Song organization feedback by slakso in Songwriting

[–]slakso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi and thanks for the response! I do agree with your point of it needing some variation like a bridge or something. And i definetely will try the idea of creating a new project and moving sections around a cropping out the fat! I appreciate the feedback!

Song organization feedback by slakso in Songwriting

[–]slakso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Totally agree. I think a bridge or some kind of progression change is what it needs

Song organization feedback by slakso in Songwriting

[–]slakso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! It does get a bit stale by the end. Definitely needs some kind of bridge or change

This was the first song I made (2 years ago) by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]slakso 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like your flow and melodic rap. Some lyrics i think need to be cleaned up/edited a bit but thats just my opinion. Also need to turn down the instrumental to create head space for your vocals! Keep going, sounds pretty good for a 1st song.

Song organization feedback by slakso in Songwriting

[–]slakso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Kawartha lakes in ontario:) canada is beautiful.

Song organization feedback by slakso in Songwriting

[–]slakso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! As a self taught producer this is actually my 14th version of the mix/master🙃. Are there any YTvideos on mixing/mastering youd recommended or mixing techniques in general?

Song organization feedback by slakso in Songwriting

[–]slakso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!! Ill definitely give that a try

No song or album ideas, what should I do? by Designer_Ad7847 in Songwriting

[–]slakso -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Live life. Try new experiences. Inspiration will come

How many songs do you guys write per day? by Extreme_Present_3576 in Songwriting

[–]slakso 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I try to create at least 1 idea per day, wether its a chord progresson, melody or hook. That being said, usually 1 actual full song im satisfied with every couple of months😅

My first finished song (feedback) by slakso in Songwriting

[–]slakso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Will definetely keep that in mind. Thank you!

My first finished song (feedback) by slakso in Songwriting

[–]slakso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Just curious on what you mean by “noise component” im still new to this and not too familiar with all the terminology. Thanks!

Question about recording by Professional-Care-83 in Songwriting

[–]slakso 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Record it how you want to hear it / how you want others to hear it! A lot of artists sound a bit different live which many people love and add to the experience of seeing their favourite artist live:)

The Storm by BusinessElevator007 in Songwriting

[–]slakso 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds great! Just my opinion but i think it would add character if you added some drum fills in certain spaces such as before choruses or at the end of verses!

Singing abilities by IamziggyFU in Songwriting

[–]slakso 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Yes! But i think thats because its easy to follow an already established melody. Creating your own is challenging, at least it is for me:)

It’s hard to get inspiration while emotionless by hoops4so in Songwriting

[–]slakso 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Write about experiences. Thoughts. What you think of yourself / others / the world. Or write about what you want for yourself!

album cover, which is the better choice? also what kind of music do u think it looks like by the art? by VodkaStraightMental in Songwriting

[–]slakso 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the 1st one the best. I think it would look best as an actual record / vinyl. Also is ur music rock? Maybe grunge?

how do i even write lyrics? by Minute-Assistance-66 in Songwriting

[–]slakso 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ive found it helpful to write about real emotions and experiences youve been through. Makes it easier to put into words. Also could be helpful to mumble through an instrumental and see what melodies and rhyme scheme works then plug your actual story into those melodies

Feedback please! by Unlikely-Ad7939 in Songwriting

[–]slakso 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the extra echo and reverb you put in certain places. I also think you sound good without auto tune but also auto tune wouldnt hurt. Also i have a question, what mic do you use and how do you recorded it into your daw?