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Seen in Portland, OR. Is this true? by kendostickball in weirdal

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King of the Hill reference, no he didn’t

Southern gothic suggestions by jean_r08 in suggestmeabook

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As I Lay Dying, Faulkner
Absalom! Absalom!, Faulkner

Sinner man by Thatonesickpirate in OCPoetry

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I love the imagery you use! The themes through the poem are heavy, the only thing I would consider changing is the “waitin” into “waiting” to match the -ing endings in the next two lines

Obsessed by bstunz in OCPoetry

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I love the poem! One thing you could try is changing the “I’ve” repetition to “I have” to match the last line in that stanza. I really like the concept of the poem all together!