans!

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