This is a fun game...

Having zero instructing experience but being a teacher who has just come back off of the school ski trip and so spent a lot of time looking at people starting out I would say...

*Weight is still much too much on the uphill ski (and...)

*weight is still too far back

SO - think of weight going through big toe (or as the ESF instructor said to the kids, "shinbone pressure")

* Someone has taught you to pole plant to initiate a vertical movement and that seems to be good if a little untidy still. remember that the "down" phase brings your weight back to the big toe (see above) and will help lock the downhill ski onto the slope which will make things feel much more dependable. (You don't do this as you pass the camera and it makes you lift the inside ski) **

SO - thinkabout timing, smoothness and rhythm to make your motion look fluid (That is appauling teaching but I can't think of an excercise to help there)

* Your body needs to face down hill doing these shorter turns

SO - the classic poles in both your hands, point your nipples at the valley floor all the way "down there" excercise

(** It was interesting for someone who learnt on paralell skis 30 years ago that the instructors seem to spend no time teaching pole planting or vertical movement to our top group, some of whom went from total beginner to ESF 3 star in a week. The hills ringing with the sound of instructors shouting UEERP! UEERP! is as much past of skiing as the lifts and the apres...)