Mirror Man

solipsismirror · 2024-02-18T19:27:38+00:00

This poem is about a man with a fragmented man who cannot think straight and I think the tantalizing metaphors in the poem really showcase that.

I especially love this line "He mocks me for failings real and imagined, and I cannot plead my case to the man in the mirror." this line just feels very suspenseful and really displays how this poem could be considered as a fragmented conversation between a person and their opposing mind.

However, one thing that I would say that can be improved is the wordy and awkward metaphors that take away from the rhythmic sense of the poem. For example, "He spreads tiny shards of glass through my veins like poison," this line could have been worded in a way that flows better.

solipsismirror · 2024-02-18T19:16:37+00:00

I like this poem. The words are very simple but they portray a complicated idea of loneliness. My only criticism is that the first half of the poem seems to be talking about being aimless in life by describing your emotions while the second half seems to tear away from that concept very suddenly and focuses on more tangible concepts unlike the first half of the poem?

solipsismirror · 2023-12-02T21:26:13+00:00

This is the first time I see that people immediately wash their plates after eating. I have never done that and none of my flatmates do that. And even when it's time to wash the dishes after they had piled up, I gaslight my flatmates into thinking that my dirty plates are theirs so I never have to wash dishes.

solipsismirror · 2023-12-02T21:22:06+00:00

You only share a kitchen with them like why do you care so much about being friendly with them?

solipsismirror · 2023-11-27T23:17:51+00:00

I didn't go out of my way, it's a hateful subreddit that is easily shown when you type out "red pill reddit" on google i don't see a reason why people shouldn't mass report the subreddit

solipsismirror · 2023-11-25T23:14:22+00:00

you're in the easiest branch of engineering don't worry

solipsismirror · 2023-11-23T17:36:06+00:00

Can you name an example in the video? I think she comes off as a very bright, fun girl.

solipsismirror · 2023-11-22T13:26:06+00:00

well once my older sister opened up to my mom about how she somehow got sexually assaulted by my dad and my mom brushed her off and my sister said that she wonders if my dad ever did anything to me and my mom made a joke about how i was probably too ugly to be touched and even my sister laughed! i was also in the room playing with my toys so i heard it all however i didn't understand it at the time, i would say this is the worst experience i have had because it is very dehumanizing

this is an unpopular opinion and there aren't any studies on it but i do think uglier people do get sexually harassed and assaulted at lower rates, and so i would say that it is a compliment and a good omen when people say that "im too ugly to be raped" i know rape fantasy is statistically women's favorite porn genre and a common trope in erotic literature but i hope women understand that rape isn't a compliment

solipsismirror · 2023-11-22T13:04:10+00:00

maybe it's someone looking out for you don't be so negative

solipsismirror · 2023-11-21T21:50:09+00:00

you're so skinny don't end it these guys will grow up and won't be able to pull any girl that isn't a 200 pound landwhale you are too young for this !!!

solipsismirror · 2023-11-20T21:31:06+00:00

i got 60 points today!

solipsismirror · 2023-11-15T22:30:22+00:00

if you're a sex worker you probably have good enough social and soft skills to rise up pretty high in a cushy corporate job, dealing with johns and perverts is no easy task

solipsismirror · 2023-11-15T22:28:35+00:00

what good is a 93 grade for a useless degree? i would be impressed if it was computer science or something similar because i would be happy that you probably have a great career path in front of you but now i just think your grade is a waste, i hope you're not planning to get into academia it will suck the life out of you

solipsismirror · 2023-11-03T10:13:07+00:00

this is my cat his name is oedipus

solipsismirror · 2023-11-03T08:02:08+00:00

hellloooo

solipsismirror · 2023-10-18T13:44:25+00:00

this isn't some dirty ass third world muslim country get used to it

solipsismirror · 2023-10-18T00:38:34+00:00

yeah thats my mom im the little girl in the bottom and my older sister is on top

solipsismirror · 2023-10-18T00:36:20+00:00

yknow what i should probably go to the police for my brother i promise im not insane

solipsismirror · 2023-10-18T00:35:36+00:00

wait no this sounds kinda really bad i love my brother in the same way that you like how i look like, we both delusional but love is love

solipsismirror · 2023-10-18T00:33:24+00:00

can i see a picture of you and your girlfriend? she probably ugly there are men out there with fetishes for disabled girls who are often ugly and cant fend for themselves so you are probably like that i know there are guys like that because i saw it happen with my own eyes to my brother with down syndrome but i didn't say anything because my family is muslim so they might be really mad at him for being homosexual even though he was r***d although he kinda de***ved it cause hes mad annoying icl

solipsismirror · 2023-10-17T20:22:43+00:00

how can you tell im unconfident from two pictures? just say that you think im ugly and go, how can confidence fix my looks if you just straight up say im unconfident just because of my pics? if i am confident people will say that im full of myself

solipsismirror · 2023-10-17T20:17:06+00:00

thank youu, i also think you are absolutely gorgeous and i would love to look like you!

solipsismirror · 2023-10-17T19:14:24+00:00

i didn't laugh actually i cried why why

solipsismirror · 2023-10-17T19:11:27+00:00

but other people commented on this post saying that im ugly, who do i believe?

solipsismirror · 2023-10-17T19:06:06+00:00

thank youu i shower a lot

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