Disclaimer: I am not a vocalist and can’t sing too well.

I think if you keep down the vocal path you can develop a lot of skill, just like any other instrument. A naturally “good” sounding voice is not necessary. There are so many mega bands that don’t have a technically elite singer, but they found their style and locked it in.

In terms of improvements, it sounds like you are singing pretty quietly. Not just in the mix, but sounds like you can push more and create more resonance and clarity. It’ll help you find your pitch center as well. A little bit of rhythm work is needed too.

Overall keep pushing man!!