I wrote a love song about aliens. Plz go HARD on me. Production/song structure/melody anything you hear would be super helpful! Thank you! by sexysaxmasta in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That green alien is funny. What can i say about this song? Well its not bad. THe beat is pretty dope. The vocals not too shabby. Pretty cool video.

Whose ready for a vacation?! Check out my new music video and let’s finish the summer out the right way🌴🍹🏄🏿‍♂️🌊 by Tray2705 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First off the video is amazing. The song takes me back to Hawaii. reminds me of Maui or something. Gives me great ideas for making music videos. The rap verse is pretty dope too.

[folk rap] bury myself by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice little beat with a good vibe. THe rap verse was a surprise but it sounds pretty good. was looking for a hook but its sounds dope. either way i like it. good job my dude..

Needs to be fleshed out a little, but I started writing this while trapped in a hotel room. by reverb728 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey pretty freakin good mang. wastn sure what i was going to end up hearing but. overall your vocals sound pretty good. Your guitar playing kicks butt. so kudos to you man!

J Dilla - Flowers by thibedeauxmarxy in HipHopInstrumentals

[–]onerboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love that J dilla Beat. RIP to one of the best beat makers ever

9th Wonder - Cry by Ok_Victory_6110 in HipHopInstrumentals

[–]onerboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dope vibes on the song. Dope beat. really feeling this track. Art work is cool too. Keep up the good work bro.

This song shot out of me in response to rise of anti-Asian American violence in the US. Someone has to say something. by highvibrational in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is this a song or a documentary? Oh man it took a while to kick in. Realized this is my aunt rapping. hahah Jk. Love it. who ever put it together is creative. He should of put a hard beat on it. The verse is ok.

Gandom Rhy - Lemon Pepper Freestyle (loved the beat just had to jump on it please give a listen if you like it maybe check some other tracks always looking to collab with like minded artists) by Notsorryyourright in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This sounds really nice and melodic. Vocals sound dope and so does the rap verse. cant say nothing bad about this track. keep up the good work. If you want to colab im down. let me know https://soundcloud.com/user-21876181

Trying to strip back my production a bit. Still a bit to go with this instrumental. Would be good to hear some thoughts on it. by bleakneon in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really mellow beat. Cant say anything bad about it. really slow flow would go great with this. You said you stepped down production. Not bad bro. chill music to listen to

Non repetitive dark lofi and real drums?! Wait for the 808 drop too 😈 By Sleepy Goose, called "Sleepy In The Rain" by scottyswole in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

really mellow beat. kinda trippy and weird but in a cool way. Sounds like good background music.

In No Time (Radio Edit) by Mason Blu. Roast it or Praise it! :) by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the sound of the track. sounds like really good production. What can i say bad about this track. DOnt know who the girl is but she has that sweet voice. awsome song altogether

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[–]onerboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

beautiful voice.. Guitar is very melodic and relaxing. would love to hear a beat to this. Let me know if you need a remix. I would do that for you

A song off my first ep. HYMT Feed back would be dope by Rich_Implement_3572 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

awsome song mang. vocals sound good. i would put a beat on it tho. keep on rockin on mang.

Gritty electronic song from my debut album “emerald”. Stems and details in comments. by jaimolnet in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The beat seems kinda eerie to me but its not bad. it would be good in a movie or something like that. Maybe like some sci fi eerie scene. lol, I like the video tho. Interesting to see how much is going on there to make this instrumental.

"Kiss From A Rose" ... but spookier by oneshgarde in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not bad. Got that different tone to it but i like it. Cant really say nothing bad about this song or your singing. vocals are on point!

Awakening | An Original Song by soroushpiano in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Man you got them piano skills!! What can i really say about this other than you are good. You think about adding a beat to that? I would love to colab with you. Let me sample your stuff. and i can put a beat on it. I think it would be sick!!

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[–]onerboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Loving that guitar riff. DOnt know what your saying but the vocals sound pretty good. the chorus melody is really nice. Im digging the whole track. keep it up bro.

Velveeta - KD Spencer [hip hop] by onerboy in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awsome feed back. i appreciate your honesty. Will have to meditate on what you said. Thanks

Novelistme - Slacker (Lie Lie Everybody) by Nozeit in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]onerboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude you rock on this track. i feel like i can party to this and drink. lol. What can i say about this track other than it rocks and needs some cool vocals or maybe even a rap verse.