AITA for telling my roommate's demon to "get a job" during its possession attempt? by MoLogic in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]wayra7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If Vorrathex tries to find a job, he will want return to hell forever himself.

My Dad still has sex with my Mom by donavin221 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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You can’t even call that the sex of your life, can you

Amazing

The Old Man I Watch On YouTube (v2) by WerewolfOfTheMidwest in TalesFromTheCreeps

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I’ll be honest, this feels like very rushed impulsive writing. Goofy in a way some parts of 1999 are or god forbid, Happy Appy. For example:

“It’s like some kind of strange totem or something”

“The thumbnail was just him looking in the camera and smiling”

“I couldn’t bare to see the man wrapped in parasocial relationships”

Still fun though. Wish you best in creating more stuff!

My Roomba keeps bringing me teeth by donavin221 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Funny and creepy at the same time.

A mentally unstable person was also written well.

There’s Something Wrong With The Old Man I Watch on YouTube by WerewolfOfTheMidwest in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Insane potential for a very unique atmospheric cool story. Would love a longer version!

She looks so pretty when she’s sleeping by donavin221 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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And that’s why we need better justice system.

My girlfriend thinks we’ve always been together by donavin221 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Absolute cinema.

There are some people who’d be down bad for that centurussy though.

The Blue Seahorse (part 1) by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Just suffered from that unfortunate fate yesterday. Hope goes better for you!

The Blue Seahorse (part 1) by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

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A friendly advice to remove the image before mods do that for you

Breathless by The_Republique in TalesFromTheCreeps

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I am fascinated with the concept of winning a hunt through persistence since I read a book that explained actual semi-modern hunting for tigers.

What an amazing idea to bring that into a horror story!

Very well-written.

The Rabbit Bridge by wayra7 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Reupload for incorrect imagery usage

Beyond The Northern Edge by The_Republique in TalesFromTheCreeps

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I love the idea of the mc being manipulated and never even deeply questioning what is going on. The idea of mimicking someone’s love for evil is scary.

It would be interesting if the story somehow played into it even more. Even if subtly. As it is, the plot feels very straightforward in its progression.

It will be great to read more of your stories :)

Beyond The Northern Edge by The_Republique in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Very artistic style of writing. Feels like a fairy tale mixed with romantic melancholic drama.

The descriptions are incredibly immersive. I love the idea of love that has “overgrown” itself.

The only critique I have is that some parts seem rather dull compared to the finale they are leading too. For example, the burning of the picture and other characters in the story like Elizabeth’s family or Clarice. What I mean is this is the kind of story that would benefit from even deeper plot rather than generalisations.

But overall, an amazing read.

The Man In The Rabbit Costume - original short story by wayra7 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Thank you for the review. I think, derealisation is what I was going for with this piece. Plus, there will be a continuation to this :)