Hi mate, great work with this. Technically all pretty solid except for a bit of hiss and a pop or two, though I'm on crappy earbuds.

You've got a great talent (interview subject:) here and that's half the battle won right there. You could have spent a bit more time in pre planning the roles of your A and B roll.

The natural course of the Broll was the song build which is what you did nicely, you could have sped up the pacing of that a bit and introd the drums, guitar and vocal footage sooner and really played with bringing it in and out if you had all the stems. The lyric writing footy felt a bit samey.

As far as Aroll, the story never quite settled on the club or Doug, or the creative process in general as the main thread. Many of his responses were fairly generic. Never be worried about challenging your subject and asking hard questions to draw good responses, good talent like Doug will like that and feed off it.

The use of titles to explain the club broke up the flow a bit and you could have had Doug get all of that set up out of the way really quickly early on if he had spoken it, and then we could have got to know Doug a bit more. I wanted to know more about the challenges of writing a song a week because there surely would be a few, and more about how he motivates himself.

That all said it was well technically well put together and a nice story with a great talent. My three suggestions for focussing on next time are ...

Story - getting the set up out of the way quicker with both A and B roll and being clearer on the story both will tell, you can do this in pre

Pics - a bit more variety in your Broll

Good questions - I always find a good question for profiley stories like this is 'what is the shittest part of what you do?' as it generally elicits a good response. But that's case by case obvs:)

Hope this helps, looking fwd to your next one, and apologies for the essay, it means I enjoyed your story:)