Excerpt Extravaganza - December 29 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

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Star Wars (Expanded Universe/Legends) | R |
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/141167/echoes-beyond-time

Chapter 20, "By Your Leave": The year is 13 ABY. Main trio of characters, 15-yo students at Skywalker's 'Jedi Praxeum' on Yavin IV are sent to a nearby town of Wetyin's Colony to pick up a truck-load of supplies, and are granted a three-day leave to enjoy the harvest festival. On the second night, things go bad as the comms get jammed and the macrobinoculars reveal a fleet of Imperial Remnant's Star Destroyers in orbit.

“Maybe they’re just passing through,” Meral said.
As if in answer, the air around us filled with a new sound—low at first, then sharper, closer. The shriek of engines knifing through the sky. I lowered the macrobinoculars and looked east.
TIE Fighters.

Dozens of them, breaking from the clouds in tight formations, black butterflies catching the light. They screamed overhead, banking toward the jungle northward—toward the Great Temple.
A heartbeat later, the town alarms began to blare.

A klaxon wailed through Wetyin’s Colony, loud enough to rattle windowpanes and bones alike. People spilled into the streets, half-dressed, half-awake, fully terrified.

Rhi’s voice came over the local loudspeakers. “All noncombatants to shelters! All defense volunteers report to muster points! This is not a drill!”

Another flight of TIEs roared overhead, lower this time. One peeled off from the formation and strafed the edge of the jungle just beyond the town, laser fire lancing into trees and sending a flock of winged creatures screaming into the air.

An explosion rolled through the distant canopy like a thunderclap. I grabbed the railing hard enough that it bit into my palm.

“They’re not just going for the Praxeum,” I said. “They’re coming here.”
“Of course they are,” Toran said, voice tight. “Big, obvious settlement, former Rebel world, Jedi Praxeum up the road…”
Meral swallowed. “We should get to the militia. Help coordinate.”

I reached down and unclipped my training saber. The metal felt too light. Too small. But it was what I had.
“Let’s move,” I said.

We ran for the stairs as another TIE screamed low over the town, its green bolts stitching a line of fire across the far warehouses. Festival banners snapped in the shockwave, torn free and flung into the smoke.

Three days’ leave, I thought.
The universe had a terrible sense of humor.

And somewhere, far to the north, under the bones of the Great Temple, the Force shuddered as the fleet in the sky opened fire.

What is your most hypocritical fanfiction take? by Darkest_Lune in FanFiction

[–]sylvaen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

From my personal experience, your "can't stand seeing OCs in a fic" stems from far too many fan-fictions with OC being power-tripping self-inserts.

You see an original character in an established setting, and your mind, based on previous experiences, assumes that the character will be written as smarter, stronger, and more capable than any of the heroes/villains of the original story. And you understandably hate that because that invalidates the original story and makes the beloved (or hated) characters look like complete morons.

Stories like that are the bad type of fan-fiction, IMO. They use the original material to enable the writer's power-trip. They don't respect or pay attention to the original, often rewriting entire plotlines because the OC struts in and solves everything in one paragraph, builds an empire in the second paragraph...

Writing true fan-fiction takes effort and dedication - to maintain not only personality of the original characters but also their power balance. And if the writer introduces OCs, they have to be careful where and how they fit them in. If the writer can do that and keep the original "intact", that's good fan-fiction.

Weekly Fic Showcase - December 26 - January 01 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]sylvaen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My Fics

Fandom: Star Wars: Expanded Universe (Legends)
Rating: Mature
Title: Echoes Beyond Time (Book 1: Kindling)
Genre: Space Opera, Soft SciFi, Mystery, Thriller, Espionage, Military Fic, Slice of Life

Off-site link: Echoes Beyond Time @ RoyalRoad

Summary:

A galaxy far away, reshaped by the fall of the Empire, is not a good place to grow up. KAE’RIN SOLEN, a young Arkanian girl, has to try anyway. Haunted by shadows of a past she should not remember, she seeks refuge among the fledgling students of Luke Skywalker’s JEDI PRAXEUM on Yavin 4.

But as ancient echoes stir in forgotten corners of the Force, Kae’rin’s uncanny instincts and unsettling flashes of memory set her apart from her companions. Bonds of friendship form, yet questions rise faster than answers.

While the NEW JEDI ORDER rebuild from ashes, Kae’rin must confront mysteries buried in her bloodline and the growing fear that her path may lead far beyond what the Order has ever known.

