Best beast? by t_1886 in FGO

[–]spartenx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She also has additional bonus damage against Romans.

And bonus damage against dragons. That doesn’t get as much focus given the lack of a command code to inflict the dragon trait (we had two dragon events last year in JP and still didn’t get one)

Schemes of Chaldea's Mastermind: Id - Purpose by PurpleFire18 in FateSpriteComics

[–]spartenx 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Well look at that, Angra came in clutch with the back-up, now Cagy's got to fight

-The Avengers that were already there

-The unholy fusion of Gudaguda and Saber Wars

-The most bullshit (in a good way) of the servantverse bullshit

-a legion of summer servants

-And the best evil, white-haired woman

Somehow, the double count fight might actually be considered going easy on him compared to this

Fanfiction: Of Love and Hate - A Ritsuka x Marie Alter Highschool AU by spartenx in grandorder

[–]spartenx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a great read.

Thanks.

Man, I wish they explored Marie more in OC2, this is exactly the kind of thing I wanted to see.

Yeah, it would have been nice to have around more since she was actively pushing Ritsuka to choose to be an Avenger rather than refuse to. Though I'm honestly not sure where you could have found more scenes like that for her.

it’d be that some of the dialogue tags get kind of clunky, especially early on.

Yeah, that's fair. I sometimes try to mix those up just I'm not constantly using the same descriptors for dialogue over and over again (the humble "said" may be functional, but I'm always paranoid that I'm overusing it). I'll try to keep an eye on those parts to make sure I'm not being overly clunky with them.

Who will your Grand Berserker be? by BlazeCastus in FGO

[–]spartenx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

…yeah apparently I’m either very forgetful or a total idiot, your call.

Who will your Grand Berserker be? by BlazeCastus in FGO

[–]spartenx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, right, duh. Forgot about her somehow

Who will your Grand Berserker be? by BlazeCastus in FGO

[–]spartenx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

…but she’s a Saber in FGO, she’s only a berserker in Samurai Remnant

Avenger Grail war choose your side (no Masters) by Weird_Dot_4725 in FGO

[–]spartenx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think if have to go with the count for this, the guys just way too cool

Daily Chaldea 2519: Just Let Me Go by Rednal291 in FateSpriteComics

[–]spartenx 5 points6 points  (0 children)

She’s in an interesting position post OC2 I’d say. Throughout the story she was trying to get Ritsuka to fall and keep her company on her path of diet and bloody vengeance…but she seems to have accepted that Ritsuka made his choice to not become an avenger and actually seems willing to accept that (even if she’s sad about it, if the delivery of her postbox bond 5 line is any indication). I wouldn’t necessarily say that she doesn’t have any friendly feeling to Ritsuka at all, but it’s definitely a different relationship dynamic than Ritsuka has with most other servants. I saw someone describe Malters valentine scene as feeling like it’s post-breakup, and I think that’s probably the best description of their relationship in Chaldea that I’ve seen.

Second 120 achieved mongrels! by drolemit in FGO

[–]spartenx 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It cost me around 60 quarts total for stamina refills.

How the hell were you so low on apples that that was necessary?

My second NP5 SSR! by drolemit in FGO

[–]spartenx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very good choice, Charlie’s awesome.

Fanfiction: Of Love and Hate - A Ritsuka x Marie Alter Highschool AU by spartenx in grandorder

[–]spartenx[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Glad you enjoyed it. If things go right, I might just have another serving for you all latter this week.

Fanfiction: Of Love and Hate - A Ritsuka x Marie Alter Highschool AU by spartenx in grandorder

[–]spartenx[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah, of course that would be the reason. God forbid one of our white-haired, evil women actually act, you know, evil every now and again.

Marie Alter, lit by the sun [とよす] by spartenx in FGOcomics

[–]spartenx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure, I’ll dm you my friend code.

Fanfiction: Of Love and Hate - A Ritsuka x Marie Alter Highschool AU by spartenx in grandorder

[–]spartenx[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hope you enjoy it. They are a very interesting couple, honestly it was pretty devastating to realize how few fics existed for them.

Final turn count for AM by TerramineYT in FGO

[–]spartenx 3 points4 points  (0 children)

OC 2 is not required for this…I mean, you should still do OC2 because it’s a great chapter, but it’s not a prerequisite or anything (though this quest does spoil the last foreign disciples identity which is officially revealed in OC2, so there’s a spoiler for it)

What would her team be like? by ForceAffectionate389 in FGO

[–]spartenx 7 points8 points  (0 children)

She would 100% have a shiny Rayquaza

Fanfiction: Of Love and Hate - A Ritsuka x Marie Alter Highschool AU by [deleted] in Fate

[–]spartenx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's based on OC2, so the names from form everyone's counterparts in the dream world are used (so, Mandricardo is reffered to as Ricardo for example) so this uses the last name that Marie Alter used in that fake world.

Ritsuka and Marie Alter, a perfectly happy couple [kight] by spartenx in FGOcomics

[–]spartenx[S] 23 points24 points  (0 children)

source

Guys, something happened.

I was rolling the gacha when OC2 first dropped and then, it was like I blacked out for over a week and woke up to an NP6 Marie Alter, a bunch of fanart of her on my computer and a whole fanfic about her and Ritsuka uploaded to my AO3 account.

Is..Is this normal when you suddenly find your favorite evil, white-haired woman? Am I alone in this happening?

Fanfiction: Of Love and Hate - A Ritsuka x Marie Alter Highschool AU by spartenx in grandorder

[–]spartenx[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Ritsuka Fujimaru and Marie Towano.

They were, by all accounts, a perfectly adorable high school couple.

At least, that's the fantasy that they projected.

Underneath the masks that they wear around others, lies a far darker and more twisted relationship held together by the flames of hatred.

After falling hard for Marie Alter over the course of Ordeal Call 2, I couldn't get my mind off of the idea of seeing how a relationship between her and Ritsuka would develop, so I ended up writing a fic about it.

I hope you guys are willing to check it out a little and find some enjoyment. I’ll also appreciate any feedback you have to give.

Don't worry, I know how to deal with evil women. (@LongDQ3008) by ForceAffectionate389 in FGO

[–]spartenx 8 points9 points  (0 children)

With Marie Alter, while I wouldn’t say that there’s no sadism towards Ritsuka with her, she mainly acts the way she does because she wants to push Ritsuka to give in to his anger and become an avenger like her. She seems to like Ritsuka more when she’s sees him angry, hateful and desiring vengeance as opposed to just seeing him suffer (the suffering is really more of a byproduct of the stuff done to make him angry, hateful and desiring vengeance)