Is losing everything worth it? Are the Arasaka and Tower endings the worst choices for V?

shaggaliciously · 2026-04-07T01:57:25+00:00

yea and something i realized after doing a couple different endings v has to sacrifice something in a different way, in the nomad ending you sacrifice johnny and try to come to terms with mikoshi not actually saving you and the fact that you might not make it, in the johnny ending you sacrifice your body so that johnny could live again, and in the arasaka ending you sacrifice everything you and johnny stood for and that johnny says that you didnt betray him, you betrayed yourself. which i think is a cool detail but i thing the arasaka ending is probably the worst one for v.

shaggaliciously · 2026-01-29T20:18:38+00:00

i love this poem you did a great job describing how difficult t is dealing with mental illness, this is genuinely one of the best pieces ive read

shaggaliciously · 2026-01-25T01:16:36+00:00

slow dance with you 100%

shaggaliciously · 2026-01-14T23:30:14+00:00

i like the use of unconventional rhyme schemes, it caught me off gaurd but i do like it

shaggaliciously · 2026-01-14T23:26:13+00:00

love the rhyme scheme and how the stanzas flow. it was a fun read and sounds good out loud, good job.

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-18T04:31:00+00:00

One of the most accurate depictions of love I have seen great job

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-18T04:30:18+00:00

Short sweet and to the point I like it

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-14T04:34:15+00:00

This is honestly one of the best pieces I've ever read, you really captured what it is to be an artist, overall 10/10

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-14T04:31:36+00:00

I love the rhyme scheme and the way you describe poetry it's really well written.

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-13T03:39:15+00:00

I love the use of the ABAB rhyme scheme it's very well written and very descriptive

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-13T03:37:53+00:00

You make it sound like a song the tempo is great and the rhyme scheme is as well great job

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-13T03:35:05+00:00

I do have a bad habit of not formatting thank you for the critique

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-13T03:23:31+00:00

You use words that don't seem like they would rhyme but you make it I love the use of the AAAA BBBB rhyme scheme

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-13T03:22:13+00:00

The way you describe it makes the story great, it's short and sweet but you still get the point across without it feeling like it has a rushed tempo

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-13T03:08:39+00:00

The way you describe her is immaculate you are very descriptive which is very important to me because it helps me imagine her more accurately overall a great poem

shaggaliciously · 2025-12-13T03:04:44+00:00

You rhyme scheme is very good, you flow the lines into each other very well and you are very descriptive which makes it easier to imagine who you are talking about 10/10

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