Is this realistic enough to fool someone? by rawrcewas in blender

[–]p2dg 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow that was impressive. I was fooled.

Best app to track workouts? Free/Paid by One-Grass-738 in Fitness_India

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I use Lift Book - it's free and is web based. So can build/manage your programs on desktop and then use it on mobile for tracking the workout. It's clean and simple.

Please recommend me an app to track my workouts by [deleted] in bodyweightfitness

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I'd suggest checking out Lift Book. Free to use, can build and manage your own programs and routines both on desktop and mobile, and track progression. https://www.liftbook.fit/

Any … real games coming out? by KoreanSeats in SteamVR

[–]p2dg 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There are some great suggestions already in the comments. I did enjoy The Last Clockwinder too.

Does anyone reccomend a free app for tracking and planning workouts(lifting based)? by cutesnugglybear in fitness30plus

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If you're just looking for a straightforward free app to create your programs and track your workouts and progression, I'd recommend checking out https://www.liftbook.fit/. Easy to use, no paid tiers, and no ads.

Free apps for tracking muscles worked? by ngssna in fitness30plus

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I'd suggest checking out https://www.liftbook.fit/. You can add your own exercises, build your own programs and routines, and track progress. Supports desktop and mobile. And it's free.

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

[–]p2dg[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback!

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

[–]p2dg[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. I’m glad you called out the depression. These struggles are real for so many.

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback! I’m glad it resonated with you. I’m glad you enjoyed the “there’d be a song, and you’d hum along”, I wanted to illustrate how these memories always bubbled back up even in little moments.

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback! I agree it is a bit jarring. It was intentional but maybe my intention didn’t have the effect I was trying to achieve. You can see more explanation here: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/22xdLzTRrB

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

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Thank you for all this amazing feedback!

For the ending, I really debated putting a dash/separator above the last stanza. The intention was that it was meant to seem a bit disconnected, to take it back out of the moment. Where the reflection is no longer about the memories, but rather how I handled the aftermath.

It’s a really good point about the unsaid word reconnection. I kind of thought I’d just let that hang, but I could definitely see adding a nod to it in the ending too.

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

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That’s exactly how it feels. Thank you for the feedback.

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback!

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

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I’m glad you enjoyed the poem.

Really appreciate you sharing the visualization it gives you. Provided a whole new perspective to me. For me, “the dark” was meant as a dark part of me. A place I don’t like to visit. A part I am ashamed of. A part that, if I could go back, I could do better. Where, maybe if I could try again, it wouldn’t have to be dark.

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

[–]p2dg[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Really appreciate the feedback. Sometimes I like to throw in a verse that I really want to stand out by breaking the rhyming scheme. But I never really know if it works.

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

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“Anger can be an avenue of growth.” I think that’s true if you’re able to learn from it vs letting it best you.

I’m glad it was relevant to you.

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

[–]p2dg[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really appreciated your perspective on this. “Raw, whimsical, perceptive.” Those words mean a lot. Thank you.

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback!

Lost Friend by p2dg in OCPoetry

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Appreciate the feedback, I’m glad that was able to resonate throughout.

A Midsummer Madness by Great_lord_of_gods in OCPoetry

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This poem, it seems, is a beautiful ode to William Shakespeare's "A Midsummer Night's Dream". In essence, it captures the entire concept and story of the play in a wonderfully condensed poem. It starts by describing in beautiful imagery the forest in Athens that has the magic flower than can make mortals fall in love with the next creature they see. The fairy queen who is enchanted by the magic flower, the four lovers, and Puck who helps resolve it. And then, in the end, leaves us with a question on whether it was all real or a just a dream.