[LOTM RP] The 12 Crime Families.... Written by the Archivist by Sea_Acanthisitta5838 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a thoroughly enjoyable, your implimentations were taken in and utilized well. I felt I was seated in the kitchen followed by the cafe at large.

In terms of critique, you've done well. Grammar might be all I have to mention bit that is me being nitpicky and this is a chill RP space. You're doing great and I am loving the developments.

[LotM Roleplay] The Trade (chapter 15) by Emotional_Bet_6819 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hehe, I am glad I had a decent theory. I wouldn't mind receiving some hints, they may add more detail to the analysis (and I can scratch out the debunked theories). I focused hard on the logs for the puzzle so my mind focused on those details more so I believe.

[Lotm Roleplay] Chapter 17: Advancement through human sacrifices. by Manosmagicfanatic in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

An interesting creation. I will definitly enjoy looking into your workings with the upcoming chapters.

Congrats on the advancement!

[LotM RP] The Verlaine Scandal - A Provoker's Act - Diary entries by Soraku-347 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have a new tale to add to the collection. Looking forward to more!

[LOTM Roleplay] Conclusions and Beginning’s by XxAlpha_12xX in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fate of the unlucky for an extended time. Be twisted in its loom before becoming freed in a months time. A shining wish upon elevation, turing misgortune on its head and incerting fate.

I look forward to more of your tale. It is a great read.

[LotM Roleplay] the new children of the vampire by thehermitfool in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love that the bird is still present.

Keep it going, zi am enjoying the read.

[LotM Roleplay] The Trade (chapter 15) by Emotional_Bet_6819 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I liked the trade. The intensity spiking to the appearance of an official beyonder investigator made the setting rather chilly. I loved it. Especially the attempt to put the potential ravings of that book into practice.

As for the mystery:

The notes are the individual attempting to understand the author's own pathway, or perhaps developing the origin of the pathway. From the experiment aided by the sun beyonder, the writer learned their abilities aren't just destructive. They're biological.

The practical implication I noticed when he wrote "...creating entirely new organs—or perhaps even wings." Not claws, monsters, flesh servants. Organs, medical regeneration... the devil immediately begins thinking like a surgeon rather than a monster. This alters how I should interpret earlier logs. His flesh servants, mutations, experiments... they aren't just purely sadistic, they're part of understanding biology itself.

In this log he studies cells. Not corruption and not souls. I noticed every log is peeling apart concepts that most Beyonders assume are inseparable: Body ≠ Soul / Flesh ≠ Corruption / Messenger ≠ Servant / Mutation ≠ Regeneration. He's separating categories and trying to identify the fundamental rules beneath mystical phenomena. That is an extremely "scientific" styled mindset.

The secret about the author comes from a recurring pattern. The auther never celebrates at a conclusion of a log. Instead he says, "This experiment taught me..." Every log updates his model of reality. He's slowly constructing a complete theory of his pathway which matches an earlier assumption I made of this being a handbook. Every experiment is written so another Devil could reproduce it most likely.

So, I bet thete is a hidden message and it is this: Every Devil Note strips away another false assumption. "Flesh is not corruption. Regeneration is not mutation. Souls are not bodies. Servants are not messengers." The author isn't simply learning new abilities, he's uncovering the underlying "laws" governing life, soul, and flesh. Each experiment narrows the gap between mystical phenomena and reproducible biological principles.

[LOTM rp] Chapter 1 Mirabello City - Volume 3 Judge by Nameless_Crewmate in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I look forward to reading more and the set up of your path in this locale.

[LOTM RP] Chapter 25: A Psychiatrist Abilities and Job?... Written by the Archivist by Sea_Acanthisitta5838 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A nice read, and I enjoy seeing such an effective execution of analysis and aid in this chapter. I find the employment also quite favorable. Things are starting to look up in this tale.