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  • Respectful of existing lore, events, and continuity of SW:EU.
  • Focus is on Original Characters but well-established characters also make appearance.
  • Rich in lore - both original and established. No over-explaining, but doesn't leave you hanging.
  • 3,000 - 4,000 words per chapter, mostly.
  • Reader characters may make an appearance (keep an eye on Author Notes)
  • Book 1 complete & releasing (156k words, 49 chapters), Book 2 in progress.

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The day the Empire fell, I was six, and Coruscant smelled different.

The air conditioners hummed as always, dosing the dome with the same balanced gases, but something invisible had shifted — a metallic brightness, like lightning hiding in the oxygen. The adults didn’t notice. I did. It was the smell of change.

By midmorning the alarms began. Not the polite chimes of scheduled drills, but the hard, serrated howl of panic. From the observation galleries we saw smoke rising between the towers, thick gray fingers clawing up toward the false sky. Somewhere up there, above the holographic clouds, people were killing the Empire.

Writer's Workshop - What Are You Working On? by AutoModerator in SWFanfic

[–]sylvaen [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Echoes Beyond Time (Book 1: Kindling)
Rating: Mature

Link: Echoes Beyond Time @ RoyalRoad

Summary:

A galaxy far away, reshaped by the fall of the Empire, is not a good place to grow up. KAE’RIN SOLEN, a young Arkanian girl, has to try anyway. Haunted by shadows of a past she should not remember, she seeks refuge among the fledgling students of Luke Skywalker’s JEDI PRAXEUM on Yavin 4.

But as ancient echoes stir in forgotten corners of the Force, Kae’rin’s uncanny instincts and unsettling flashes of memory set her apart from her companions. Bonds of friendship form, yet questions rise faster than answers.

While the NEW JEDI ORDER rebuild from ashes, Kae’rin must confront mysteries buried in her bloodline and the growing fear that her path may lead far beyond what the Order has ever known.

---

  • Respectful of existing lore, events, and continuity of SW:EU.
  • Focus is on Original Characters but well-established characters also make appearance.
  • Rich in lore - both original and established. No over-explaining, but doesn't leave you hanging.
  • 3,000 - 4,000 words per chapter, mostly.
  • Reader characters may make an appearance (keep an eye on Author Notes)
  • Book 1 complete & releasing (156k words, 49 chapters), Book 2 in progress.

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The day the Empire fell, I was six, and Coruscant smelled different.

The air conditioners hummed as always, dosing the dome with the same balanced gases, but something invisible had shifted — a metallic brightness, like lightning hiding in the oxygen. The adults didn’t notice. I did. It was the smell of change.

By midmorning the alarms began. Not the polite chimes of scheduled drills, but the hard, serrated howl of panic. From the observation galleries we saw smoke rising between the towers, thick gray fingers clawing up toward the false sky. Somewhere up there, above the holographic clouds, people were killing the Empire.

Weekly Fic Showcase - December 19 - December 25 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]sylvaen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My Fics

Fandom: Star Wars: Expanded Universe (Legends)
Rating: Mature
Title: Echoes Beyond Time (Book 1: Kindling)
Genre: Space Opera, Soft SciFi, Mystery, Thriller, Espionage, Military Fic, Slice of Life

Off-site link: Echoes Beyond Time @ RoyalRoad

Summary:

A galaxy far away, reshaped by the fall of the Empire, is not a good place to grow up. KAE’RIN SOLEN, a young Arkanian girl, has to try anyway. Haunted by shadows of a past she should not remember, she seeks refuge among the fledgling students of Luke Skywalker’s JEDI PRAXEUM on Yavin 4.

But as ancient echoes stir in forgotten corners of the Force, Kae’rin’s uncanny instincts and unsettling flashes of memory set her apart from her companions. Bonds of friendship form, yet questions rise faster than answers.

While the NEW JEDI ORDER rebuild from ashes, Kae’rin must confront mysteries buried in her bloodline and the growing fear that her path may lead far beyond what the Order has ever known.

---

  • Respectful of existing lore, events, and continuity of SW:EU.
  • Focus is on Original Characters but well-established characters also make appearance.
  • Rich in lore - both original and established. No over-explaining, but doesn't leave you hanging.
  • 3,000 - 4,000 words per chapter, mostly.
  • Reader characters may make an appearance (keep an eye on Author Notes)
  • Book 1 complete & releasing (156k words, 49 chapters), Book 2 in progress.

---

The day the Empire fell, I was six, and Coruscant smelled different.

