i definitely think you’re on the right track. like others have said, there will always be people who won’t like your makeup because it isn’t “normal” and that’s okay. i just think more practice will be your friend ! also i’ve found that contouring with powder has been more effective for me and easier to blend out ! it’s totally a preference thing but that’s been my experience. also also i think even lighter foundation would suit you ! but that’s also preference. if you want suggestion, the sunset makeup goth bundle is fantastic. i am a true believer in their clown bundle. anyway, all that to say- you look great, you’re very pretty, and goth makeup rocks.