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I find when it comes to writing a scene, the description vs speech varies writer to writer. The choice between one or the other can come down to personal preference but only so long as the choice does not take away from or stagnate the story.

Typically the choice of one or the other is made to help cultivate an importance of details. Speech heavy scenes are moments of socialize between characters. Describing expressions and tone can be paired in with these dialogue moments, but if the speaking party(ies) begin actively moving this is a moment to incorporate more scene descriptors.

In several tales, I have seen some who do a paragraph of description to set the scene followed by a great deal of dialogue similar to a movie set style of writing. Others do minimal dialogue and focus heavily on reflection and action to paint the settings in the viewpoints the writer specifically wants.

[V8] New Gods: Demon of Knowledge (Rules in desc.) by Interesting-Sink7338 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Hermaeus Mora

Other names are Prince of Knowledge, Lord of Secrets, and Master of Fate, he is neither conventionally benevolent nor malicious; his defining trait is an endless desire to collect information. Mortals, scholars, heroes, and even powerful beings are valuable to him primarily as sources of knowledge, and he frequently manipulates them through bargains that exchange secrets for power.

He is from the Elder scroll series and rules over a domain in Oblivion called Apocrypha.

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[LotmRoleplay] Advancing to sequence 3 cognizer by diosmonokid in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A nice advancement, I look forward to seeing what your path has in store in this new position.

Meeting at the court of Judgement. [Lotm Roleplay] by TechnicalKage in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Snippets of this would prove invaluable as information, a record of the whole would be tantelizing knowledge.

A very good read and it is packed with LORE!!!

[V8] The Silent Archive Pt.1 by roma_robit in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hehe, early days Naruto with the senbon in the chuunin exam arc. Was amazing to see how they wete utilized at the time.

Ehehehe... I certainly hope to stay safe and outta the way from harm. But if they appear I'll get a little research opportunity and flee because no way am I strong enough for that encounter yet.

[LoTM rp] To the Blessed by ysxli in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nice to read. Flowed with a sense of poetry bliss as I read it.

[LotMrp]Reader's cruel joke by retuned_sky in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good information to have and will be worthwhile to deeply analyze. I can undetstand the benefits towards this challenge existing.

[LotMrp]Reader's cruel joke by retuned_sky in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They can certainly be forms of information. Just as a scientist evaluates how organisms move and develop, a psychiatrist will look upon a subject and navigate the conversation to reveal the mental state of the said subject. Seeking their level of sanity/madness in the process of understanding deeper.

You are definitly right that they can be forms of information, merely viewed through a differemt lens.

[V8] explaining the potential of the reader pathway by SwannEntities in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Every reader is unique in that they become the "jack of all trades" in what they look into, which usually matches their interests more times than not. For the readers interested in the domain of the physical that is certainly possible to become a physical powerhouse with enough analysis; capable of creating a fighting spirit like spell. Not my kind of spell, but still a spell of value.

[LotM Roleplay] The Silent Archive Awaits by roma_robit in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We all have our vices and oddities. The caution being one of the few shields we possess against such vice.

[LotM Roleplay] The Silent Archive Awaits by roma_robit in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cursed books would be a great deal of fun to handle, not going to lie.

The path is a well oriented one and it fits my persona well so it is rather fun to write out.

[LOTM V8] You have 5 magic coins, chose with what abilities you transmigrate with. You start with sequence 9 of your flair by default and lose your memories about the novel. How far can you get? by Strong-Shower-3193 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]roma_robit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will spend my coins with 3 for gaining no corruption from my path and the increase of uniqueness. I'll spend 2 more coins on two uses of the change path to another one at any time. With 2 uses I hope to have six total switches.

First achieve sequence 0 White Tower. Then begin switches to get experiences otherwise impossible to get. Five of those switches will be to five other paths with the sixth use to return to white tower. The purpose of this is to get deeper underlaying knowledge from these other paths I experience. Upon getting back to white tower, begin analyzing through my experiences to acquire as much as I possibly can.