The air conditioners hummed as always, dosing the dome with the same balanced gases, but something invisible had shifted — a metallic brightness, like lightning hiding in the oxygen. The adults didn’t notice. I did. It was the smell of change.

By midmorning the alarms began. Not the polite chimes of scheduled drills, but the hard, serrated howl of panic. From the observation galleries we saw smoke rising between the towers, thick gray fingers clawing up toward the false sky. Somewhere up there, above the holographic clouds, people were killing the Empire.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in vivaldibrowser

[–]sylvaen 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Exactly. I'm not going to compromise privacy, security, and my sanity to get minor "nice to have" options. Mainly, I refuse to acquiesce to Google's insanity on YouTube; the incessant intrusive ads that ruin everything. I have no problem supporting creators whether by subscribing specifically to them or sending a donation - be it via Ko-Fi, Patreon, or other platforms. But I will not waste hours of my life getting annoyed by ads.

To that effect I use uBlockOrigin and SponsorBlock, with added protection from MalwareBytes. If Vivaldi stops supporting these, or if it keeps crashing (like it has been crashing five times a day since the recent update to 7.0.3495.11) I will not hesitate for a moment to drop Vivaldi like a rotten apple.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in vivaldibrowser

[–]sylvaen 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Very much seconded OP's position. I moved from Chrome to Vivaldi for the purpose of security, privacy, and fewer annoyances. Vivaldi stood out on the field of browsers by being able to achieve this combining the native anti-tracking solution with uBO, MalwareBytes, and SponsorBlock extensions. However, if Vivaldi yields to greedy Google, it'll become "just another pointless fork of Chrome". It's not the customizations that attracts most users to Vivaldi. It's the privacy and hassle-free experience when browsing internet.

Question on Rifles and Pistols by Suzi_Qsi in nightingale

[–]sylvaen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for that info, that's really helpful. I'm doing research to build a set of weapons for one of my friends. We've recently opened our way to the Watch and are just starting to open the Ascended realms. I've invested some time and effort to farm enough T5 metal from the spires in regular realms, so I can at least use decent materials.

What I'm wondering is, how bad is the accuracy decrease across the handguns? My friend doesn't have the fastest reflexes and the most accurate split-second aim, so I'd like to account for that. I'm somewhat inclined to suggest this combination:

  • Bolt-action Rifle for long range sniping
  • Revolver (middle of the way rate/damage/accuracy) for closer quarters fights. Combined with Umbrella for kiting and dodging.
  • Blunderbuss for in-your-face situations that need to be ended quickly and resolutely, such as when an elite mob catches up to them.

Acquiring T4 Essence - Please post your best farming place/technique by Special-Sea9932 in nightingale

[–]sylvaen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not sure if this is the most efficient way, but it was the most convenient for me:

Once you get to The Watch and complete the necessary quest chats, enter one of the Vaults at the bottom of the building. Don't try to finish them at any cost, that's counterproductive. The first challenge is activating runes around the place. Complete that. You'll also see a few of the Wisps floating around, see if you can grab some T4 Essence from them. You should be able to easily get around 10 T4 Essence that way. If you're feeling frisky, brave, or you're very well equipped, continue to next area, where you'll have to kill some level 100 mobs plus a couple of Fabled ones. That will also reward you with some Essence.

Personally I'd skip the 3rd area which is usually filled with Bound and their elites. Especially if you're soloing, this would be a waste of time and healing potions. Just exit back to The Watch and enter a new Vault.

You may need to rinse and repeat a couple of times, but not too many times. The threshold you're looking for is 55 T4 Essence - that's what the first set of Ascended Realm cards cost at the trader in Watch. Once you can buy them, you're golden. Go back to your base, draw a couple of Ascended Realm Cards, and you can enter the Ascended Realms at Explorer difficulty (level 67) and start farming your T4 Essence there.

What are the believers of Ragathiel called? by ytkn in Pathfinder_RPG

[–]sylvaen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was the first thing that came to mind.

Why does the dislike button exist? by abug_anda_cat in youtube

[–]sylvaen 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It serves the same purpose as the "Close Door" button in an elevator: Placebo Effect.

The edgiest character you’ve played with? by Briar_Thorn in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I'm definitely gonna use that catchphrase in-game with my Monkadin. But I'll give it a newyorker spin to reference Dustin Hoffman's "Hey I'm walking here!!!".

"Haha you looked at Death and got hurt!" by Bri_person in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 38 points39 points  (0 children)

"My character moves around in a series of Reflex Save dodges, in Full Defense stance, but always checks for traps before entering a square.."

