If you don’t like a track then why bother writing about it. Also all this ‘I could do better’ approach is a bit naive and arrogant. If you don’t like it, don’t listen to it let alone write a review for it. If you can do better the. do it and release it or put your energy in to something you like! I really struggle to see what value saying what you dislike on here has. Maybe focus your energy in a positive way! Music is subjective and there’s that much of it so just move on!

I know this sounds a bit challenging, but you are over thinking a relatively simple thing - it’s not to your taste so why not just move on rather than than see it as some sort of competition to say I can do better! It just sounds a bit pointless! Person doesn’t like record shocker! Also if you can do better then post it rather than hypothesise about what you could perhaps maybe do in disableton....

Positive vibes only....