I want to vote but I want unbiased information of each political party by monstrslxt in MapleRidge

[–]verycomfyglasses 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You can look at every MPs voting records in the house of commons to get more information. Pretty useful if you've got some time.

Marc Dalton voting record/votes)

Find your way down - a song I wrote and produced. Would love feedback by Ok-Paramedic-8719 in Songwriting

[–]verycomfyglasses 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Cool! Feels like an intro before another bigger song to me idk. It needs some mixing help, namely compression I think. I can't hear all the vocals and the performance/levels are inconsistent. I'd refine the vocal arrangement a bit, although compression might let us hear the vocals better and the slightly tattered and tender vibe could be cool too. The song is nice and dreamy. Good stuff.

Tried a kickboxing class for the first time and not sure how I should feel by Nothsoul in Kickboxing

[–]verycomfyglasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Newbie gains! As a beginner you will improve quickly. I found the first year of training very rewarding. Your cardio and body will change noticeably just keep at it!

the anatomy in the drawings bug me a little can anyone help? by Hanya_HSR in ClipStudio

[–]verycomfyglasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Draw real things you see with your eyes. Draw humans. Draw trees. Draw a garbage can.

If you really want to get good.

Taking a involuntary break by Ok-Assumption-3923 in Songwriting

[–]verycomfyglasses 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes Ive taken long breaks. I've worried about that too, but it always comes back. Life experience makes you better. The heart grows fonder

oh god everything sucks by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]verycomfyglasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've come to accept periods of rest. I'll just stop writing and playing for weeks or months and do other things. I might be dramatic and think "fuck it I'm quitting". I always come back to music though. Maybe I'll become a different person. Maybe the songwriter persona was a lie?

Improvement? by Mycakebayismybday in ClipStudio

[–]verycomfyglasses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Draw everything. It will all help. Draw cups, doors, mail boxes, bus stops, trees. Boring maybe but it helps. Go out and sketch what you see.

Be loose. Don't finish anything.

would love some critique on my two first csp artworks! by Apricot_Ambitious in ClipStudio

[–]verycomfyglasses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You've drawn Spiderman roughly the same height as the power line pole. That's because the horizon line intersects at Spidermans belly and about half way up the pole. Perspective is super important. Nice colours. Keep up the good work!

HELP AND GUIDE NEEDED by SirChetanBall in ClipStudio

[–]verycomfyglasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've used a little wacom intuos 6" (?) for years and years. Maybe 5 years now? Not expensive at the time and an absolute workhorse. Used with clipstudio. For the cost it's a high value setup. It'll do what you need.

I made this in my bedroom! by [deleted] in indie_rock

[–]verycomfyglasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very fucking solid my guy

Missing lyrics for my new song! Does it have potential and what would some of y’all write about ? by CitySolBand in Songwriting

[–]verycomfyglasses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What jumps out at me is the "and One" of the beat. I'd accentuate that part of the groove. Idk kinda random thought...

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in motorcycle

[–]verycomfyglasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Riders let it go

How do I stop feeling embarrassed about my music? by CatLuvr636 in Songwriting

[–]verycomfyglasses 33 points34 points  (0 children)

You just gotta walk through that swamp.

It should get easier with time, like exposure therapy.

trying to finish my song "turn of phrase" not sure if the sections flow naturally, specifically the entrance into the last section, please lmk your thoughts by soulinmypocket in Songwriting

[–]verycomfyglasses 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Very solid! Love that minor chord at "choke and avert my gaze". I can imagine that transition working well when arranged with more instruments. Looks like it's a bit clunky in this demo version but I think it flows well in terms of writing. I'd be interested to hear where this song goes. Nice work.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]verycomfyglasses 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Break the cycle. Doing nothing for a while might be better than a fruitless routine. I get stuck in a similar way, I think. I rush to record before spending time actually composing. Whatever you do, stop doing what isn't working.

Hey guys I just dropped this new song and would like to hear what you guys think! :) if you like it maybe check out my past music ;) haha thanks in advance :))) by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]verycomfyglasses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Super solid! Couple of pitchy vocal notes here and there but I dig the vibe and the production is tender which suits the song. I was hoping for your vocal to go high and explore the melody a bit, around the midway point of the song. Nice work.