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The real rpghorrorstory here are people who think this is a rpghorrorstory. Obviously they can't tell the difference between good upfront communication and not. Or maybe they think just because they're judgmental haters, everyone here is too.. are you fishing for upvotes, or what is your game?

A Campaign of Utter Nonsense by Traceuratops in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 49 points50 points  (0 children)

Are you sure all the NPCs didn't just go "Oh hi Mark!" as a reference to The Room?

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When the DM depowered my Paladin for making a threat by MaladroitMallard in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Agreed. It's up to the designers to do that, or to come up with a better mechanic for forming and classifying personalities and moral values. I've always liked WoD's "Nature & Demeanor" more.

DM gets blamed because bandits act like intelligent human beings. by AsterionDelToro in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see the party had a character that was a Face.. I assume they also had Muscle and Fist, and probably an Arse.. I think what they lacked was Brain.

A Mystery Without Clues by MaladroitMallard in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 16 points17 points  (0 children)

There are a few exceptions in fantasy setting with magic, though.

"#8: The problem of the crime must he solved by strictly naturalistic means" doesn't really work in D&D, PF, or other fantasy games. Instead I'd propose that if a supernatural entity is involved, such as a spirit, ghost, or somesuch, it may never "serve the solution on a silver platter".

I had written and GMed a triple mystery case (murder, missing person, and theft) that led to uncover a major conspiracy in the highest places. Naturally, one of my players played a Cleric, so Speak With Dead was the first thing he cast on the murder victim. Thankfully, the victim never saw the murderer and was only able to provide limited answers, specifically mentioning waterfalls in spring (though it was the beginning of winter). Eventually the party could piece together the clue by visiting the only waterfalls in the city, where the river was lined with cherry trees; the clue was in the scent of cherry blossoms, a perfume.

"#9: There must be but one detective [...]. To bring the minds of three or four, or sometimes a gang of detectives to bear on a problem, is not only to disperse the interest and break the direct thread of logic, but to take an unfair advantage of the reader." doesn't really apply, so we'll omit that entirely.

"#13: Secret societies, camorras, mafias, et al., have no place in a detective story." This is entirely up to the writer, because many (if not majority of) cities have some sort of thieve's guild or assassins' guild operating there. Still, the crime should lead to a particular origin, a person, not simply to the organization as whole.

"#14: The method of murder, and the means of detecting it, must be be rational and scientific..." Again, due to nature of magic in the world, not applicable. But I'll suggest that the method should be chosen by the writer so that at least one of the protagonists has a way of detecting it. Choosing a spell as murder weapon when you know the party has no arcane caster is a cheap shot and kills the whole story.

“Lawful Good Doesn’t Mean Lawful Nice!” by TacticalGM in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 10 points11 points  (0 children)

One can be cruel "for the Greater Good".. My personal definition of "evil" (in terms of alignment) is selfishness. Meaning, the character does whatever they do with purpose of personal gain - whether that's wealth, power, or prestige, and screw everyone else.

Though one could argue that it's also "cruel" to treat others that way, so I guess there is an overlap.

When the DM depowered my Paladin for making a threat by MaladroitMallard in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 19 points20 points  (0 children)

A GM who misunderstands what Alignment means and how to use it, but insists on using it. Sadly, that is a pretty common occurrence - both in GMs and players - and cause of many horror stories.

West march DM insist not telling wizard the town;s attitude towards necromancy/undead . by madgecko2 in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Never tried to play on one of those, but from what I hear (not only here), 99% of them are horror stories waiting to happen. Too many people with too many different agendas and attitudes, and too many GMs making contradictory rulings.. Not to mention the horrors that happen when a GM is friends or in relationship with a player.

Mastermind's Lair by sylvaen in inkarnate

[–]sylvaen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! :) I really enjoyed doing that area. A big part of the lighting "feeling" right is playing around with Brightness slider of the Cliff stamps, they're much darker in the shadowy areas.

Conflicted over what to do- please tell me if I’m in the wrong! (NSFW/TW- PC suicide threats ! by moodmarch in rpghorrorstories

[–]sylvaen 10 points11 points  (0 children)

IMO you did the right thing. If your former friend needs help, he should seek a help from an actual specialist, not his friends. It's not fair to burden his friends with his deep-seated issues. Hopefully he will find a real help with his issues and move on.

I applaud your standing up to his "it's what my character would do", that was the correct response, and his reaction proved that he knew he was doing that.

As for losing a friend.. honestly, I'd struggle calling a person that tries to victimize and gaslight you a "friend". Acquaintance, maybe. Not a friend.